Smitar's OS 2:FindingKhushi#4 Part18(1)Pg130(10/4) - Page 21

Great updates! 6 months, Ladki in? lol ;) Looking forward to it very much :D

hmm.. 6 months friendship... lets c how he handles her now..

read this story from the start :))
loved it
thank u for writing this
beautifully written
love this arnav

Congratulations on the new thread!

Khushi's shock and confusion have been beautifully depicted… she blushing remembering Arnav's kiss shows it has thrilled her but she doesn't know how to react to his PDA! His bipolar behaviour is driving the poor girl nuts! It is practical and sensible of Khushi to be cautious, given how unpredictable Arnav is — blowing hot and cold! Very pertinent questions she's asking herself… love that blend of innocence and maturity… she truly seems to be keeping in mind the adage 'Marry in haste, repent at leisure!' Khushi's retort, "Why should I worry about your Arnavji?" is cute… she should know by now that Arnav is hers, not Payal's! Payal recollecting how she'd yelled at Arnav for having endangered Khushi's life and Khushi's shocked reaction was endearing! Poor Khushi is in a quandary as she really doesn't know what to make of Arnav's changed attitude, thus being unable to answer either her own or others' questions! Munshiji ki chamchi is a gem! Arnav keeps popping up like a bad penny, leaving Khushi flustered… Buaji's constant admonishings are an indication of her love for Khushi.

Pleased that you made Khushi voice her confusion aloud before Arnav… they need to have a serious conversation if they're to move on in this relationship or with their lives… their convo about acidity and dhak dhak was cute. "Did you think love was something comfortable, Khushi?" Arnav asked. Payal and Akash might consider it comfortable but not so these two opinionated people… a very intriguing question, clearly indicating what a bumpy ride their journey of love has been! Happy that Arnav is quite honest about his feelings and actions… loved seeing that even the simplest of Arnav's touches has an incendiary effect on Khushi! Khushi equating falling in love with slipping on a banana peel is just hilarious… one can never keep her or her quips down! The last few paragraphs were very painful reading — Khushi's ever-present fear of being led on only to be discarded by the wayside to the accompaniment of Arnav's usual diatribe about her status and character, Arnav understanding and empathizing with her lack of trust. Very sensible of both to give their love a second chance by taking things slow… that will give each ample time to really get to know and understand the other!

I'm so happy Arnav realized Khushi is overwhelmed and suggested taking a step back. I think this 6 mos will allow them both to discover each other.

I just love this Arnav.He understands Khushi so well !! and he is so patient with her !

hmmm good that Arnav is having tough time convincing Khushi, he need to earn trust & love... What is six months hope the great ASR will not come up with some deal

I loved how you contradicted the six month marriage, to a month courtship. Great! I want to see how Arnav will woo her into getting married to him! :)