4/1/14-Arshi SS-Your's Crazily-Chapter 10-Page 65 - Page 25

Lovely update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved the way way you used both the fairylights and the pool scene with Arnav opening up with Khushi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Devi Maiyya's role is superb!!!!!!!!!!!1

I really love dis part...

Originally posted by: pari_goyal

loved it...

Thank you. 😊

Originally posted by: raws

i just love this story and devimaiya part

Thank you so much yaar. 😃

Originally posted by: pmehra300

Amazing chapter

Loved it

God the kiss so unexpected but it was just perfect

Can't wait to read more

Please update soon dear

Thank you yaar.

Reading response to the kiss I think I should have waited two more chapters for it. 😆 😛

Originally posted by: samia19

awesome update

Thank you. 😊

Originally posted by: aashi12

RES..:D

-edited-

this update was beautiful!

the first scene, from our IPK itself and it did set the whole update on fire!

"like really"..? heart patient? and "like really" for his di's sake?

how long can these dumbos fool themselves, declaring the feelings that they have due to one or the other stupid reason!

"HP ji" you are soo dead! dude, why can't you not interrupt!

he's doing the job of Anjali and Aman, it was them who used to break most of Rabba ve trances, and here this single HP ji is getting on my nerves.. declared this poor man needs a break , so that he stops interring in all these passionate moments!

and then, what follows pain, is Love! as it fills up the hurt!

Arnav opened up to her, wanting comfort and peace.. and she happily obliged, letting him feel better..

PS: i thought when Devi maiyya cries, it rains over earth😆

PPS: i love your DP, all shades of BS!😉

Your commentwa always makes me ☺️ & crave for more. 😳

You are an angel. 😊

Back to comment...HPji ka definitely kuch toh kareka pari. 😆

Arnav always showed his vulnerable side to Khushi & She being soft hearted always melted before him seeing his pain.That's our Arshi.Right?

PS-Devi maiyya has kept the rain for her next 'plan' 😉

PPS-My DP is when Barun had hosted Star pariwar awards. ☺️

Originally posted by: Arshi-Nikita123

Read all the 7 parts in a go.

Superb SS !!

Loved it..

Simply mind blowing...

Update next chapter soon.

Thank you so so much for this lovely comment. 😃
Yep you are angel.

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

No worries, Arnav v knw u r doing dis 4 Di, nthng else...

Lyk really... 😉 😉 😉

I'm in luv wid Devi Maiyaa whose plans r perfect, she herself is lyk Khushi...

Poolside light scene reminded of d original shw... Hw I ws enchanted during tht scene...

Mango Cake??????

HP, u better stop interrupting otherwise Devi Maiyaa se ke kar tumhara intezaam hi karana padega... 😆 😆 😆

Talking 2 Stars n wen Arnav shared his pain wid Khushi ws 1 of my fav scene 4m d shw n u used it Perfectly here...

D hug ws soothing n d kiss ws Passionate..

Luvd it... Muahhh...

Like really???😆 yep.😛

Mango cake is Barun's favorite yaar.Don't you remember??😊

Sab log poor HP ke peeche naha dho ke pare huye hain.🤣 seriously kuch karna padega. 😆

you are my angel too.Lobs you dammit.😳

Originally posted by: Aisha1996

Read all the parts in one go

Awesome SS

Update soon