| VirMan FF:Burning Touch|NO PMS SENT #Chapter 5 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Wow awesome update,...
Tbanx to disha yu updated...
WTH virat is sooo annoying he didn't support his bestie how cud he his name was more imp for him...
Mqnvi is right she has full right to hate I'm dnt forgive him ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Menzena


Will they? Well we'll see.

And hawww, ek toh update karo upar se taane suno. Not fair Disha.

Virat is only a jerk until you find out what actually happened between them. The face-off? I haven't even thought of that yet. But right after my exams, I will one update after another. Next update: 5th June

And I wish they could get cancelled,*I would literally die of happiness if that happened*

I am glad you liked it though since I did update for you.

and p.s. only if you think it is



just wait n watch😛
haww...it's u who wanted criticism.ok.from now on no criticism.😛
it is brilliantly written.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
really nice.virman are soo adorable in teen ages.
but wat happened😲
more twists.plz continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Ths fic is just fab. The story line is great. The way u show there teen luv was just amazing. Plz do pm me whn u cont.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Wow...
Superb...
Want to next soon...
Bt after ur exams...
Best of luck for this...
Nd if u can do pm me next times..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Brilliant update 👏 👏 👏
I think sid misbehaved wid her
Anyways waiting 4 faceoff
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Juz read both parts...awesome updates👏👏👏...really really nice...loved it ⭐️⭐️...two bestfrieds who loved each other in childhood...now hate each other...really interesting...😃...the flashback parts were superb👍🏼...n the virman romance n the dance...hayye😳...zip wala scene😉...virat is naughty😉...❤️ it...beautifully written⭐️⭐️⭐️...par us raat exactly howaa kya😲...virat shouldn't have said those to manvi...this is so😡...his ego...aarg...now waiting for their face off...really brilliant👍🏼...really excited to read next part...will be eagerly waiting...😊...if possible plz do pm me whenever u update...😊...
All the best for ur exams👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
waiting for their face off!!!😆😉
wanna knw what happnd that day >>>>>>>>>...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
awesome u written so he want purpose her but that night turn different direction and they became enemy and they hate each other and there ego came between them but what happen that night update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
really lyk the concept of ur story
read both parts nw n really cnt wait to find out wat happened between them that such strong friendship turned into unconditional hate
plz do pm me wen u update 😊

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