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casker

@casker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

Welcome back😊.

Awesome update.

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#822

Originally posted by: adventure_roks

u were right in ur previous comment...i really like the easy going relationship between aman and khushi...
and as for vaishu...a father person is absent in her life...she doesnt know about a father...but when she sees arnav, i think she got the positive vibes and really wants him in her life...maybe thats the reason...
they are keeping it a secret because it might come as a surprise for khushi later...

I get the reasons u r explaining to me here...but still... as a reader i feel it should be explained a little within the story...maybe u can show it from vaishu's POV...

Well i m just saying...since u r the one writing the story...u wud be knowing better if it's the right time to focus on tht in the story...so chill...whatever i may say, decision is yours! 😉

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#823

thts fantastic part dear...

well written ...

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keetha...

@keetha...

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#824

wow..!!!! yar it was outstanding
awww... finally finally it happend yepieee...
kushi finally opened her heart ...
at last the happy cute family is formed
egarlly waiting 4 the next part

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#825

Ok..i know u mst hv got tired of hearing this agn and agn...but i wud still say it AGN... i really really enjoy the way u put down an easy camardrie between Aman and khushi. I simply love it. liked the teases too. :)

Ok...i just read the latest update...and i take back the words i wrote i said in my last comment... abt re-explaning their Arnav-Vaishu's relationship...Infact, ...*Whoosh*(trying a li'l bit magic to erase my last comment of ur memory)...so did u forget? ;)

Liked the way Khushi finally joined the dots and reached a decision abt Arnav. I even liked more...tht she feels Arnav deserves better...and what i loved most of tht scne ws tht she said- " i will try to be one who u really deserve". A self-induced and constructive thought tht was!

Enjoyed the confessions...more of Arnav's...especially the one line- 'I deserve u. the childlike Khushi who is hidden beneath the mother Khushi". Beautifully written!

building up some trust lines between love birds han? i liked the way u wrote abt 'wanting to share yet not abl to' side and the conrasting...'will wait to hear only from you; part. good job there too.

i liked the overall update...! its good to see u finally writing bk here! And i m happy i too made bk to IF just in time :)