ArHi FF: Finding Solace-#6 *Completed*

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#791

I loved the update…it was written very beautifully..Conversation between Arnav and Shashi was excellent.

Loved the way Garima forgive Khushi and got agree for the wedding…

Loved the way she explained her that it will be hard for her to be a mother of Arya…Arya is so cute…I loved her when she asked Garima to say Yes for the wedding….Very intense update…

Now Aman has a secret, let us see what's next…

Most awaited chapter…

Cheers for the PM.😛

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Finally cought up with all the chp loved all of tham mostly loved chp 27 loved how you showed the emotions of arnav wait for the next update ps pm me :) x

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dimple288

@dimple288

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Amazing update.

Finally, the truth was out.

Omg! La! What a creature she is.!!

Arya is lucky that she found her other in khushi.

Poor Arnav .

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#794

This was one exceptionally well written update, yayy they are getting married and finally we got to know about La & Arnav's hatred towards Shyam. It was just awesome. My fav line was "Please Say Yes, Nani" 😊

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Vicks

@Vicks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#795

Saiyu,

As usual - a wonderful update, I must say!
And the story is really gathering momentum...I can feel my adrenalin rush and my heart beat faster after seeing this update :)...
Will next update expose Anjali and Shyam to Arnav? Will Arnav get over-angry and show it on Khushi?

I think it is just a sad case of two good human beings, being on opposite sides of the same river. (River being Arya)...I think one half bridge will be Anjali and the other will be Khushi...This will cement the relationship between them...
Somehow I feel, all it needs for them to get together is a common factor - Arya being in trouble...

I feel you are taking the story where Arya will get into some trouble and it would need the combined efforts of Arnav and Shyam to sort this out...Probably NKs relation? Someone?
If I am wrong, sorry :)

But I am super thrilled and looking forward to seeing my cutie pie in the update soon!

-Vicks

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#796

fab update...

nicely written..

such a long update..

thanx for the pm...

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john-angad

@john-angad

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#797

very effective test by shashi, both fathers put their children first

poor payal akash are facing the flak for actually making arnav khushis marriage take place!

lavanya was one determined woman...can understand arnavs resentment but he will resent khushi for not telling him abt shyam

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#798

Part B

Loved how the relationship as progressed with time and Khushi wants to date in a manner similar to her colleagues and friends...so Khushi like !

Poor Akash and Payal still being punished although their punishment was pretty funny...for all that they did! I loved that he willing to go through any kind of marriage form her sake and she just wants to be with Arnav and her Arya and foresakes the big fat wedding for her need to be with her family.

Shyam M Jha...have not figured him out as yet, did he fall in love with Anjali so take back his interest in Arya, did he perhaps get to know the truth about his sister ( the fake pregnancy and finally her eloping with NK ) from Anjali so took back his claim, was this somehow a premeditated plan of his to trap Arnav along with his sister? Which now he is continuing through Anjali? Is this connected to the envelope in Aman's hand?

Something is going on...

Loved now the first thing Khushi thinks of seeing Anjali and Shyam is what Arnav will feel once he finds out, remembering how he reacted when she met him and here is Anjali pretty clear what and who she wants, even at the cost of her brothers anger and unhappiness.

Am not sure why Shyam was pushing Khushi by saying she does not anything about him ? Does Shyam want Khushi to know about Lavanya? How would that benefit him or what would it change ? Is there more to that story! One that would have a bearing to Khushi and Arnav's life? Or did he just want her to know that Arya was his niece ?

Loved how he tells her about his parents his past loved the use of the dialouge from the show and love him opening up to her and loved your description of her hug with him like she wanted to squeeze out all the unhappiness and sadness from him, seeing him vulnerable and totally exposed in front of her she does what he needs from her ...her comfort and her acceptance !

I loved them both post marriage sitting and talking, we never did get to see many such scenes, and her asking abt his wife before her and his response that she is his only wife he knows! That was so perfect, summed it all up for me!

Loved the entire saga about Lavanay and her selfishness and how Arya came into being, although everything happens for a reason, if not for La, there would have not been an Arya and then Arnav and Khushi maynot have met...

But am glad Arya has been kept away from all this, she deserves happiness...

Loved how Khushi cannot think beyond the disappoint and betrayal Arnav is going to have to face on finding out about his Di and Shyam...

In the beginning I thought this Shyam was a good person, but figured he had some connection to la, but did not leg him down as a and guy, just some misunderstanding, but now hearing the past and his threats...and then those stopping and him getting together with Anjali, Arnav's weakeness cannot help me doubt him...

I loved the lace of this chapter and how things just happend, without a fuss, suddenness they were a date, and now they are married , in perfect sync with each other ...

Brilliant brilliant ...loved how you wrote the many emotions and feelings that they go through, hope Khushi is able to tell him about Anjali and Shyam or else all hell will break loose when he finds out and that Khushi new, it will hurt his ego and pride too!

Hope this does not create any issues for them...and finally what is in Aman's hand...pictures if Shyam and Anjali or Shyam's envolvemen in the La incident ?..

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#799

Finally Arnav & Khushi got a nod from everybody..

La in your story is too bad.. worse than Shyam in the show..

Par kahani me naya twist? Hope Arnav doesn't hurt Khushi again for no mistake of hers.. he has done that too many times in the past..

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#800

That was one long update and a nice one too.

When Arnav and Khushi resolved their difference and came down, loved the way Arya went to them and her reaction was very endearing. Squirming in Arnav's arms to be in Khushi's was amazing and for Arnav it was something that he never even thought about.

Shashi test was also good one on Arnav as it showed how much level headed he was!

Akash and Payal though did things to help their siblings they were sidelined. But once the truth comes out after marriage I think they would be forgiven.

Shashi telling the family that his responsibility towards Khushi is much more greater than Payal was quite touching. Garima's statement that even the punishments meted for right reasons will be gossiped as ill treatment was also very true and it'll be there all through their life.

Mamaji's querries are all very relevant and very much needed.

Mamiji's and Buaji's talk to Akash and Payal are very much within their rights and they are duty bound to voice those out.

Khushi showing Arnav's mom's payal and telling that her's being given to Arya shows the love shared by Arnav-Khushi-Arya clinching the issue with Garima.

Nani showed she really was Arnav's Nani in cutting deals. Shatir dimaag! Who got it from whom I wonder!

Change in Arnav to do as per Khushi's wishes was absolutely wonderful for her and it was really good that Khushi saw Anjali and Shyam together and connected the dots. She was quick to decide what action to take and Shyam's advice was timely.

Now she knows Arnav needs her all the more when Di tells him that she is in love with Shyam.

The story of Arnav's past is also quite touching and the birth of Arya was quite sad! Lucky she has Arnav for a dad who dotes on her. Now she gets a mother who adores her.

Khushi understood why Shyam went all quiet on visiting rights as he would become Mama as well as Phupaji to Arya. Now it will be the bombshell explosion that Khushi has to bear the brunt when Aman tells his boss about Anjali-Shyam connection.

Loved it. Looking forward to the next update.