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arjuhi5

@arjuhi5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

wow intresting m eager to read its 1st part plz update soon...

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arjuhi5

@arjuhi5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

n plzz pm me whenever u update i might b busy but i'll definitly like to catch this story whenever i get time...

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anju

@anjusr06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

waiting 4 update... nice title :)

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saranya

@Sarah_Jothi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: amus5
omg saranya ... i really like this title more than the prev one 😳👏

the prev ... frankly was way tooo long and confusing 😆 but this is perfect.. 😃

and the teaser and char sketch ...just gud...

thanx for the pm...pls continue soon...eagerly awaiting the next update...

btw who was in coma (la or khushi) 🤔 if la y dont u put her permanently in coma 😈

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permanently in coma... my god..u so loving her it seems... 😳 just kidding dear... 😉

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saranya

@Sarah_Jothi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

updating in a while ... 🤗 thnks fr such a wonderful response over here...

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saranya

@Sarah_Jothi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

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Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Me first on your first chapter I knew it! I knew it! I knew the first chapter would be an awesome one & I guessed right🥳

I loved the beginning part where you describe the state of the present Raizada mansion contrasting with the past. The way you have penned down the words were brilliant, mind-blowing.

The choice of words you used to describe Arnav's present state is really good. I really want to know what happened in his life, which made him stone hearted like this.

As far as my sixth sense says, I think the girl is Lavanya. And I think Arnav doesn't want his Di to know that her sister-in-law is alive or something like that.

It was a fantabulous update👏

Anyway this story is full of mysteries, & I love mystery stories😆

I am already eagerly awaiting for the next chapter😳

Plz update soon😉

Edited by V3Od - 12 years ago

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

res

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wah! so well drafted..

seems dark already by the style you used!

who is this 'she'?
is it Her? :p

waiting.

Edited by kuts - 12 years ago

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vaju

@vaju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

res😳😳

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unress😳😳

loved the banner

loved the chapter

how cau u??

mend ur words

in such a way

so that

u can inbuilt

such an eagerness in the readers, towars ur works

jaiyahooo saran baby

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hey both are so mysterious to me

i can't even study for my exams peacefully

banner :

why arnav is like that??

what is the story behind him??

what is that which is there in his eyes

is they are in

anger??

pain??

if so

who is responsible for it??

chapter:

what is arnav- nani talking abt??

who is that girl??

does arnav hate her??

from where she is related to RM??

where is she working??

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so say me

how can u expect me to study

if i touch my book

all these thoughts are haunting my mind

plz saran baby

have some mercy on us

update it soon

Edited by vajram - 12 years ago

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Hey this is going really good ... for the first chapter, there is a secret/mystery and i wanna know what it is ... am quiet demanding sometimes ... lolz ... anyways can't wait to read more ... Please update as soon as possible ...

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