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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#531

I loved each and every sentence or rather word in this update. The way you showed the progress of their relationship in this story is truly commendable. A big applause to you for writing such an awesome update 👏 Sneaking into your own house, childhood memories, finding solace in each other armas. worrying about future kids, everything was superb. Fantastic update and looking forward to read next. Thanks for the PM 😊

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#532

Farah, hun, left you a marathon comment on pg 73. Time mile toh padh lena...

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Amazing update

i loved how Khushi wanted to know about his childhood, all the nice details and he let her in, somewhere where he never let anyone else

and then he woke her up, she almost got a shock there

we saw a bold Khushi to try and snap Arnav out of his trance which totally worked

and Arnav is thinking about her daughters and will need some sons to protect them..him being a part of this combo

and the precap aww cant wait😳

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#534

hey

nice update

glad that Arnav started opening up to Khushi

and those were some cute childhood stories

the precap was interesting to say the least☺️

is he going to propose?

i hope so

thanks for the PM😊

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#535

he thinking about having kids with khushi..omg!!!!!:D

i absolutely loved this part!!!!

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karsvinu

@karsvinu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Nice update! khushi asked arnav his story and dozed off😆...he is already looking at their future...n thinking about kids...😊...poor guy doesn't know yet that he is already committed for marriage...only difference is he doesn't want to do any marriage rituals...but i'm sure he will come around...😊

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Natalia

@Natalia

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

WAS THAT A PRECAP or a drug dose to shoot up our blood pressure?? Is he going to do what I think he would do, or would this be the twist? Would Khushi feel that just coz they slept together that he is giving her this ring???I am excited and a tad bit scared!!

P.S> SUCH A beautiful and emotional and yet serene update..

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Richa

@richaarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

awesome update...

thanks for the PM

update soon

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#539

I have no problem WHATSOEVER if you have trouble stopping writing about Arnav and Khushi's adorable interactions.

They are just so romantic and cute together, haayyye mera dil.

And Arnav's reaction to Khushi wanting two little girls was the CUTEST thing EVER. You know you want them too Arnavji. Don't lie.

And it's SHOWTIME. Arnav will propose hai na? But something will go wrong... I can feel it. =O

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akshu.ray27

@akshu.ray27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#540

Hi Farah,

First of all, hope that you have fully recovered from your illness. Second of all, I am very sorry that I haven't been able to respond to your updates in a timely manner. Usually, I don't bother reasoning my delayed responses but in your case, I feel terrible when I don't comment on your update and I feel the need to explain any delays. I know you receive lot of encouraging words from many other readers and it probably would not matter to you much if I don't comment but I can't sleep peacefully because I feel guilty and I have the thought lurking at the back of my mind that I haven't written to you to let you know how beautiful the update was. I sincerely appreciate your time, effort, commitment, punctuality and honesty towards SAY. As a reader of this mesmerizing and ever shining story, I believe it is my responsibility to at the least send your way a few encouraging words. SAY is worth every bit of a praise and YOU ARE CERTAINLY A WAKE UP CALL TO ALL WRITERS ON IF. I've been too caught up with work and I had taken a break from everything else. After learning that I had missed four of your brilliant updates, I realized I stretched my break a bit too far.

All four updates were flawless and superbly written with just the right amount of drama, comedy and romance. This line from part 61 had me ROFL : "What are you.. A horse?" Your comic timing is purrrfect!! Another thing I adore greatly about you is the way you infuse dialogs from the actual soap into your story. Sometimes I feel the dialogs were written keeping SAY in mind because that is how aptly you fit them into the story. I am so glad the precaps are back LOL. I agree, they do hog readers attention most of the time but you can't blame us for that Farah because your precaps are as good as the story! The last few updates had shown a drastic change in the way Arnav thinks about Khushi. I don't know what to say about your most recent update. I mean it was amazingly written and I loved every bit of it but are you giving us undesired vibes Farah? Is the story coming to an end? :-(

Edited by akshu.ray27 - 12 years ago