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d3_rox

@d3_rox

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

Superb update...

Loved the way Rey scolded shivam 4 His family...

Loved RV n Rey's bonding...

Super amazing 1...

Plzzz update soon!!:):)

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

hayee manu 😃

tu RTP itna lovey dovey kyun likhti h?? 😛

dil karta h.. ye khatam hi na ho...

shivam's shock n short tempered state was expected 😳

but this kunal is quite sensible 👏

he handled both with ease ... gud 😊

awww .. little rivaan.. & his cute questionare 🤗

& the way rey take care of him... sho cute 😃

his queries are adorable yet honest n mature

precap - spontaneous??... seedhe seedhe bol na..

their convo at the end is finally in 'plan of action' .. 😆😉 ☺️

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Manuuu... This was... Sooo Perfect... 😃
at first i loved the small rift b/w Kria n Shivam... Then Rey n Shivam... And poor Kunal trying to calm down everything... 😆

Then when Rivaan said "I Love You dadda".. Aawww... Even i got emotional alng wid My Kriyaansh... :')

Then all those sweet n cute moments b/w Rey n Rivaan... Adrable... And Kriyaansh... They always get time to Romance dont they...? 😉 😆

in all... Each n evrything was just beautifully written... Just loved it...
You are just awesome Mannu... 😳

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Jily

@Jily

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

After my exam the first thing i find is gettig a pm from you and it actually got rid of my after exam stress so thanks for that!!!!!

And coming to the update it keeps on getting better :-)

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Anu

@Angelic.x.Chaos

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Wow simply amazing update as usual...

Loved Reys supervise for RV

The KriYaansh scenes were lovely...

Thanks for the PM

Update soon...

😊

~Anu~

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

This is just so amazing.. actually you are an awesome writer..

Its so beautifully described.. everything is so exceptionally good.. I can imagine everything so easily..

Those cute teasy moments.. and Rivaan talks..

I am so damn in love with this KriYansh.. and this story.. I just cant stop reading this one..
Mann hi nahi bharta kya karu?

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senoritashweta

@senoritashweta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

again it was fab !

totally loved it...!

just superb..update soon !

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

BEAUTIFUL

MARVELOUS

SPLENDID

AWESTRUCK

LOVED REY-RIVAAN N KRIYAANSH LIKE ANYFINK

UPDATE SOON :)

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

so finally kiri reached mumbai with rey n RV...

the bonding between father n son is getting stronger...

n RV is such a adorable kid...

n there lill lill part of romance is really cute...

even now i can't wait...😆

fcrse for the next part... :)

plz update soon...

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#500

Read d whole FF now...
Its so damn wonderful...
Loving it . ..
All d chappy till now r bang on...
Would love 2 read it further...plz pm me d nxt tym u update...