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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

How could you...How could you even think of something happening to Arni Chaitu?I was so happy when CVs rather chose to end the show than showing him dead..I just can't take it...That much I love ARSHI...

That was truly so heart wrenching...You really have so beautifully elaborated her condition...each and every word is worth chosen and being at that exact place...The first para itself brought pools of tear in my eyes...I could feel every emotion you portrayed here for Khushi...I could imagine Arnav standing outside window when Khushi was closing it. And I could literally see her beautiful eyes filled with hope, uncertainty, love...and many other which I am not able to describe in words here..And Arnav standing there ...helplessly knowing what he has to do and he has no any option left...

I am just unable to write anything further...My hands are cold , throat is dry and mind is numb to think about anything...

But Don't even think of separating them again this dreadfully pleez...or I am not going to read it ...I really can't take that thought...😭 BAS!!

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

OMG what a well written OS...

Wonderful narrative and the scenes of arnav and khushi were so poignant.

Am so glad that i read this one, but i hope you won't be offended if i say that i am glad that i didn't see this in IPK..

Liza

P.S: Is 'Ghost' a favourite movie of yours...

What's cooking and this OS had flavours of it..😊

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

NO, NO ,NO...u can't just kill Arnav and make him bid adieu like that,...that's heart-wrenchingly inhuman. 😭 😭 😭 but i liked the emotional quotient and the imagery u used.

thnx 4 pm.

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

awsum shot.

each nd every emotions r potrayed beautifully...

superb job 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Lovearshi

@arshi-Lover

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

please dont separate them i cant bear it feeling like crying... 😭

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

I'm liking this more because of how well this is written and not because I like how it ended. Sad endings make me 😭 and this one just broke my heart 💔.

It didn't even matter that nothing was explained as to why he had disappeared for so long or what happened to him. I am slightly itchy with the curiosity but I think that part doesn't really matter. If you decide to extend it into an SS, perhaps then but the SS still won't have a happy ending :( Perhaps some closure for Khushi, though?

Anyways, this is a beautiful OS. Again, more because it touched me and not at all to do with the sad ending :(

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leena

@aleena.1884

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

gosh im still crying while typing this.
u cant do this man.
he died. oh lord. im still crying.
it was so damn emotional.
i shudn't have read this really..

but i must say hats off to you.
ur talented.