dil se thank u buddies , 4 your great support and wonderful comments , which really motivates me a lot 2 write more , THANKS
TUJHE BHULA DIYA
CHAPTER - 10
EK LAMBI KAALI RAAT BAS DHALNE KO HAI , CHAAND BAADLON MAIN CHIPNE KO HAI ,, AUR NAYI ROSHNI KE SAATH SURAJ UJAALA KARNE KO HAI ,
KUCH NAYEE UMEEDON KE SAATH , ANKHIYON MAIN JHILMILAATE SAPNE LIYE KISI KE ZINDAGI PYAAR SE MEHKANE KO HAI BETAAB , PAR KAUN JAANE KAB TAK RAHEGA YE KHAABOON KA KARWAAN , AUR KAB TAK RAHEGA YE SHAANT SAMA , KYA LIKHA HAI APNI HAATH KI LAKIRON MAIN , KYA SACH HONGE KABHI APNE KHWAAB YA BIKHRENGE BAN KE SIRF BEETI YAAD KYA APNE PYAAR SE , SACHI MOHABBAT SE HONGE HAMESHA KE LIYE EK -- BEPANAAH PYAAR KARNE WALE DO ALAG INSAAN YA REH JAAYENGE SIRF UNKE NISHAAN ,
KAUN JAANE , KAL HO NAA HO , KYA KAL RAHEGA YE KHUSHIYON KA JHOOMTA SAMA , YA HOGA PYAAR KA EK NAYA IMTEHAAN ????
[ A LONG DARK NIGHT IS ABOUT 2 HIDE AND D MOON IS ALSO ABOUT 2 HIDE IN D CLOUDS BY D NEW RAYS OF SUNLIGHT WHICH R ABOUT 2 SHINE BY D ARISING BRIGHT SUN HOLDING A HUGE NO. OF MYSTERIES IN THEM
SOMEONE'S LIFE IS WAITING AND LONGING 4 LOVE AND 4 FEELING D LOVE WITH NEW RAY OF HOPES 4 IT AND WITH NEW TWINKLING DREAMS IN THEIR EYES BUT WHO KNOWS TILL WHEN WE WILL LIVE IN THIS DREAMLAND AND TILL WHEN ALL GOES OK AND SMOOTHLY , WHAT IS IN STORE OF OUR DESTINY , WHAT HAS WRITTEN IN D LINES OF OUR HANDS , WHETHER SOMEDAY OUR DREAM WILL COME TRUE OR WILL THEY BREAK TURNING INTO A OLD BEAUTIFUL MEMORY
WHETHER TRUE PURE AND BEAUTIFUL LOVEBIRDS WILL EVER BE ABLE 2 BECOME ONE WITH THEIR LOVE , CARE , SACRIFICE 4 EACH OTHER OR WILL THEY GET LOST AND ONLY THEIR MEMORIES OF TRUE LOVE WILL LASTS
WHO KNOWS WHETHER THERE WILL BE ANY TOMORROW OR NOT ??? WILL THERE BE D SAME LOVE AND HAPPINESS TOMORROW OR WILL THERE BE A NEW TEST OF TRUE LOVE ?????
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morning 4 am
IN D ICU
BOTH OF D LOVE BIRDS OUR SWEET , CARING , LOVING TAANI AND REY R SLEEPING IN D WARMTH OF THEIR LOVE , IN PROTECTION OF THEIR LOVE , FEELING EACH OTHER , LOVING , AND CARING EACH OTHER BY THEIR HEARTS , THEIR HEARTS AND EYES SOMETIMES TALKS AND SOMETIMES CRIES IN PAIN OF SEEING D TEARS AND PAIN OF THEIR LOVED ONE , THEIR HEARTS R COMMUNICATING BY STRONGEST BOND OF THEIR INFINITE PURE ;LOVE - DIL KA KHOOBSURAT PYAAR KA RISHTA
(KUCH DARR HAI DIL MAIN APNE PYAAR KO KHONE KAA , AUR KUCH TADAP HAI PYAAR KO PAANE KI , SO RAHE HAIN DONO PYAAR KI CHAAON MAIN
EK DUJE KE SAATH PAR DIL JAAGE HUE HAIN PYAAR KE KHAATIR , PYAAR KO JEE BHAR KE APNE PAAS MEHSOOS KARNE KE LIYE AUR USSE KOI TAKLEEF NA HO ISKA DHAYAN RAKHNE KE LIYE , )
AS SOON AS REY WOKE UP FROM SLEEP , HE CHECK WHETHER TAANI IS OK OR NOT , USKO DARD TO NAHI HO RAHA , DRIPS TO SAHI LAGI HUI HAIN NA , GLUCOSE KI BOTTLE FINISH TO NAHI HO GAYI , KAHIN USSE KUCH CHAHIYE TO NAHI ALTHOUGH NURSE WAS COMING 2 CHECK ALL THESE TIME 2 TIME
REY EK PAL KE LIYE BHI APNE PYAAR KO AKELA NAHI CHOD RAHA THA , AUR SWAYAM BHI HAR PAL APNI BEHAN TAANI KE SAATH THA , PAR ICU MAIN ONLY 1 PERSON WAS ALLOWED SO REY WAS THERE MOST OF D TIME AND SWAYAM BHI USKE SAATH HOTA THA WHENEVER NEEDED AS SWAYAM ASKED REY 2 BE WITH TAANI , AS SHE WAS IMPROVING FEELING REY'S TRUE LOVE , SWAYAM USED 2 CHECK AND SEE TAANI FROM D GLASS OF D DOOR ,
OR
ACTUAL SONG ALSO
(DO OPEN AND PLAY D ABOVE LINK BEFORE READING FURTHER , my comp sound system not working so couldn't get a better song or have not listened again also so sorry friends , but plz adjust this time )
JAISI HI REY KI AANKH KHULI , USNE DEKHA KI TAANI HIS ANGEL OF LOVE IS SLEEPING PEACEFULLY BUT A LITTLE SMILE COME ON HIS FACE BY D SIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM , HE SAW TAANI STILL HOLDING HIS HAND WITH HER DRIPPED HAND , TAANI HAS KEPT HER HEAD ON HIS HAND HOLDING IT WITH HER DRIPPED HAND A LITTLE AS DEEP INSIDE HER HEART SHE STILL HAS A FEAR OF LOOSING REY , SO SHE MAKE SURE BY HOLDING AND KEEPING HER FACE ON HIS HAND , LOVING AND CARESSING HIM LIKE A SMALL KID LOVING HER TEDDY BEAR IN SLEEP , SHE HAS HOLD HIS HAND AS IF SHE HAS HOLD HER CUTE TEDDY BEAR AND KEPT HER HEAD ON HIS HAND AS IF SHE IS SLEEPING ON A SOFT LOVING CUSHION , BUT AS REY FELT SOFT ROSY LIPS OF TAANI ON HIS HAND , HE FEELS A LITTLE TICKLISH AND A SMILE COMES ON HIS FACE AGAIN SEEING SUCH AN INNOCENT PURE ANGEL LOVING HIM AND A LITTLE BLUSH ALSO COMES ON HIS FACE AS HE FELT SO TICKLISH AFTER FEELING TAANI'S LOVE IN SLEEP ALSO
,BUT WHEN HE SAW SOME STRANDS OF HAIRS R COMING AGAIN AND AGAIN ON HER ANGELIC PRETTY FACE WHICH ALSO LOVES TEASING HIS LOVE HIS ANGEL AND WANT 2 FEEL HER PURITY AND INNOCENCE OF A PURE SOUL AND DISTURBING HER A LITTLE FROM SLEEP , HE BEND A LITTLE AND MOVE HIS HAND FORWARD AND REMOVES HER HAIRS FROM HER FACE AND PUTS THEM BACK AND SLOWLY KISSED HER CHEEK A LITTLE FEELING TAANI'S LOVE AND SHOWERING HIS LOVE ON TAANI , AND CARESS HER FACE WITH HIS OTHER HAND , HE DID THAT SO LOVINGLY , CARESSING AND FEELING HIS LOVE EVERY MOMENT , HE WAS ADORING HER , HE AND HIS HEART WAS ATTRACTING BY HER PURITY , BY HER INNOCENCE , BY HER LOVE MORE AND MORE , AND HE COULDN'T CONTROL THIS DESIRE , D TRUE LOVE AND D FEELING OF LOVE GROWING MORE AND MORE IN HIS HEART , SOMEHOW HE HAVE 2 CONTROL HIS DESIRES AND FEELINGS BECAUSE OF TAANI'S CONDITION AS SHE WAS STILL NOT WELL AND TAANI'S HEART WAS ALSO FEELING REY'S LOVE INFACT REY KA PYAAR TO HAMESHA HI USKA DIL MEHSOOS KARTA THA BUT SHE WAS UNCONSCIOUS DUE 2 EFFECT OF INJECTION SO SHE COULDN'T RESPOND , BUT SHE MOVES HER HAND A LITTLE BY WHICH SHE WAS HOLDING REY'S HAND , KYA KAREIN PYAAR KE EHSAAS DIL MAIN TO MEHSOOS HOTE HI HAIN NA , BUT REY KO LAGA KI KAHIN TAANI KO KOI PROBLEM YA DARD NA HO RAHA HO , HIS EYES AGAIN
FILLED WITH TEARS AND HE TRIES 2 TAKE HIS HAND AS IT MUST BE PAINING TAANI BUT VERY SMOOTHLY AND SOFTLY SO THAT IT WON;T HURT HER MORE BUT AS SOON AS HE TRIED 2 TAKE HIS HAND FROM TAANI'S HAND TAANI'S GRIP BECOMES TIGHTER AND HALF CONSCIOUS TAANI MURMERS A LITTLE FEEBLY AND STAMMERING IN BETWEEN - REY REY REY PLZ MUJHE CHODD KE MAT JAAOO PLZZZ MAIN AAPKE BINA NAHI JEE SAKTI REYY , PLZ MUJHE BACHA LO REY VO LOG MUJHE MAR DENGE
REY 'S TEARS WERE FLOWING DOWN UNCONTROLLABLY LISTENING TAANIS' WORDS AS HE WAS SITTING VERY CLOSE 2 HER , AND HE COULD LISTEN HER CLEARLY
REY ( CARESSING HER CHEEKS STILL CRYING , SOBBING , STAMMERING IN BETWEEN AND HOLDING HER HAND FIRMLY ASSURING HER THAT HE IS THERE WITH HER ) - TAANI , TAANI MAIN YAHIN HUN MERI JAAN ,TUMHAARA REY TUMHARE PAAS HI HAI AUR HAMESHA TUMHARRE SAATH RAHEGA TUMHAARA AUR SIRF TUMHAARA REY , MAIN KAHIN NAHI JAA RAHA AUR KABHI TUMHE AKELA CHODKE NAHI JAUNGA PAKKA , AUR MERE HOTE HUE KOI TUMHE HAATH BHI NAHI LAGA SAKTA KOI BHI NAHI AUR MAIN TUMHE KUCH NAHI HONE DUNGA , KUCH BHI NAHI , PROMISE MERI AKHIRI SAANS TAK HAMESHA TUMHAARE SAATH RAHUNGA MAIN, PROMISE SWEETHEART ,
REY BENDS AND KISSED HER DRESSED FOREHEAD WITH CLOSED EYES TRYING 2 SHARE AND LESSEN HER PAIN , AND THEN HE SLOWLY KISS HER EYES ASSURING HER THAT HE IS ALWAYS WITH HER NO MATTER WHAT BUT AS HE WAS STILL CRYING SO HIS TEARS MAKE THEIR WAY FROM HER CLOSE EYELIDS AND FELL ON TAANI'S EYES AND HIS LOVE AGAIN FIND AND MAKE IT'S WAY 2 REACH HER AND HER HEART , AND SHE SLOWLY HARDLY OPENS HER EYES FEELING REY'S TEARS AND PAIN , AND NOW THEIR FACES WERE REALLY VERY CLOSE AND AS SOON AS REY OPENS HIS EYES BEFORE SITTING BACK 2 GET A SIGHT OF HIS LOVE ANGEL TAANI BUT HE SAW HER ANGEL'S BEAUTIFUL EYES STARING AT HIM LOVINGLY , SWEETLY , AND SHE SLOWLY BLINKS HER EYES 2 MAKE HER BELIEVE THAT IT'S NOT A DREAM AND SHE RAISE HER OTHER HAND 2 WIPES REY'S TEARS AS SHE WAS STILL HOLDING REYS HAND BY HER ONE HAND
SHE SLOWLY WIPES AWAY REY'S TEARS AND REY AGAIN KISSED HER HAND NEAR HIS FACE AND SHE BLUSHES A LITTLE AND HE WAS ADORING HER , FEELING HER LOVE , HER PURITY AND INNOCENCE EVERY SECOND , EVERY MOMENT , AND HE HUG HER SOFTLY SO THAT IT WON'T HURT HER REMOVING D SINGLE INCH OF DISTANCE BETWEEN THEM AND CLOSING HER EYES TAANI ALSO HUGS HIM BACK BUT A LITTLE ONLY DUE 2 D DRIPS AND SALINE PIPES AND ALL , BUT AS HE SAW TAANI'S DRIPS HE GET UP A LITTLE
AND AGAIN KISSED HER CLOSED EYES AND SLOWLY SAYS
- SWEETHEART , MAIN HAMESHA TUMHARE SAATH HUN , HAMESHA , AUR MERE HOTE HUE KOI TUMHE KUCH NAHI KAR SAKTA KUCH BHI NAHI
TAANI BLINKS HER EYES A LITTLE SAYING I KNOW REY , AS SHE HAS ALREADY SEEN D TRUE ETERNAL LOVE OF REY IN HIS DEEP EYES , WHICH HAS MADE EVERY PROMISE BY HIS DEEP LOVE AND HE GETS BACK 2 HIS CHAIR NEAR TAANI ,
OUTSIDE D ICU , SWAYAM WAS SITTING RESTING HIS HEAD ON D BACK OF A CHAIR CLOSING HIS DRY AND SWALLOW EYES AS HE WAS STILL TENSED 4 TAANI DUE 2 WHAT DOC SAID HE WAS REMEMBERING HIS SOME OLD CUTE CHILDHOOD DAYS WITH TAANI
***** FLASHBACK ******
a small little girl taani was fighting with a boy and swayam was trying 2 handle d situation
swayam - taani hua kya hai , kyu itna angry ho rahi hai
taani ( 2 sw ) - bhai aapko nahi pata isne kyaa kaha hai aapko
taani ( then 2 d boy) - teri himmat kaise hui mere bhai ke baarein main ulta sidha bolne ki hunhhh , stupid idiot main tujhe chodungi nahi , donkey monkey kahin kaaa
boy - abbeee oyee tameez se baat kar , varna tere liye acchha nahi hoga and maine jo bhi kaha hai na sahi kaha hai , fattu hai tera bhai , fattu , darpok no 1 ,
taani was going 2 punch him but swayam stops her hand and tries 2 pulls her with him
swayam - taani chodd na , kyun baat ko bada rahi hai , mujhe koi farak nahi padta inn baton se , chodd chall
(before swayam could complete somehow taani bites his finger that ek red mark pad jaata hai uski finger par ) -
swayam was totally shocked
taani - dubara mere bhai ko agar kuch bola na to sandal marungi sarr (head) pe samjha
(and he runs away crying as taani bited him real badly )
******* flashback **********
AND SWAYAM OPENS HIS EYES BUT NOW HE HAS A SMILE ON HIS FACE
ALTHOUGH HE WAS STILL WORRIED INSIDE AND HIS EYES WERE ALSO A LITTLE WET
SWAYAM(TALKING 2 HIMSELF STILL SMILING A LITTLE THROUGH HIS TEARS AS HE WAS TOTALLUY LOST IN HIS OLD DAYS ) - TAANI BHI NA , KITNI PYAARI HAI , CUTELY WEIRD HAI MERI BABY SISTER AUR KITNA PYAAR KARTI HAI MUJHE , MERE LIYE KISISE BHI LAD SAKTI HAI
BILKUL PAGLI HAI PAGLI , AAJ BHI YAAD HAI,
MUJHE EK BAAR TO MUJHE 103 DEGREES FEVER HUA THA PAR VO PURI RAAT BHAR MERE LIYE JAAGTI RAHI CARE KARTI RAHI MERE ITNA MANA KARNE KE BAVJOOD , AUR AB BHI VO SABKI KITNI CARE KARTI HAI , KITNE PYAAR SE MERE LIYE KHANA BANATI HAI , BUT VO TO HAMESHA HI WORLD'S BEST BEHAN PROOF HUI HAI , BUT MAIN KITNA BURA HUN , KABHI USKA KHAYAL NAHI RAKHA , KABHI USKI PYAARI RAKHI KI DOR KA FARZ NAHI NIBHAYA MAINE , PLZ MERI GUDIYA MUJHE MAAF KAR DENA .
( LOOKING UP FOLDING HANDS AS IF TALKING 2 KRISHNA JI )
PLZ KRISHNA JI MERI PYAARI BEHAN TAANI KO JALDI THIK KARDENA , PLZ USSE KUCH MAT HONE DENA ., VO TO ITNI ACCHI HAI SABKI CARE KARTI HAI , EK ANJAAN BACCHHE KE LIYE USNE APNI JAAN DANGER MAIN DAAL DE
PLZ AB AAPKO BHI USKE JAISE PURE SOUL , GOLDEN HEART SWEETEST LOVING CARING GIRL KI RAKSHA KARNI HOGI , USSE PEHLE KI TARAH BILKUL THIK KARNA HOGA PLZ KRISHNA JI , AGAR MERI BEHAN KO KUCH BHI HUA NA TO MERA INSAANIYAT SE VISHWAS UTH JAYEGA PLZZ , MERI GUDIYA KO JALDI SE THIK KAR DO NA ,
( UNKNOWINGLY TEARS WERE FLOWING FROM HIS EYES , WHILE SAYING ALL THESE)
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i know u all must be waiting 4 d precap but mujhe yeh update dena zyada acchha laga 2 make u feel more love , and a little beautiful emotions , i don't know whether it's good or bad ,but mere dil ne yahi likhna chaha to yahi write kar diya ,
but ya precap is d same as of last chapter and it will surely be there in next update 😛 pakka -
PRECAP- POLICE AND SOME PERSONS WITH THEM COME
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GANG 'S ENTRY ,
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some more twists and turns in upcoming future updates
( OK FRIENDS DON'T BE SAD OR UPSET AFTER READING D starting LINES , YA THERE R SOME NEW TWISTS AND TURNS COMING IN D UPCOMING CHAPTERS BUT MAY BE IT WILL BE 4 SOME GOOD AND MAKE THEIR LOVE MORE STRONG AFTER THAT , BECAUSE D JOURNEY OF LOVE IS NOT AT ALL EASY , BUT BE POSITIVE AND KEEP SMILING . TRUST ME FRIENDS IT IS REALLY VERY HARD 4 ME ALSO 2 WRITE THIS STORY , MY HEART CRIES , HURTS , PAINS BADLY WHILE WRITING ITS UPDATES BUT YA IF U WANT THEN I CAN FINISH IT SOON BUT D THING IS THIS STORY IS REALLY VERY CLOSE 2 MY HEART AND I WRITE IT FEELING FROM MY HEART , MY THROAT GETS DRY , HEART CRIES AND PAINS WHILE WRITING THIS STORY , BUT STILL I LOVE WRITING THIS STORY , DON'T KNOW WHY MUJHE YE STORY LIKHNA BAHUT ACCHHA LAGTA HAI AS MY HEART GETS A LITTLE RELIEF WITH POURING OUT ALL MY EMOTIONS IN IT SO I WANT 2 CONTINUE THIS STORY
BUT I ALSO DON'T WANT 2 MAKE U ALL CRY MORE
SO TELL ME WHETHER SHOULD I CONTINUE THIS STORY OR NOT???????? BUT MINIMUM 5 CHAPTERS WILL SURELY BE THERE BEFORE FINISHING IT BUT IT WILL BE CONTINUED 2 MORE CHAPTERS WITH NEW TWISTS AND TURNS AND SOME TESTS OF LOVE IF U ALL WANT
IT WILL BE YOUR WISH TOTALLY WHETHER U WANT ME 2 FINISH IT SOON OR CONTINUE WITH SOME NEW TWISTS AND TESTS OF TRUE LOVE SO TELL ME FRIENDS ???
DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM HEART
SORRY IF I DISAPPOINTED ANYONE AND SORRY IF I MADE U CRY AGAIN BUT PLZ DON'T CRY AND SMILEY SMILEY
TAKE CARE AND KEEP SMILING
LOVE U ALL MY SWEET DEAR FRIENDS
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