SS & KR OS! (Digressing the Shekhawat/Singhania)

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hey Marium
both d versions r superb yar

kriya nd sharon bored with reyam cuz they watching cricket match. Kya kare boys r always boys
Game was superb yar

krisha ne to reyam ki band hi baja di hai
reyam doing all household work for their wife n getting frustrated due to this nd their wife giving them punishment for ignoring them

But reyam also naughty n they have equal plans to take advantage against their wife
i really love d update

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lovely222

@lovely222

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

poor swayam had to do those things which really need patience and at the end his patience got rewarded so it was a beautiful game and a beautiful os marium thanx for the PM

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raina

@--RAINA--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awsome os
luvd it
thankx 4 d link dheeta

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Res
Unres
Loved the OS 😊 card game was interesting , poor swayam sharon ne usse kitna kaam karvaya 😆 and swayam ne bhi revenge le liya in his style 😉 ...ending was too romantic 😳 . Do I need to tell you how awesome writer you are... I love reading your works .
Sorry for unres- ing late ( exam time ) 😭

Edited by swaron_pk - 12 years ago

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

sorry mera res 26 march tak as my exams going on
but its superb
res

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

OMG . . .
Dat was an awsome-dowsome yaar. . .
I loved d KR version. . .
Loved d whole card game with our naughty kria's demands and our hero rey's work by completng her demand. .
Loved it totaly. . . . .
U realy are an awsome writter. . .
Pls. .do write on KR. .i would realy love to read it. . . .
M sending u buddy requst do accept it. . .

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Pinkpearly

@Pinkpearly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

wow fabulous os
Kriyaansh playing cards so lovely
Luv it

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Fabulous os!!
As usual amazingly written...:)
I luvd the whole card game..
Aww...poor swayam..had to work so hard..

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

it was a beautiful os.. swaron as well as kriyaanhs..

love dese 2 couples like anythng... 😳

d os's were realy good 👏

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Rabina

@raveena2807

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

The girls have got smart way of getting their husbands do the household chores and the boys have their own way of evening things out. Overall, a nicely written story. I particularly liked two things: 1) Girls adoring their husbands even in totally frustrated state of mind. 2) Boys holding their wives close to them even when totally engrossed in the match.

Keep writing. Its always a pleasure to read your write ups.

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