~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ New thread link posted

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#761

awsome update
lykd it
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

Quote

Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#762

superb update..
loved it
plzz update soon

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#763

Awww that was an amazing chapter...

I loved it...

The way everything is shaping up...

so finally somebody else knows..

and it is correct as to how much one will have to bear up and everything... coz it isn't an easy way to trek upon..

the conversation b/w the wannabes were hillarious...

pagal hai woh log..

and poor kria.. i really love how she is patient.. but lets see aur kitna saara...

alia friendship cute...

rey ke saath scene awesome..

waiting for next... :D

Quote

Neha

@Neha_KR

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Awsum update
i luved kria and alia's friendship
oh god! ur taglines scares me a lot.
Eagerly waitin for nxt part
update asap

Quote

Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Reply for chappy 18:-

Nice update !!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Rey is giving proper time to Kria and Rivaan though he is hell tired and Kria knows it so well !!!!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

She is happy and going for shopping now and I think this will be a good past time for both !!!!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉

Quote

luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#766

superb update

loved it very much

Quote

darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

res ... will comment back for sure
any how the chapter was awesome...
alia took kria and rivaan for shopping and then alia
asked rivaan and kria will they accompany her to the set
as shivam needed some help... and rey made his time with his family
and wont change... it get interest to read more...
do continue soon and pm me

Edited by sweetydiyafrien - 12 years ago

Quote

-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

res

unres

amazing update as usual

i am really loving you wrting style

and your colorful updates 😆😆

i really love kriya and alia's friendship

but your taglines

my god they are scary

anyway

thanks for the PM

please update soon

and do PM me

Quote

Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#769

Alright!! So this didn't turn out to be that scary than i thought 😳...

Har waqt body guards peeche peeche , i don't think so that's a..uh..nice thing ...

Kria N Alia getting closer , Great 👍🏼...

At least now Kria won't be all alone , waiting for Rey all day N waise bhi Alia seems to be a Sweet lady 😆...

Hmm!! So things at the Studio were totally different from what i had thought...

Rey kinna pyaar se aake mila unse , no trace of irritation , fakeness or something 👍🏼...

N turned into a totally wala Lover-Boy 😉...

Those ladies , were showing-off in front of Kria...

Woh toh janti bhi nai thi k woh hain kon ...

OMG!!! That Shimona thought Kria Rey ki behan hai 😲 🤣...

Kya dimaag use kiya hai usne apna 😆...

N then Rey did give them something to talk about 😉...

Sab k samne he kissing 😳...

Uh-Oh!! So this argument is what made Rey gussa ...

Seriously!! Woh kon hote hain to decide what Rey has to do , inna bhi kya personal hona ab 🤔...

Agar esa he chala toh Rey being a Super star won't have his own life...

Rivaan bhi crying N Kria upset ho gai , so not good 😒...

Phew!!! The part like always was Superb 😃...

I'm loving this story ❤️...

About the tagline , yeh humesha khtarnak hoti hain ...

But i don't think so Kria will leave Rey...

Well now again i'll be waiting for the next part...

n thanks for the pm 😊

Quote

Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#770

Omg... maine precap padh ke kitna ulta socha tha... 😆

That kriya visiting sets... thats why rey shouting on her ... as he did'nt want her to be seen with him in general...😳

Lol... thankgod for that... he was shouting on someone else...😛

I was seriously thinking throughout... that shivam's evil mind is playing something ... 🤔

But I've never seen him so sweet ... lol... alia ke samne kriya ko kuch ulta bolta bhi kaise...😆

Rey na... palat gaya hai apni hi baat se... khud credit card diya tha... ab details maang rha hai... hadd hai...🤣

Oh god... such girls are nasty bi*ches... as if they own him... 😡

Trying to befriend kriya... to get easy approach to rey... lol... reality is harsh for them...😆

Omg... rey is an amazing lover... dedicated father ... he's so sweet...🤗

But seriously .. everything's gonna get pretty difficult for them...😒