Swaron/Tanha SS- Revenge - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
So it was all due to shivam..
Sharon slapped him..good

Now majnu swayam is back
Wow

Update soon
Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
awesome update!!!
so Isha isnt a bad character!
nw we get to see the majnu swayam back in action!!! yay!!!
so sharon is the employee n swayam is the boss still sharon gets to have the diva attitude and swayam decides to have his assistant attitude!
the reverse situations really dont affect the couple do they?
continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
nice update 😊
please PM me next time 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Amazing SS

luved every chp

finally MU has solved

I really luving sharon POV bcz swayam did trust on chivaam nt on hr

Let c swayam wht vl do he has mke gr PA nw

M wondering did Really ISHA has accepted or trying to b a NYC in front of swayam



If possible plz pm to me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Hey...nice story...nice update...pls pm me nxt tym...i thought u forgot abt this ss...but happy u are continuing...thankyou for that...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Please update this FF too.😃😃😃. Beautiful storyline. I enjoyed reading their fights and when the Romance is supposed to start you stopped updating. Please do start writing again..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Yaha par bhi tyo update karo

Jaldi se
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Hey, Update this FF too. 😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

PART-7

Sharon's home

Door bell rings and she opens the door

Swayam:good morning

Sharon:tum?...i am sorry aap yahan

Swayam:good morning

Sharon:good morning sir

Swayam:I know aaj tumhara off hai but kuch urgent kaam tha

Sharon:kya

Swayam:may I come in

Sharon:yeah

He look around the house .it was very small apartment(not Sharon type) and he felt more guilty now

Swayam(in mind): I am sorry sharon tumhari life ke itne bure phase mein mujhe tumhare sath hona chahiye tha but main...i promise Sharon main tumhari life ki sari problem khatam kar dunga

Sharon:sir...sir

Swayam:haan...uncle I mean your father nahi hai kya

Sharon:nahi...aapko unse kuch kaam tha kya

Swayam:no...I am getting married

Sharon: congratulation sir

Swayam:thank you congratulation to you too

Sharon:what

Swayam:bride ko bhi wish karna banta hai na

Sharon:stop it swayam

Swayam:finally tumne mera naam toh liya waise tum mujhe kuch bhi kaho I love it but jab tum mera naam leti ho out this world feel hota hai ...bahut acha lagta hai jab tum mera naam leti ho sunddenly apna naam bhi acha lagne lagta hai jab tumhare mu se sunta hun ek ajeeb si feeling hoti hai .pata nahi isse stomach ache kehte hai ya stomach pain...

Sharon:shut up

Swayam :kya hua siren

Sharon: how dare you...

Swayam: bloody loser or bloody weakling say na siren I missed all this

Sharon:please sir just leave right now

Swayam:tumse gussa kyun aa rha hai...kahin kuch yaad toh nahi aa gaya

Sharon:you are crossing your limit

Swayam: tum meri hone wali wife ko toh janti hi ho toh uske liye sari shopping tum karogi dresses ,jewelry everything and my house...uss bhi tum renovate karogi ...according to my love...my siren .she is diva toh sab kuch uske standard ka hona chahiye

Sharon: it will never gonna be happen

Swayam: it will happen soon

Sharon:what do you want

Swayam:you

Sharon:kabhi nahi

Swayam:tumne pehle bhi yeh kaha tha phir tumne mujhse pya...

Sharon:kyun kar rhe aisa

Swayam: you know my answer but you wanna hear from me then its ok because I love...

Sharon: stop what you think haa yeh sab karne ke baad bhi main phir se... I am not that stupid

Swaym:woh sab ek misunderstanding thi jo clear ho chuki hai then why I love you and I know you love me too

Sharon: I don't love you

Swayam: I know you love me

Sharon: I don't

Swayam:you love me siren

Sharon:kyun kar rhe ho yeh sab tumhe jo prove karna tha woh tum kar chuke ho phir ab kyun...ab kya prove karna hai tumhe ki main itni stupid hun ki main abhi tumse pya...Isha... usne humesha tumhara sath diya or tumne aise hi bhi chod diya tum kabhi kiske nhi ho sakte...wait a minute tum use kaise chod sakte ho tum toh use pyaar karte ho .now I get it yeh bhi tum dono ka koi plan hai

Swayam:what plan

Sharon: phir kyun kar rhe ho yeh sab... oh toh tumhe isha se jo chahiye tha woh toh tumhe mila gaya par mere sath toh tumhe chance hi nahi mila so tell me swayam your place or mine.actually abhi ghar par koi bhi nahi hai lets start

Swayam:Sharon

Sharon:par yeh ghar tumhare status ko match nahi karta so I think hotel room is perfect right

Swayam:Sharon stop all this

Sharon: I am ready but only a one condition tumhe yeh sab non sense band karna hoga ok.so tonight

Swaym:Sharon are you out of your mind

Sharon: hotel ka address send kar dena agar koi or demand ho toh bhi bta dena

He grabbed her by her shoulder

Swayam:how could you

Sharon:common on swayam jo dil mein hai uss kehne ki himmat bhi rkha karo .main toh waise bhi ek easy girl hunt oh tumhe shaadi and all ke plan karke apna time waste kyun kar rhe ho.jo karna hai karo and don't worry yeh tumhari last opportunity nahi hogi tum jab chaho mere sath...

He couldn't take it anymore and he slap her. Both have tears in their eyes.

Swayam:tumhe lagta hai ki main...kaise...kaise soch liya tumne

Sharon:acting karna band karo tum kya ho main janti hun...issi liye job di thin a tumne mujhe toh ab kya problem hai I AM ALL YOURS

She was hurting him beyond the limit

Swayam:I am sorry...meri wajah se jo kuch bhi hua hai...maine jo dard diya,tumhari insult ki ,tumhara time waste kiya,,iss book ko phir se khole ki koshish ki inn sabke liye I am sorry and most important mere pyaar ke liye I am ...really sorry .ab kabhi tumhe mera face tak dekhna nahi padega.

And he left

Sharon: and I also don't wanna see your face I hate you I hate you swayam shekhawat

Kriyansh home

Kriya:relax swayam

Swayam: I am so cheap ki...

Rey:swayam Sharon gusse mein thi aur tu janta hai uss jab woh gusse mein hoti hai toh kuch bhi bolti hai

Swayam:woh mere bare mein aisa sochti hai rey

Rey:yaar hum gusse mein kuch bhi bolte hai...tune bhi toh uss gusse gusse mein easy girl kaha that ha naa but you don't mean it right..look swayam ek baar uss chod kar jaa chukka hai aur result tere samne hai ab phirse tu use kaise chod kar jaa sakta hai

Kriya:tumne Sharon ko easy girl kaha ...kab

Rey:that's not important

Kriya:what tum kisi ladki ko aisa kaise bol sakte ho

Swayam:kriya woh sab college time ki baat hai

Kriya:isse kya farak pdta hai par tumne uss aisa bola kyun

Swayam:galti se...

Kriya:aise kaisi galti kar di

Swayam:kriya tum uss time college mein thi tumhe nahi pata ki kya hua tha

Kriya:whatever swayam tum...bloody MCP

Swayam:what

Rey:BAATCUTTER...listen iss incident ke baad hi swayam aur Sharon relationship start hua tha that means Sharon bhi iss baat ko bhool gayi thi usne maaf kar diya tha swayam ko

Kriya:par yeh...

Rey:baatcutter iss topic ko baad mein discuss kare warna swayam phir se chala jayega

Kriya:ok

Swayam:thank you rey

Rey:ab toh iss control karne mein PhD kar li hai

Kriya:par woh iss wajah aisa behave nahi kar sakti jabki soch use aisa hi sochna chahiye but...

Rey:kriya...woh swayam ke bare mein aisa kuch nahi sochti hai

Kriya:may be par usne yeh kaha hai toh koi reason toh hoga na

Rey:woh sirf gusse mein thi

Swayam:nahi Rey kriya is right.sharon gusse mein thi irritate thi whatever par usne yeh sab kyun

Kriya:shivam

Swayam:shivam?

Kriya:shivam ne woh letter or MMS se tujhe Sharon se dur kiya toh shayad usne Sharon ke sath bhi kuch aisa kiya ho jisse woh tujhe nafrat karti hai

Swayam: I will kill him

Rey:kaise...woh yahan hai nahi woh India chod kar chala gaya hai

Swayam:tujhe kaise pata

Rey:tune jab mujhe shivam ke bare mein btaya tha tab gaya tha mein uske ghar tab pata chala ki woh out of country chala gaya hai

kriya:shit ab kya karenge

swayam:sharon...tab toh Sharon hi bta sakti hai ki kya hua tha

Rey: no use bahut baar pucha tha use ki tum dono ke bich kya hua tha par usne kuch nahi bataya

Kriya:but ab situation different hai swayam bhi wapis aa gaya hai toh shayad

Rey:I don't think so

Swayam:ek baar try kar please...sirf ek baar tu uska best friend woh tujhe hi bata sakti hai

Rey:ok bu twoh bahut ziddi hai I don't think so woh kuch btayegi

Kriya:try toh kar sakte hai naa

Rey:yeah I will talk to her

Plz hit the like tab and I am waiting for your lovely comments.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Wow!! What an update. Beautifully written. I had forgotten about this FF. Hmmm. Now Sharon has to come out with her secret. I loved their nok jok.👏
Please dont wait too long to update. 😃😃😃

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