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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ria_Taareyfan

nice update jaan😊or ha tu muje ruane ka ek bhi moka nai chodti it's not fair yaar tu muje or kitna rulana chati hai😭😭😭but asusuall teri update zakas thi yaar fadu types update thi and ab to tuje next part bhi jaldi se update karna hoga or usse pele plzz Magic of Love ka ek part update karde na yaar plzzz or ha apne study ma bi dhyann rakhna love u jaan 🤗🤗


love u too sana dear 🤗 🤗
and sachi main tujhe bilkul bhi rulana nahi chahti , but i can't help it as this story has emotional storyline dear , sorry my dear cutie pie
mera terin comment read karke tujhe tight hug dene ka mann karta hai ,
so🤗❤️muahhh 4 this lovely comment

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taareylove

awesome update loved it


plz update soon waiting for tr romance😳😳😳


thank u so much dear😛


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lavi_taarey

ya doc i will take care of her , vo meri zindagi hai doc , main usse kuch nahi hone dunga , kuch bhi nahi , VO HAI TO MAIN HUN , VO NAHI TO MAIN BHI NAHI@ nice dialogue😃 lovd ur update , nxt part update soon👏


😳 aww thank u shooo much dear😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aparabosecarmel

di sorry for late comment

res
unres

di ya it was an emotional update but i did'nt cry as i was reading my smile was getting wider and wider as tani has got her life back

precap was amazing
waiting for it😛


🤗love u aparajita 4 this wonderful lovely special comment and 4 smiling also , i don't want my any dear friend 2 cry , so keep smiling dear😊😃
thanks a lottt😊😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

amazng .. !! .. 👏 👍🏼

luvd reyaam bond ... ❤️
n dnt wry .. v ll b ok .. wid emotional epi'z .. 😉
taani ko jaldi thik krdo ..
update soon ..
thnQ 4 d pm .. 😊


awww dil se pyaara sa bada wala thanks 😊😊😊 4 this special comment😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khyati2000

awesome yaar

loved it
please continue soon


thanks a lott dear😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks dear😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshigupta

Gr8 update :D...lukin 4rwd 2 taarey romance :p



SO plz plz update soon :)



u have 2 wait a little 4 that dear
thanks😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks a lot dear but it has become a ss now 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks 4 your great support but u have 2 continue your support if u really want updates,
it's very difficult 4 me also 2 write this story as it's really very painful , and my heart also feel its emotions and d pain while writing it ,so plz sorry if i made u cry again
BUT PLZ DO LIKE AND COMMENT ALSO FROM YOUR SWEET HEART IF U REALLY LIKE IT A BIT

TUJHE BHULA DIYA

CHAPTER 6

reyam go 2 meet taani in d ICU where taani is still unconscious due 2 d injections given by d doctors 2 make her stable

swayam goes near her and touches her dressed wound on d forehead with his shaking hand and tears flow from his eyes ,he was just numb seeing his little bubbly sis in this condition lying on d hospital bed very silently , oxygen mask on her mouth , drips on her hands , swayam's heartbeats increased seeing his baby sis like this ,
he can't see his little sis like this and goes after saying (stammering in between), i am sorry taani , par tumhara ye stupid bhai tumse bahut pyaar karta hai ,ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena, and ask crying rey 2 take care of her and he is outside d OT

rey ka dil bhi taani ka pain , uska dard , mehsoos karke ro raha tha, usse bhi apne pyaar ki khamoshi nahi dekhi ja rahi thi , jo taani non-stop bolti rehti thi , sabko apni cute antics se smile karvati thi vahi aaj itni khamosh , itni guum -suum behosh thi , usse bhi apne pyaar ko aise dekha nahi ja raha tha , par vo apne pyaar ko kisi bhi situation main akela nahi chhod sakta tha , rey ne usse aur taani ne rey se sacha pyaar , sachi mohobbat ki thi, sacha pyaar hamesha apne pyaar ka sath nibhata hai chahe usse khud kitni bhi takleef kyon na ho , apne pyaar ko aisi haalat main dekhna , apni jaan dene se bhi zyada mushkil hota hai , par agar pyaar sacha ho to hamara pyaar hi hamein itni strength deta hai ki hum har situation main apne pyaar ka sath nibha sakein ,

(REY'S HEART WAS ALSO CRYING FEELING TAANI'S PAIN AND SEEING HER IN THIS CONDITION , HIS LOVE TAANI WHO KEEPS ON TALKING IS NOW JUST LAYING ON D HOSPITAL BED QUITELY , TAANI WHO MAKE EVERYONE SMILE BY HER CUTE ANTICS AND SWEET TALKS IS NOW SILENT , UNCONSCIOUS AND IN PAIN .
REY CAN'T SEE HIS LOVE IN THIS PAINFUL CONDITION INFACT NOBODY CAN SEE HIS/HER LOVE LIKE THIS , BUT REY ALSO CAN'T LEAVE HER ALONE IN ANY SITUATION , THEY TRULY LOVE EACH OTHER , AND TRUE LOVE ALWAYS SUPPORT HIS LOVE WITHOUT CARING OF HIMSELF OR HIS PAIN, TO SEE ONE'S LOVE IN THIS CONDITION IS MORE DIFFICULT THAN A SUICIDE BUT IF OUR LOVE IS PURE AND TRUE THEN THAT LOVE ONLY GIVE US STRENGTH 2 SUPPORT , FIGHT , LIVE , ACARE AND OVERCOME EVERY OBSTACLE 4 THEIR LOVE )

rey (crying) goes and sits near her holding her hand in his hands caressing her and kissing her hand again , and keep her head down near her and looking at her through his tears but still holding her one hand softly , gently so that it won't hurt her ,

(PLAY THE ABOVE SONG BEFORE READING FURTHER)

rey was reminiscing his each and every moment he spend with taani , when they first met, her cute antics which make him a little smile through his tears remembering taani's sweet memories, her cute sorry , her bubbly talkative nature , his fight , how she cared 4 him , her love and caring , her innocence , cuteness ,
how and when he realized his love 4 taani , rasia sequence , then misunderstandings, then their love confession , her understanding , dil ibaadat romance , then his mistake , his outburst and then taani in this condition which hurt him more and make him angry on himself ,

outside d OT ,
swayam was sitting on a chair and crying keeping his both hands on his face , as taani's memories was flashing before his eyes , how she always cared 4 him , her anger and scoldings of care when he didn't come home whole night without even informing her ,
how she feed him her delicious food sometimes with so much love and care that he always forget his anger and pain , how she cutely calls him bhai , pain uske bhai ko hota tha but dard usko , aansoo uske behte the

gang in their home ( all boys decided 2 stay at vicky's home and girls stay at sharon's home that night )

they were also reminiscing their sweet and sour memories with taani , how they ragged her . how they always distrust her , gang's cake fight , how they blamed her everytime without any reason , how they laughed at her , but still her sweet caring nature
(they all were angry on themselves , they were guilty )
******
in vicky's home
someone(RV -- HIS CLASS FELLOW ) calls nilesh ,
nil(in dull voice)-- hello
RV- hey nil tujhe pata chala ki taani ne GS ki post aur college dono chhod diya hai ,
nil- haan , to
RV- TO CONGRATS KITNA ACCHHA HUA NA , DANCE TEAM KE LIYE , KYUNKI TAANI KHUD KO TO HANDLE KAR NAHI PAATI , DANCE TEAM KO KAISE HANDLE KARTI , USKI VAJAH SE TUM LOG NDC MAIN BHI HAAR JAATE , PATA NAHI USKO GS KAISE BANA DIYA ,
nil-- WHAT ??? WHAT DO U WANT 2 SAY ???
RV- yahi ki ab rey GS HAI , VO KHUD EK DANCER HAI , AUR EK ACCHHA LEADER BHI HAI SO VO HAMARE COLLEGE KO ZAROOR JITVADEGA
nil(in angry tone) - tumhe kya lagta hai ki agar taani GS hoti to hum ndc main haar jaate
RV- MUJHE KYA SAARE COLLEGE KA YAHI SOCHNA HAI , AND KHUSH HONE KI JAGAH PE ANGRY KYUN HO RAHE HO ,
nil- just shut up , she is our friend , how dare u say like this about her , aur tu itni guarantee ke sath kaise keh sakta hai ki pura college aisa hi sachta hai
RV- COLLEGE WEBSITE CHECK KAR TUJHE KHUD PATA CHAL JAEGA
(and he cuts d phone before nil could say anything )
nil was shocked hearing that , and tell d whole conversation 2 boys who also get shocked
and vicky immediately brought and open his laptop ,
they open college website and when they read comments , they all were more shocked ,guilty , angry ,
nil-- disgusting , ye saare students ko ho kya gaya hai , vo taani ke baare main aise comments kaise kar sakte hain
amar ( in his voice )-- ab samajh main aaya taani aise behave kyun kar rahi thi , par vo apni jagah correct thi
vicky - dekha jaaye to wrong to hum hain hum bhi kahin na kahin aisa hi sachte the , remember how we laughed at her in d rehearsal hall , but vo to kitni brave nikli , usne ek child ko save kiya , without even caring her own life ,
she has a golden heart ,
bharat - haan tu bilkul sahi bol raha hai ,
nil- but guys kya hamein yeh reyam aur girls ko abhi batani chahiye ????
vicky - nahi hum reyam ko ye abhi nahi bata sakte , pata nahi vo kaise react karenge aur vaise hi abhi taani ko lekar bahut tension amin hain,
nil - aur agar girls ko bataya to sharon ko bhi pata chal jaega , aur uski tabiyat zyada kharaab ho sakti ,hai , to abhi hamaein ye baat sabse chupani hogi ok
all nods in yes , and they all decide 2 keep it a secret

precap - maybe a little taareylicious or shocking / surprising
DON'T KNOW😆😆

U HAVE 2 LIKE AND DO COMMENT ALSO 4 NEXT UPDATE







Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago

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