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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice n unique concept
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
It's a unique concept...
Please continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Oh dostana type! Wel,lks intrstng...I wnt mind in rdng it dr...Cntinue sn.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Luv the concept ... Pls continue soon,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oke before starting this chapter i want to say something , i'm gonna show simmi that kind of girl ( dostana ) plzzz don't take me in a wrong way , it is just for fun , i have never read that kind of concept on IF so thought to write about it , if you feel that may be you are gonna hurt , i will not mind if you don't read, because i really don't want to hurt anyone and to people who have support me thank you sooo much it means a lot me -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
next day after pajama party in sharon's house
taani and simmi , both were in college , walking in corridors , in opposite direction . simmi was busy with her phone and taani with her files , she was wearing same dress as in goa track and than suddenly they both clash , taani's file fell down
taani bends down to pick her files
simmi - ( fake angry ) yeh kiya taani hamesha tum kuch na kuch ghalat karti rehti ho
taani got angry and she stood-up
taani to simmi - ( angry ) dekhiya agar mujhse ghalti huwi hai toh aap ka bhi kasoor tah
but simmi was just staring at her
taani to herself -( confuced ) yeh simmi mujhe aisa kyon dekh rahi hai
taani to simmi - tum mujhe aise kyon dekh rahi ho
simmi came back to her sences
simmi - woh kuch nahi
taani - oke i have to go
and taani leaves
but simmi turned back to see taani
simmi to her self - ( smiling + blushing ) aaj taani kitani pretty lag rahi hai , waise itana buri bhi nahi hai sweet hai , agar main koi ladkha hoti na toh taani ke saath kuch wrong joh mere liye right hota , woh kar deti , haye koi toh rokh lo , ab aur control nahi hota , she is freaking hot man
suddenly simi realize that she said something strange
simmi to her self - ( confuced ) yeh kiya hogaya mujhe main aisa kyon soch rahi hoon , but yeh pehli baar nahi hai , kiya ho jaata hai mujhe taani ko dekh kar , aisa toh maine khabi kisi ke liye feel nahi kiya kahi mujhe taani se pyaar toh nahi ho gaya , nahi nahi simmi yeh kyia soch rahi hai , tu toh nil se pyaar karti hai na chall ab canteen mein chall sab wait kar rahe honge
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simmi enter canteen she saw everyone only rey was left
simmi to gang - hi everyone
gang - hi simmi
simmi to gang - sab yahan hai where is rey
swayam - taani ke saath projector room mein
simmi - ( shocked ) what !!!!!! is waqt to projector room mein koi nahi hota
sharon - toh tum kyon shock mein ho
simmi - kuch nahi bas aisa hi
simmi to herself - ( sad ) is waqt projector room mein koi nahi hota , pata nahi dono kiya kar rahe honghe akele
simmi's weird dream
rey - taani aaj tum kuch zaida pretty lag rahi ho itana pretty aaj din tak nahi laghi
taani - ( blushing ) kya rey aap bhi kuch bhi kehte hain
rey - ( smiling ) kuch kehna ka nahi , kuch karna ka man kar raha hai
taani - ( blushing ) toh kar li jiye na maine kab mana kiya hai
rey - ( smiling + husky voice ) agar bedroom hota na toh tumse pooch tah bhi nahi , pata nahi kis kis tarah se tumme main kiss karta , waise yahan koi nahi hai , dil kar raha hai bina wedding ke wedding night menao , woh bhi aggression wali , aaj toh koi mujhe stop nahi kar sakta tumme , above 18 waala love dikhane se
rey started to kiss taani's lips
simmi - ( shouting very loud ) nahiii !!! aisa nahi ho sakta tum sirf meri ho
simmi came out of her dream
and gang was in big shock everyone in canteen was looking at her
rinni to simmi - ( confuced ,shaking simmi's shoulder ) simmi are you alright
simmi- ( in panic ) haan haan main theek hoon i... i'm fii... fine kuch nahi huwa mujhe
vicky - tujhe kuch toh huwa tah , or kaun sirf teri hai
simmi - ( shouting ) aisa kuch nahi bas kuch soch rahi thi , tum sab bhi na
simmi to herself - ( scared ) yeh main kya soch rahi hoon , nahi that is swron but apni feeling par control kaise karoon mein , taani ko rey ke saath dekh kar mujhe acha nahi laghta , pata nahi woh duno kya kar rahe honge
nahi mujhe dekhna hoga kahi kuch ho gaya toh
simmi to gang - ( in haste ) i have to go bye
rinni - are simmi suno toh kaha
neha - ( confuced ) isse kya ho gaya ?
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i'm not sure about the next part so plzz if you are under 16 it's your own risk if you want to read
in the projector room
taani to rey - ( worried ) yeh dekho na rey plug ko kya hogaya switch mein toh koi problem nahi hai
rey - ( confuced ) toh tumne mujhe is liye bulaya hai
taani - ( angry ) rey aap bhi na maine aap ko help ke liye bulaya hai , or aap mujhe questions pooch rahe ho , ab pc kaise on hoga
rey - oke sweetheart side par jaon mein plug ko switch mein daalne ki koshish karta hoon , waise yahan bohat garmi hai t-shirt nikaal deta hoon
taani - rey ab shirt nikaal ne ki kya zaroorat hai
rey - ( naughty ) don't worry dear main aisa kuch nahi karongha main ek aur shirt peheni hai
taani - oow toh isi liye aap ko garmi lag rahi hai ,
rey - ab main try karloon yaan kuch aur bhi kehna hai
at the same time simmy came , but she saw, that the door of projector room , was closed so she decided to stay behind the door , and listen to their conversation
( oke in the next conversation taarey will be in projector room and simmi behind the door so don't get confuced )
taani - ( worried ) rey yeh ander kyon nahi jah raha
rey - mujhe kya pata main kaunsa yeh sab everyday karta hoon
taani - ( angry ) aap ladke ho kar yeh sab karna nahi jaante
rey - taani i accept i'm a boy bat har ladke ko , yeh sab karna nahi aata , main atleast isse daalne ki koshish toh kar raha hoon
simmi - ( shocked ) yeh rey kya andar daalne ki koshish kar raha hai, iska matlab joh maine socha tah wohi ander ho raha hai
taani - ( angry ) plzzz rey aap ko dekh ke aisa toh nahi laghtah ke aap ne isse , pehle yeh sab nahi kya
rey - ( smiling ) dekho dear pehle yeh sab karne ke liye tumne mujhe bulaya and ab khud angry ho
simmi - ( sad + crying ) yeh sab karne ke liye taani ne rey ko bulaya hai , maine kabhi nahi socha tah ke meri small town girl aisi hogi
at the same time rey stamped on taani's foot
Taani - ( shouting in pain ) auch !!!!!
rey - ( worried ) i'm sorry taani woh maine galti se kar diya
taani - ( angry ) ab kya rey mujhe dard ho raha hai
rey - ( worried ) sachi mein sorry taani , yeh sab pehli baar kar raha hoon na , is liye aadat nahi hai , next time dekh ke karongha ,
taani - acha acha theek hai aap pehle isse andar daliye
simmi to herself - ( shocked ) taani ko dard ho raha hai and yeh abhi bhi andar daalne ki koshish kar rahe hai , how cheap
rey - ( smiling ) taani waise tum angry hoti ho na tab bohat cute laghti ho
taani - ( angry ) aap ko yeh sab kar maza aata hai
rey - ( smiling ) is sab se kisi maza nahi aaye ga
simmi to herself - ( crying ) pata nahi is rey mein aisa kya hai joh mujh mein nahi , ke taani isse pasand kari hai
rey - i think hole kuch zaida hi small hai , isliye andar nahi jah raha ( he mean switch-holes )
simmi to herself - ( shocked ) what taani ka ,woh small hai
taani - toh isse badha ki jiye na
rey - main kaise kar sakta hoon , yeh toh isse benane waala ka kaam hai na
simmi - ( sad ) oow toh yeh hai rey ke paas joh mere paas nahi hai
waise sahi toh keh raha hai isse benane wala means god he isse badha kar sakta hai , but ab woh bhi late ho gaya hai ab kuch nahi ho sak tah , kaash taani tum mere saath hoti toh yeh sab thumare saath nahi ho tah , yeh sab karne ki koi zaroorat hi nahi hoti
rey - ( happy ) maine andar daal diya
taani - ( smiling ) challo aap se yeh toh huwa , warna i was scared ke humara future kaisa hoga
simmi to herself - ( crying ) kaisa hoga taani ,thumare or rey ke bache ( kids) hoge iske baad ab ho bhi kya sak tah hai
rey - challo yeh kaam hogaya shall we go now
taani - haan but pehle aap ki t-shirt to wear karlo
simmi - ( shocked ) whatt rey ne apni t-shirt nahi peheni thi but is ki liye sirf jeans nikhalne ki zaroorat hoti , ( crying ) matlab rey ne taani ko sirf niche se nahi upar se bhi dekha , i hate you rey , chall simmi ab jah yahan se ab kuch nahi ho sak tah
and simmi left from there
tani - waise acha huwa joh plug switch ke andar challa gaya , itana try karne ka baad hi sahi but ander to gaya , thank you rey
rey - anything for you sweetheart
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simmi was in her house she was crying badly
simmi to her self - ( crying ) i love you taani , i really love you , aur yeh bhi nahi pata kab se , but main kabhi yeh accept nahi karna chahti hi , isi liye thumare against rehti hoon, backbitching karti hoon ke kisi ko pata na challe
but ab nahi pyaar kiya hai toh kiya ab tum bhi mujhse pyaar karoghi , mere pyaar mein itana taqat hai ke main tumme rey se alag kar sakoon , ab tumme meri hona hi hoga
the end
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oke i was really scared while writing this , to be honest i did not my 100% best , i wanted to end this asap so that i can update my other story's , so i will end this here i'm sorry everyone but plzzz understand
so egs and tomatoes are welcome today
Edited by Tahira-2013 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
haila tahira dii it was soo hilarious yaar🤣🤣 mera pet dard kar raha hai dii omg dostana part 3 lolzz poor simmi nd taarey yaar jinhe abb voalag karegi hehe😆😳 loved it diii mazae aaye best tha smmi ki imagination😆 and plzz update asap😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Omg tahira ...i am not really sure how to react..it was really good but it is the first time i am reading something like this..but it was very well written...great job...

P.s i was lol-ing the entire time...loved it..update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
tired now
will unres very soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
🤣 🤣 omg Tahira this was hilarious I can't stop laughing lol. Aww poor Simmi, u see the consequence of eavesdropping lol. Taarey were too cute. I love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one read only till simmis dream and loved it.

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