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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
truely no words to describe how beautifully you hve put it down...πŸ‘πŸ˜³ awesome job... so passionate n intense... loved reading it...
thank you very much for d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice

For warnings, well I need to warn you about the continual mention of food... Sorry food goes with my writings... So when you start reading the story please be sure of stacking a bucket full of pop corns( of your favorite flavor) and something to keep your cool (cool drink of your choice)... This I say for my own good... Cause if you enjoy reading the story well and good... if otherwise, at least I can say.. "Dil bhara nahi to kya hua... Pet to bhar gaya."πŸ˜† The mention of a few characters are done on purpose, for someone to reconsider the crush list.


And since I wrote that line there I can see a friend ready to send in the favorite blown up emo... to take my heart away.


So before my banter makes a dish out of your brains... Bheja Fry... I present you with the prologue, followed by the chapters.



*** Prologue ***


For a child its a childhood friend who comes up every night to share the food as the mother feeds her child; for an adolescent its the symbol of love; for the one who is nearing the end of his earthly life, it is the after world... The moon.


The moon resembles man in varied ways... the most common one being the phases of moon resemble the phases in man's life... During the phases of waning and waxing we witness the new moon, the crescent and the full moon; just as we witness the varied phases of ups and down in lives... The moon knows that even on a new moon night, the moon is there out, just that the human eyes don't see it... likewise at ever pit bottom in human life, there lies the biggest opportunity to bounce back... Only if man knew this!


Far away as it adorns the sky in daytime and at night, the moon hold testimony to many stories that unravel before it... One such story is being narrated here... as told to me by the night sky... a few moons ago.


itne dhyan se padh rahi hu while eating some namkeen items that even Ben got interested why I was so busy 🀣


wah, how beautifully put about the moon re.. afterall is moon made of 'cheese'? πŸ˜‰ 🀑 🀣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
ah lovely lovely... do u have any idea how many unique ways u have been showcasing Raghav and Sia, while the actual creators whose job it is to bring out a proper show couldn't do their job! Shame on them and we r missing out on the deadly combo of HC, SJ and Yash.
I'll never forgive and forget 😑

And so sis, all your creations are a breath of fresh air, I wish somehow the SB team could read your wonderful work!

Keep it up πŸ‘


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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
First things first... that siggy ... is to die for
Then comes the "impression" ... WOW ! That is so beautifully written. Brilliant!
Now I know Sneha why you dont need any chatting sessions... you are too occupied in creating such magic.. you dont really need any fools for your creativityπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shil_hc

truely no words to describe how beautifully you hve put it down...πŸ‘πŸ˜³ awesome job... so passionate n intense... loved reading it...

thank you very much for d pm...



Thanks Shil πŸ˜ƒ... Glad you found it passionate and intense.

Originally posted by: sam123_0

First things first... that siggy ... is to die for
Then comes the "impression" ... WOW ! That is so beautifully written. Brilliant!
Now I know Sneha why you dont need any chatting sessions... you are too occupied in creating such magic.. you dont really need any fools for your creativityπŸ˜†πŸ˜†



True... One look at the siggy and one dies a thousand deaths.

AWWW πŸ€—... that was for the 'impression' ... thanks πŸ˜ƒ

For the last two lines all I do is 😳.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: _dkmystery_


itne dhyan se padh rahi hu while eating some namkeen items that even Ben got interested why I was so busy 🀣


wah, how beautifully put about the moon re.. afterall is moon made of 'cheese'? πŸ˜‰ 🀑 🀣


Tu kya re baar baar is ben ko kheench laati hai... All I say to Ben is "There is no mystery to be solved her Sherlock... You are better off with watson...leave my sis with her namkeens!!!" πŸ˜†

I love moon re... Yup cheese it is for sure... Oye... menu cheese sandwich chahiye abhi ke abhi!!
... Tere benny ko bhej... woh le aayega... usse bhi to pata chale what he is getting into if he sees a future with you πŸ˜†

Originally posted by: _dkmystery_

ah lovely lovely... do u have any idea how many unique ways u have been showcasing Raghav and Sia, while the actual creators whose job it is to bring out a proper show couldn't do their job! Shame on them and we r missing out on the deadly combo of HC, SJ and Yash.
I'll never forgive and forget 😑
Oye ye post to venting post ban gayi re... chill maar... I know they ruined it... so doing my bit creating some Raghavi moments to relish.


And so sis, all your creations are a breath of fresh air, I wish somehow the SB team could read your wonderful work!
Thanks re πŸ˜ƒ


Keep it up πŸ‘
Aye Aye Sis




Come fall in chocolate!!!
YRF mujhe sue karegi... but i bet had they seen this first then they would have said the same too and it would be DCLJ Dilwale Chocolate Le Jayenge... πŸ˜†...I know I'm making no sense... chocolate make me o bonkers so te reaction... chal i'm taking a bite..u want some?... hmmm... chal le... just coz ur my chweet sis.πŸ€—

Edited by The_Inner_Voice - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
my take 😊 on chap 1(d) n (e)

huh!! why its that with ur writings k once started just want to read on n on.. i can see ur day by day increasing obsession with food πŸ˜• Raghav's dinner is not over yet πŸ€”...n here we are abt to go for next update (f) ..yeh new moon nyt kuch zyada long nahi chal rahi?? πŸ€”

aww poor Raghav πŸ˜’ still misses his lost love...BTW sneha her name was Aisha in previous updates
πŸ€” suddenly anaya kaisai ban gayi?? πŸ˜• may be u din't lik that name πŸ˜†..

my query:
does Raghav kno abt this pretty hobby of Sia where she has captured him in diff ways??

am soo excieted
to know wads gonna happen in next update so dont keep me waiting for long
n do it as soon as possible.

love
saba

Edited by premeeristry - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Sneha you are back! πŸ€—

That update was so good that I forgive you for being away for so long. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: premeeristry

my take 😊...will take a while...but for tym being it was lovely!!



Oye badla le rahi hai kya Saba πŸ˜†... maine chapter update karne mein time lagaya... tu comment karne mein lagayegi... πŸ˜†... now thats why we are friends...dono ek jaise hain πŸ˜†

For time being thanku and one Jhappi πŸ€—


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