ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T3(CH 13-18)LINK 2 T4

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

keyboard123

@keyboard123

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

amazing update! so wish they would pursue it more!! can't wait until the next update!

Quote

zupi

@zupi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#572

U know i was yesterday thinking about this fiction and telling my friend about it and u updated it

ur an awesome writter

i have read all ur fictions they were alll so awesome

all the parts were awesome

gosh garima fell into shashi arms lol old people *rabba ve*

so khushi told him that they met before

arun died woah

lovely updates

they kissed yeah😳

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Loved all the updates!
Arun's murder was a such a shocker!
Loved that Garima's decided to move on
in life!
Shashi and his family seems interesting!

Aakash and Payal's first encounter was funny!

Finally the cat's out of the bag and Arnav knows that
he hurt her all those years ago! His apology was
so sincere and sweet! And the kiss was the
icing on the cake!

Will wait for more!

Edited by damonzlady - 12 years ago

Quote

ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

It was a beautiful journey right from chapter 12 up till 17...
Their relationship seemed to be progressing well...
I loved the way Arnav stood as a strong pillar for Khushi on her father's demise...
Garima needs some love and happiness in her life...
Will Sheetal improve??????????have doubts...
Akash's first meeting with payal...muah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she is furious and he bowled over...waiting for more...
Arnav and Khushi seemed to have undone all that they had built...They are very aware of each other...wonder who'll take the next step to improve things...

Quote

irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

loved the updates...loved how payal started screaming when akash kissed her...hope the misunderstanding that garima is a servant is cleared up soon...and arnav and khushi kissed...😃...finally...waiting eagerly for the next updates...

Quote

Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

So much has happened? arun died? and arnav and khushi are suspects? wow! there's a shock?

and the kiss, oh the kiss! hayeee, dill khush kar ditta.

Quote

rusticreet

@rusticreet

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

and they kissed :)...makes me so so so happy

Quote

kushigowda

@kushigowda

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

arnav giving access to penthouse was good thing😊
shashi catching garima and thinking that she is maid,payal noticing her fathers flirty behavior but in a good way superb😃
akash kissing payal and she screaming the hell out was LOL😆
arshi😲 why people think on behalf of others???khushi and arnav thought arnav/khushi wont give a shit to their kiss??😡
common yar you both like each other😳