Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#4, Epilogue-p27 - Page 10

Doing it right got a new meaning!! Just as ASR got a new one too!! Fabby update rasgulla! You know I love your work and this one is no less!! Totally loved it

omg man
they never did it did they
poor arhi they were the only ones who didnt get to do IT
and they were looking so forward to it
they should have started backwards for sure
but no thats just not them
and there payash go and have their SR over an over
poor arhi man
so frustrating it can be i tell ya dear
and just their luck no sex man
uff that must be real frustrating for them
and by the looks of it they wont be ever be able to do it right
haiyye my heart went for them
gosh this was seriously hilarious throughout
just the epilogue now
cheers for pm

I love the Aakash Payal couple and their kinky sex. Trying to imagine these to doing it was fun.

awesome...
loved it...
so they are done with their marriage..
now...w8ng for suhagraat..!!😃

I hate you hate hate you... They were this close to doing it and Di has to to come as always inbetween

Res..

Res :)

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What an apt title for this collab..doing it right! Definitely doing this right...well except for our dear Arnav and Khushi. They haven't done it right yet😆

Saiyu, we all know what a fabulous writer you are. I'm so glad you wrote this last chapter! It was hilarious and so witty.

Anjali Diii, why the interference?! I'm laughing at loud thinking about her expression upon walking in on those two. It's in her nature I guess to walk in on important moments...at least in this way the wedding was finalized! Quite fast too...😆

Ahhh, the rasams. All backwards, reminded me of our show. The teasing and flirting...😳 Gotta love ASR!

Payash...where do I even begin with these two🤣 God, they are crazy which is exactly why I love them so much.

Poor Arnav and Khushi, never get to do it. And Khushi turned to Devi Maiya in the midst, to thank her?😆

Cannot wait for the next part, so happy that Juhi is writing the epilogue. I know she will be amazing :) Juhi, will we get the A.S.R in the next one??

Great job Saiyu! And thank you for sharing the link.😊 I'm so glad to have been a part of this awesome collab with all these fabulous writers, it was SO much fun.

What a superb ending to Amazing suhaag raat...tooo good..will miss this ff :(

what a brilliant last chapter...must say Payesh rocked ...Sarita(Sa**ta Bhabhi)😉 cracked me up...had a laughing feast while reading this chapter...just the thought of a sub Akash and dom Payal is hilarious...

Poor Arnav he had to go through all the rasams to do it right and then Di's water broke..what a shame...hahhahahhaah...chotey chotey chotey remimded me of BHatiya's vedio on " Khushi Khushi Khushi" ..

Looking forward to Juhi's Epilogue...