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Posted: 12 years ago

Akaash picked up the thong using only his thumb & forefinger, looking at it appallingly too, then threw it onto Rohan's lap like it was contagious. Rohan in turn just laughed at his to-be-brother-in-law's comically horrified expressions & put the thong carelessly over the pile in the hamper. Just then Akaash looked up & suddenly as his eyes caught on something behind NK's over his shoulder, he became very much alert, & said in a dismayed whisper, "Di!" NK shook his head condemningly at Akaash at his callousness, & said sternly, "No! No one takes Di's name over here! It's creeping me out!" But before he said further, Arnav snatched the boxes of condoms still held up in NK's raised hands using quite unnecessary excessive force, & stuffing it in his back pocket quickly, he said through gritted teeth, "It's Di, you idiot!" NK now turned on him accusingly & said angrily, "No Di, Nannav! Come on, I think I'll never be able to look at a G-string now, because now every time I see it my sister's scowl will flood my memory-"

HILLARIOUS PART EVER, LOL...

OMG...AANKHO MAIN AANSOO AA GAYE , NK IS MINDBLOWING...

OUTSTANDING UPDATE...BORRING PARTY TURN TO BLAST

IMOTIONAL AND ROMANTIC PRE-CAP...LOVED IT

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesm update...
Lovd it... Arnav was goin 2 confess...!!
Waitng 4 d nxt part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farah... I can't apologize enough for not commenting on the last 2 brilliant updates. I was swamped at work, and while I did read them (thanks to your kind PMs)... I always wanted to leave long deserving comments... Which never happened due to paucity of time .

Anyways... My comment is back with precap 😛.

Liked the way you described Anjali and Rohan's relationship..there is maturity, a give and take and also passion. Indeed perfect.

So you gave Samiya to NK..and left Aman for me 😉... Ok..just kidding. The bachelor party was... Hmmm... I guess definitely one of the biggest flops in the history of bachelor parties😆.

I just love how you have evolved the story, the relationship between Arnav & Khushi and of course..how they have grown themselves in love. Their ability to focus on the other person in times of adversity had been beautifully articulated..each time more stronger than the previous.

I remember the 1st time Khushi responds in the negative after his "Tum thik ho" in the show was after his kidnapping... It was about missing him... A similar thread here... And it again gave me the goosebumps!!!!

How do you do this girl???!!!

Virtual jhappies as apology for not commenting earlier...🤗

- Khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was some fabulous update!

loved u gave importance to the other couples in the story and included them as well in this update! they were nice and they look perfectly suited for one another!

lol but i think nk was the star of this update! poor guy he worked to make this bachelor party a success but in the end it was a flop (maybe there was too many restrictive rules but they were necessary, lol)
so nk is also suffering from the "one u love loving someone else syndrome" but i must say he is not letting his chance go by dragging samiya to the dance floor before she could even reach samiya! n his idea of the hamper was simply hilarious and it was quite normal for arnav to literally mad because for sometimes he has been dreaming and fantasizing about only baby gupta! lol!n it was funny the way he took all the boxes of condoms and shoved them in the back pocket (planning to make good use of them later on?? lol)

i really thought that khushi will be attending the party but im sure after the fiasco at the mehendi her spirits were kind of down! loved the way anav asked her if she was alright and the best that she replied sincerely, means she really trust him even to tell him she is not alright!

OH the precaps are back! good! very interesting one and eagerly waiting to read that specific one because i could feel many hidden meanings in khushi's words and waiting to see if arnav will finally let it go!


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Posted: 12 years ago
Haww.. I thot this update wud be a full to dedicated to just arhi.. Just both of them talking, comforting, sring griefs and consoling each other!

I loved it that both of them were just waiting for a caall or txt from the other.. Arnav's reason was justified that he won't resist seeing khushi aftr knwing she is hurt.. And khushi was just waiting for him to come to her..

Pugs is a nice nickname for payal.. And anjali rohan were cute as well..

So Nk too did have a hrtbrk!.. But well maybe his tym cupid needs to shoot an arrow

waiting for precap, well it was a treat to have a precap again!
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Posted: 12 years ago
**edited**

Loved your update so much, I went to read it a second time before commenting :)

Poor NK, can't really blame for the bachelor party fiasco. With all those restrictions it was bound to be a failure w/o a doubt. LOL. But his idea of having fun was such a disaster. The guy doesn't think at all about what he is going to do, does he? Poor Arnav was mortified about having to hear Rohan's fantasize about his Di, I wonder what Rohan would have said had he known Arnav would have been fantasizing about his bachchi. LOL These guys are screwed for life. Each marrying the other's sister, they can never have that kind of fun that guys have LOL But Arnav seems to have made the most of the situation, did he pocket those condoms for future use?? 😉 I just love the way the guy thinks on his feet. 😉

Glad to get a little insight into the other two couples. Those two couples aren't as boring as I thought them out to be. 😉

So Samiya isn't the only one with unrequited love?? NK fell for her only to see her moon over Arnav. Poor guy! Well, Samiya maybe a little bit more receptive to him this time :)

Arnav worrying over Khushi was understandable... The poor guy was scared of his own actions if Khushi had sounded upset & he would not have been able to control himself. Awww so sweet. ❤️

I just loved the way, he reacted when he asked her "Tum theek ho?" The guy was already sprinting over to her by the time she asked him to come over. He is worried sick over her. Any trouble to Khushi is nerve racking for Arnav. Awww.

Precap: Was just awesome. Can wait to read it. Those two are finally talking. Loved the way Khushi forgives him so easily & Arnav being mad at himself for spoiling Khushi's mehendi... Are you glad for the precap, b/c you have the next chapter written out already & can heave a sigh of relief :) I know you must be under a lot of pressure to keep updating on time, so having some buffer is always a good thing. 😃

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now I'm fed up of you!!!
Really... I'm!!!

now I won't bother you to not to write bother!!!!!!!!!!!!... because I'm too bothered... to ask you that again!!!
You tested my patience way too much!!!

Loved Arnav realisation of his love!!!
And welcome back... I mean..PRECAP!!!😆😆
I was missing it so much!!!😉
Thank you for the pm!!!👏👏

Waiting... for next one!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
So the Bachelor party was a bust, could have
expected that

Pecap interesting

cant wait for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update...!!!
NK was hilarious... Poor guy tried so hard to get the party going... n would have gotten himself killed had the girls found out what all he was hiding...!!!
Payal-Aakash and Anjali-Rohan were really cute... Btw I loved Rohan's rule of no puja talk when they are together😆
Im glad Arnav went to meet Khushi... Cant wait to read the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting. Perhaps I shouldn't, but I have to ask. If Arnav became so enraged at NK's innuendo regarding Rohan & Anjali, makes me wonder how he'd react if Rohan was doing with Anjali what he is doing with Khushi?

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