SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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@guggu

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

Why did you have to end it there? Why??

This was so well written - every emotion that you described came out just perfect!

Please please continue soon. 😃

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toblerone

@toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#712

i loved this update 👍🏼but uff, arnav is making khushi feel so low and insecure about her looks..he needs to tell her how he really feels about her..i hope devi maiyya's plan works out!!

what was aman going to say?? was it anything urgent?? 🤔

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Skiran

@Skiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#713

Awesome.. Loved it 😊

Arnav's restlessness to see Khushi and the perfect
dialogue : 'kya kar diya Khushi tumne mere saath..' were simply superb.

Khushi walking on stage and falling in Arnav's arms
It reminded me of the first Arshi scene in the show but a better version of it 👏

Arnav is so much in trouble now for 'average Indian
woman' thing he said on stage, didn't mean to show her
low but as Devimayya said these two are the masters in screw ups..

Eagerly waiting for the next ( fireworks ) update 😳

Edited by Skiran - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#714

I really loved your take on the rampwalk plus falling in his arms scene.

That was really well written. I also liked the way Arnav handled the situation.

Khushi is bound to be upset. Arnav needs to explain his feelings for her in a better way to her.

Waiting to read the next part.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

Loved the chapter and how you have woven the ramp walk along with your story.

ASR's presence of mind made a folly into a stunt.

It was too good!

Looking forward to the next update.

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

OMG

what i say i don't know

you bring old moment back a strong one and gripping one

ramp walk

first fall

eyes lock

Shivering

means everything except asr anger

why u do this ? i m missing arhi like hell and you do this

Arnav Singh Raizada gives no importance to feeling emotions heart but his lemon his forbidden fruit change the course of his life change the pace of his life

Khushi still in pain because she's not from his world

she's not his type

that's hurts alot

she understand his words with different meanings and he wanted to some other meanings of his words

average traditional indian woman

khushi doesn't feel bad about this seriously please don't take it your heart

now they need to talk

They need to settle things

devi mayyian kuch karo iss baar :)

i m going to dead meat because of waiting for next chapter

thanks for updating this soon

i m not expecting but you will

thanks alot

big wala hug

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

Wow that was an amazing and fantastic update, written perfectly.

Poor Arnav was getting so agitated and frustrated as he could not see khushi anywhere,

Bless khushi she is still quite disheartened by remembering Arnav's words,

Wow love the fact you included khushi walking down the ramp and falling into Arnav's arms, beautiful moment and written brilliantly.

Khushi was upset by Arnav calling her a average woman, eager to read there confrontation in the green room.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#718

Awesome update.. Really enjoyed it

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mssj

@mssj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#719

Great update. Arnav should really clarify. Hahah. Feel so bad for khushi.

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#720

I could literally visualize the whole thing...amazing update and love the twists and turns you bring to this FF

Cant wait to read the next part

Thanks for the PM

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