Virman FF - Kaise imtihai leti hai yeh zindagi - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey i jst read aal da updates i missed!!!
da story is so awesome!!!!
so manvi luvs virat bt is nt accepting😉
nd virat is so sweet nd caring😳
y cnt dis swamini leave dem alone😡
haww kiss hote hote ruk gaya😔 i hate des phone calls😆
waiting 2 see wat happens next...
im so sry fr nt commenting on tym...
ma skul is so irritating😡 ill try 2 comment regularly frm next tym..
plzz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

lovely update

plz cont soon
thanks 4 pm me


Yh sure n thanks for comment
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zinai

loved ur update...pls continue soon...


Thanks for comment
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi13

hey i jst read aal da updates i missed!!!

da story is so awesome!!!!
so manvi luvs virat bt is nt accepting😉
nd virat is so sweet nd caring😳
y cnt dis swamini leave dem alone😡
haww kiss hote hote ruk gaya😔i hate des phone calls😆
waiting 2 see wat happens next...
im so sry fr nt commenting on tym...
ma skul is so irritating😡ill try 2 comment regularly frm next tym..
plzz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm


Thanks for ur comment really admire it
Posted: 12 years ago
Continue part 14 As she enters the mall she is surprised jst like the was she was the first time she visited the mall. She was looking around asking herself where to start n were to start as virat saw her looking around with a opened mouth he went up to her and said.

Virat ' mu(mouth) toh band karlo ( pushing her chin up so it closes her mouth)

As soon as virat says that dabbu glows at hw both are tlking to each other and hw there mischief will nvr end, if ther married or not.

Manvi- (raising one eyebrow) if ur done nw should be move on(begins to walk ) I have to buy so many things Di is preganant and it like no one cares everyone is jst looking after me,

Virat ' So wat nw ur gonna buy ur di CARE from here ( not looking at her and continues to walk)

Manvi jst stops walking and begins to look and viraat evily, as virat realizes that he is ahead of her he turns around n looks at her with a confused look

Manvi ' very funny (sarcastically) n begin to walk again.

As they are walking dabbu says

Dabbu ' manvi di

Manvi (turning around) yes dabba

Dabbu- di ma gave me a list and I have to buy her thing before we get home so im going ( he jst went without waiting for her to say anything)

Manvi ' yeh dabbu be na I didn't even letme say anything and jst left( then begins to walk again with virat bt still irrated with daabu)

Virat ' to bandariya wat to u need to get?( he said this while he was txting on his fone)

Manvi ' (she was already irrated bt because virat was texting god knws who she got angry) viirat y don't u go home Ill buy everything myself and meet u buy the car as u don't seem very intreseted

Virat ' (he gets a sense of jealousy) jealous (with a question look)

Manvi- chepu y would I be jealous and nw I gotta buy afew things so u coming or not

As soon as she completes this sentenceshe can see a black vision but she tries to ignore it and continue walking till she gets the same black vision again bt this time she feels dizzy n about to fall till virat caught her.

Virat ' ( he caught her and made her sit by the near by chair ) manvi r u okay ( abit worried)

Manvi ' yh im fine ( she tries to get up bt its like she cnt evn hold her own weight)

Virat- if u cnt get up y try (then take a small pause) manvi listen there is a medician store near by Ill go and get u medician

Manvi doesn't say anything she jst agrees with him knwing that's the best thing to do n he is right anyway

Then virat goes and returns within 5 minutes he hand her the medician and has she finished with the medician she went to the flashback were jst like nw virat gave her medication. (if u look for the scene its Virman scene31# on utube)

As viraat saw her in her own world he clicked his fingures infront of he face and said

Virat- manvi look you r nt well lets go home we will come back tomorrow promise

Manvi who had not come back from that trace yet jst agree.

As they reached the car virat rang dabbu and told him everything and told him to meet by the car.

The journey back home is really quite as manvi doesn't want to tlk woundering wat happened to her in the mall where did all those thoughts come from, was there anything wrong with her had anything like this happen in the past.

As they reach home manvi goes straight to her room everyone gets worried and ask virat wat happen

Dadaji ' virat manvi ko kya kua why did she go like this is everything ok

Virat then looked up and said

Virat ' dadaji wat shall I say I don't knw what happened myself everything was fine till she felt dizzy so I gave her medi
Edited by Sia12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update sia...😊
wats wrng with manvi????
update next part soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
Part 15
He then looked up and said

Virat - dont worry she will be fine maybe its bcuz she hasnt been out for so long(evn tho he said this he wasnt satifid himself he knew something was wrong)

Everyone jst agreed with him knwin he cn nvr b wrong in manvis case

As virat finished he looked dwn and wlked towards manvis room, wen he got to the room he thought the best thing to do is ask her if she wats to met the doctor

He knw that she wouldnt agree bt he had to try. So he went in n

Virat - wat happened bandariya,u ok y did u com like this(hopin for a unexpected responce)

Yes the responce was unexpected bt not the way he responed with no answer she jst looked at him

Virat - kya hua, bandariya bol ku nahi rahi.mon vrat rakha hai kya

Manvi stil not reactin to anything he was saying the moment was getting unusual so virat began to walk out the room not botherin to say anythin else.

As he got to the door

Manvi - virat i want to go to the doctors (avoidin eye contact)

Virat was damn wrong, he didnt evn hav to ask her to go doctors. She wanted to go herself but the question was why?
So he thought of askin her

Virat -(walkin toward manvi placing his hand towards her should) kya hua manvi tum tik toh ho na

Manvi moved afew steps ahead which removed his hand from her shoulder

Manvi - virat im okay bt still i jst wanna met the doctor (she nvr y she was asking him bt she felt like he was the only person who would take he without so many question)

Virat nvr knew y she wanted to meet the doctor bt he ws still happy that he didnt hav to do anythin n she agreed without him doing anything

Virat - yh sure we will go first thing tomorrow morning(after sayin this he had a light smile on his face and walked out without any discussion)

Nxt morning

Everyone was at the breakfast table eating there breakfast n enjoyin there usual convo. Until virat said to the family

Virat - sorry for disturbin ur convo bt i jst had to say that me and manvi are goin to the... (And doesnt conplete his sentence as he gets cut off by manvi)

Manvi - studio together today jst had to telll u this (she avoided tellun everyone the truth that they r going hospital as everyone will get disturbed)

As soon as everyone finished with there breakfast they continued there normal routine viren and chachu go office and the women get started with the house work
Hwevr at the same time virman were leaving the house to attend the doctors appointment

At the doctors

Virman go in and to the reception, to inform that they r here

Virat - (informing the receptionist there here) ms manvi we hav a appointment for 10:20

Receptionist - yh sure sir plz hav a seat and u will be seen shortly

They didnt hav a very long wwait until they got called by the doctor

Dr- ms manvi

As her name was mention she got up and was walkin toward the cabin until she saw that virat was also comin along. She turn around and said

Manvi - chepu u comin along aswell (givin a no u cnt look)

As she said that he jst sat down, all he cared about was aleast manvi came to the doctors and its not as if she will get the reports today anyway.

As she entered the doctors cabin

Dr- good mornin ms manvi hw r u doin?

Manvi - im fine dr

Dr- okay so may i knw wat the problem

Manvi - well doctor i hav been feelin dizzy for the last few days i would jst like to hav a check up to knw if evrythin is okay

Dr- yh sure so would u plz come to the examination room

Then the dr and manvi went to the examination room, had a few tests and came out after like 15 minutes

Manvi -is everythin okay dr

Dr- cnt exactly say yet bt u will recieve ur reports tomorrow u cn either hav em delivered or u cn come and pick um up urself

Manvi - thank u dr and yes would u plz get the reports delieved tomorrow
(bt she didnt knw hw much of a mistake she is doing by asking if they can be delievered

Dr- yh sure no problem

Then manvi walked out of the cabin thankin the dr

As she walked out to virat and said

Manvi - shall v go (n began to walk nt waitin for his answer )

Virat really wanted to knw what the doctor has said bt he couldnt go in as manvi told him to com .so then.virat decided to directly ask manvi to her face

As the reached the car, both sat in.a began to drive

Virat- (looked at manvi and asked.) Wat did the doctor say?

Manvi- nothing really jst took some test n said the reports will be delivered tomorrow

That was the last they both said for the rest of jouney home. As they reached home and were about to enter the house

Manvi - ( she stoped and looked towards virat ) virat plz dont tell anyone that we went to the doctors especially di

Virat - but manvi she is ur di and has the complete right to knw

Manvi - plz virat

He was left with no option and jst agreed to wat manvi said

As they entered the house they went straight to there rooms.

In manvis room
(to herself) i hav to make sure bo one sees those reports tomorrow otherwise they will get suspecious

In virats room
(to himself) manci u nvr let me come into the doctors with u bt i hav the complete right to knw wat is wrong with u so i hav to make sure i see the reports be4 u tomorrow

The whole day jst passed like normal evntho both were behaving weird bcuz of the test they didnt let the family get knowledge about it.

The nxt morning both virman were waitin for the reports despritly as the reports can home thankfully virat was the first one to get hold of em bt he had to be quick as he hav to giv em to manvi

Wen virat was about to open the report he prayed to god that everythin would be fine as they had already been through alot

Virat then opened the report

So nw wat shall i do i hav got some advise from an IF friends so the nxt few update
So if u want me so add somethin in the story plz go head and tell me wat i should add nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waoo dear nice
Short tha but next time long han
Plz continue soon...
N thanxx 4 updating fast...
Posted: 12 years ago
Continue part 15

As he opened the report he saw that in the reports it said manvi was preganant. He was on cloud nine he had the news he was gonna become a papa once agin bt this happiness didnt last for long

To himself - y does this happen to me, y cnt i stay happy for long i am gonna becom papa bt i cnt share this news with manvi. She will tak it all wrong she doesnt evn knw we r married wat shall i do

As he was think it was also nearly breakfast time evryone ws gatherin to the breakfast table except manvi who ws gonna hav breakfast in her room

Everyone noticed virat standing lifeless near the door they also noticed the reports in his hands.

They walked up to him and viren placed his hand on virats shoulder askin him if he was okay

Viren- virat r u okay? Wat happened ? Y u standin like this?

Virat without sayin anythin handed the reports over to viren

Viren then red the reports and said

Viren- ur becomin a father

Everyone got happy nt remembering the bitter truth behind this beautiful phase

Everyone cam over n gave him a hug with congraulations bt he didnt responed neither to the hug or anything things they said

Everone notice this and dadaji decided to ask him wat the actual problem

Dadaji- wats wrong virat u should be happy u r gonna become a father

Virat- no im not(small pause,and then fall on the ground) manvi will nvr giv birth to this child she doesnt even remeber we were married (n began to cry) she will take all this wrong wat am i going.to do nw hw am i gonna face her.

His mom then went forward and sat right infront of him cuppin his face into her hands

Vm- virat beta we will jst hav to tell her everythin then

Virat- ( he looked into his mothers eyes and said ) no we cnt do that beside she wont believe me and it cn be dangerous for her as well
(then looks down again) if only i had maintain distance from her bt y couldnt i stop my self. Its all my fault both will hav to suffer because of me.my child n my wife

Vm then pulled him into a hug so that he doesnt completely blame himself he had totally broke down. No one knw wat to do bt virat then stood up and said

Virat- plz dont tell manvi this she is waitin for her reports bt dont tell her that i have em( he looked up and said) i will solve this my way.

As soon as he said this he walked away and went into his room, thinkin hw will he tell manvi this she doesnt even remember wat happened that night all she thought was she feel asleep in his chest wen the truth was alot more than this happened that night.

After breakfast normally everyone used to get ready for work n leave bt today no one wanted to go. After a while wen manvi came out the room she noticed everyone at home. Everyone was presend in hall from like dadaji to shlok

Manvi - wat happen is there a festival today

Everyone was trin to behave normal bt it wasnt workin

Chachi - (she stood up from her sofa a gav it to manvi) sit down manvi

Bt she didnt agree and made chachi sit back down there was someghin unsual going on bt wat????

Manvi - (to virat) chepu y didnt u go to work today

Virat - (he looked up and said) manvi v need to tlk

Everyone was shocked hw did virat all of a sudden change his mind he didnt want anyone to tel her anythin bt then he was gonna tell her himself



Manvi - (she gave him a yes im listen look)

Virat - manvi ( he then went on his knees and said) manvi will u marry me

Everyone was shocked they expected him to tell her the truth that she is preganant but no he proposed her instead.
However as he said this to manvi jst walked away with no responce. It was as if she didnt knw how to react yes she had feelings for virat but was it love or...

In manvis room
To herself - as she walked into the room she was suprised wat had he jst said he propsed me. Bt hw cn he marry me has he found out that im preganant with his child. ( she had already seen the reports env b4 virat bt she nvr knw hw to tell everyone this)

In the hall - everyone was shocked to hw virat proposed her wen he was actually ment to be tellin him the truth

Jeevika - virat y didnt u jst tell her the truth

Virat- bhabhi she would be able to bear it. Anyway stress isnt good for he. This way if she agrees to marry me i could tell her that she is prgangt after we r married

Vm - bt wont she find out that she is preganant

Virat - yes thats true bt ill figure something out and i hav also gotta tlk to the doctor, n ask her for futher advise

After this everyone went to there room, and in the evenin virat was in the doctors cabin

Dr- its totally ur chose virat u cn either abort the child or keep it, bt keepin the baby may be dangerous for her in long term, she has been through alot bt if u want to keep the baby u hav to tell manvi the truth

Virat - bt doctor wont this be dangerous for manvi.

Dr- yes it may be dangerous bt if u really want to hear the truth its aborting will be more dangerous

Virat - so wats ur advise doctor

Dr- my advise is to keep the baby n tell her the truth. But then again its all ur chose

After this convo virat headed home

Okay i knw some people may not like this bt some people may not. In addition this isnt my thought its actually a friend on IF and the nxt 2 parts are her point of view bt im jst riting
So plz like leave ur comments and tell me if u want me to change anythin and if so plz tell me what i should do next
Thanks for readin n if u want pms add me to ur buddy list.
Posted: 12 years ago
I eint feeling very well thats y i havnt been updatin, so basically thats the reason i dnt reply to pm or scraps
Sorry guyz i will update as soon as im well agaib

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