Kriyaansh Forever![part 2 onwards] - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyya guyzzz!!! i'm back ! so, here's d chappy...sry for typo errors n mistakes...lol! n meet u in d end of dis chappy!!!!

KRIYAANSH FOREVER!
PART-6

recap:
kr-{in mind} - rey! mein aapko kaise bhi sach bataongi...kaise bhi...

she said dese wid a stunning attitude!!!!

so uske baad to know wat happens... scroll ur page below!!!
hehehe!!!

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rey n kria reach the SINGHANIA MANSION! rey stares at her wid his angry looks...
kria understands dat rey is acting so cuz he means her to get down frm d car...kria, not taking much tym, gets down d car...
rey immediately takes a u-turn n rushes out..he goes sumwer widout even teling kria..his love!!!

kria noticed dat...she opened the door n went in...tears started forming in her eyes..she knew dat watever she did was not rite;;;
kr- kria,tum aise kaise kar sakti ho??? tujhe itna bada galti nai karni chahiye thi...
ab rey mujhse itna gussa hain..mein kya karoon...sab meri wajah se hua hain...
she blames herself for dis mistake...


next scene is rey's...LOL!😆

rey rides his car harshly n he comes to a new place...looking lyk a village..it was uncrowded...no one seemed to live there...
he was thinking all d thinks wich happened in the school area...
d way kria told dat watever samar was teling was true...he was literallly crying...😭
[bg. tune- TUJHE BHULA DIYA..lolz😆y]...😉


after a while...suddenly a huge lorry comes towards rey's car...
the driver of d lorry was drunken...he was driving widout focus...!
rey in oder hand was also unaware of the big lorry coming towards him cuz he was in the chain of thoughts abt wt had happened a few time ago...

both the vehicles came near...wid god's grace , rey suddenly sees a truck comin...he immediately took a right n unfortunately dashed to a tree...he fell unconscious...
the driver didnt wait there..he just kept driving his truck in a drunken manner...

after 15 mins...a girl passes by the accident area...she notices a car dashed n a guy inside the car..she shouts n goes around n calls few ppl who were residing closeby the village ..

sum ppl come running n takes the man [rey] inside d gal's house[who saw d accident...i wil tel her name later...of course not taani!lol]
the village ppl call d doc n d doc reaches d house in 15 mins...
he checks the wounds in rey's hand n head.. he applies sum medicine in d wound n puts a bandage there...

doc: iss ladke ko kuch nai hua...bas haath mein thoda ghav hua hain...n sar pe bhi thoda sa...mein aapko davayiya deta hoon ...aap iss ladke ko dedijiyega..
he gives sum medicines n goes away..the village ppl also went frm there after a while...

next back to kria...

kr- itni der hochuki hain...rey kahan chale gaye? aisa toh pehle kabhi nai kia...
sab meri galtihain..agar mein iske baare mein pehle hi rey ko baatati toh...ab ye sab nai hoga...*cry*😭
she thinks to call rey bt the phone was switched off...she was really tensed now...!!!😲
😲

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rey eventually opens his eyes wich were once filled wid love bt now wid anger...
he sees a gal infront of him who was very worried...
he suddenly gets up ...

re- tum koun ho? n mein yahan kaise ???
girl- mein priya hoon...aapko accident hua tha isiliye meine aapko yahan leke aayi...aap bohut buri haalat mein the

ab aap kaise hain?
re- oh...mein teek hoon...par ye jagah kounsi hain??
pr- ye gorai gauv hai...[ idont even know whether such gauv exists or not]
r- gorai gauv...tumhe pata hai kya ki mumbai sheher se ye gauv kitna door hai??
pr- mumbai sheher !! mumbai toh thoda bohut door hai yahan se...
2 ghanta lage ga wahan pohunchne ko...

r-2 ghanta! ab mein waapas kaise jaaonga!!! n kria..woh kya karegi...usse toh akele rehne mein darr lagta hain..!
oh god!!!!
he checks out for his phone bt doesnt get it...
re- umm...priya...kya yahan phone hai??
pr-phone??? nai ji...yahan ye sab nai hai...ye toh gauv hai...yahan kuch bhi nai hain

r-oh shit!!! ab mein kria se communicate kaise karoon??
arghhh!!!😡

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kr- rey abhi tak nai aaye...it have been 3-4 hrs since rey hav gone...phone bhi switched off aaraha hai...unversejiii...ab main kya karoon...???😭
she then tinks of asking all hers n rey's frnds abt it...bt got no answer...!
so, she goes to the police station..
kr- sir, mein kria hoon...mera pati gaayab hain..aaj subah bahar gaye n abhi shaam hogaya...n woh phone bhi nai utta rahe hain..
plz aap kuch kijiye😭

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note: police[ po]😆

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po- teek hai teek hai..aap aapke husband ka photo dijiye..hum subah unke baare mein investigate karenge...
kr- ye raha photo[she handsover the photo]
n kal subah aap investigate karenge??? mein yahan itni worried hoon n aap kehrahe hain ki aap subah sab karenge???
aapne thoda se bhi nai socha kya ki mera pati kahan honge? kaise honge? kis haalat mein honge?
po- dekhiye mam...hume bohut saare complaints hain...toh hum ye sab ab nai kar sakte hain..
kr- dekhiye sir, agar aap abhi investigation start nai kia toh mera pati ke jaan ko khatra hosakta hain...plz
plz sir...abhi start kijiye...!plz
po- teek hai...hum abhi investigation start kardenge...
aap jaayiye..agar hume koi suraag mila toh hum aapko phone kardenge...
kr-okay tanx inspector sir...
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she leaves d police station n comes back to home emotionlessly...
it was almost 11 pm...kria still didnt sleep..she was nervous,worried,angry on herself...she cudn't sleep too...
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rey too tried his level best to get in touch wid kria..bt ended in vain...
he too cudn't sleep dat nite!...the day went by...
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ufff!!!!! finally updted the 6th part!! 😛i'm really happy wid all ur comments for d previous part...tanx a lot guyzz!!! 😃
n i had got one complaint frm all dat the 5th part was very small...so, i thought of making dis update bigger..n i hope it's bigger cuz abhi tak i didnt read it...😕
agar ab bhi chota hai toh very sorry!
n mujhe pata hai..dis update was not too good...bt i'm very sorry...mujhe time hi nai milta hai...n moreover my school is also gonna strt..
toh idk wether i'll b able to cont. dis update or not...
i'm very sorry guyzzz...i hope u understand me..!😲
n plz do tell me wether u liked dis chappy or not...⭐️

eagerly waiting for ur comments n reviews...

ur's-
Reshma!❤️


Edited by KR752 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Res
Unres
Yipeee!
Frst one to like and comment! 😃
Getting back to d update.
It was absolutely awesome!
Totally loved it.
Read d whole story in one go and it was amazing! 😊
Good work Reshu! 😊
Continue soon and PM me...

Lots of Love,
Ayu...❤️
Edited by ayu_kriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Updt was very nice dear n don't worry abt d length we can manage n understand study pressure
u can give updts whenever ur free w'll wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
part 6 full on tension and scare...
rey accident was really bad ... thank god nothing happen to him...
both are worry about each other... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
nyc update...😊
update nxt part soon...
can't wait to read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Res
:)

Unres


Wow Reshu kya update tha 🤗

Super amazing 😉

It was filled with tension

I am loving your work!! ❤️

Don't worry about the length bacha
studies are more important and we understand! 🤗

Sorry late unres kar rahi hoon 😔

😊


~Anu~
Edited by Luvkriyansh-anu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Amazing FF

loved all the updates

waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
wow
read the whole story in one go
loved it
please update soon
and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
hey
it was just fabulous
amazing part
thanxx for the pm
update the next part soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME

AMAZING

NICE

THANK GOD DAT GIRL WASN'T TAANI

N REY TOO WAS EQUALLY WORRIED FOR KRIA

UPDATE SOON :)

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