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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

even as i am reading this i feel like crying ...i do not know how two fictional character become so real that whenever i read some thing beautiful like this os, i want to see them as you describe them on tv...

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Edited on Page 6

Sorry for being late!

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ITS_LEENA

@ITS_LEENA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

simply awesome,loved it

thanks for pm

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ArHiLover-x

@ArHiLover-x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Very nice!!! All your ideas were great, so I know I will like all of them!!

Can't wait to read the next OS/TS!!

thanks for the PM :)

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adithyan

@adithyan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

their life is really beautiful than a dream...😃

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Very well written !! next one plz on Khushi finding her things in Arnav's cupboard.

thnx 4 pm.

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Wonderful twoshot...beautiful...that dialouge from khush was my fav..n arnavs reaction after that...n u paid a tribute to that beautiful scene by this

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Mahnoor

@rockprincess123

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

This just goes to show how pure Love is as an emotion and a feeling.

It promises you to be gifted and blessed with one your heart truly accepts and anything one is found to give up or sacrifice for the sake of being with someone they love only seems the minimum.

That is love. That is Arnav and Khushi's love. The TS was sooo beautifully written and the fact that they were both renited together made it all the more special and wonderful to read.

The scenario which they were both in, Arnav designing a new clothing range dedicated to Khushi was the sweetest thing ever and it was soo real.

I loved it, hope to hear more soon! X

Edited by rockprincess123 - 12 years ago

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MOHIT

@MT_loverboy

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

di ... read it first ...

and liked it so muchhh ...!!!! though long but still has the strength to bound the reader to itself

kived it

and i want u to write diwali episdoe my way

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fleurs

@fleurs

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Loved the concept "SAPNO SE KHOOBSURAT"a lot…….. ohhh, sometimes even I wish that reality is as beautiful as my dreams……but I know that this is life……a rugged path with sparely any time to even enjoy one's dreams…. Thanks for the PM.

Was wondering all through the first half as to what was Arnav planning………….he dedicated his fashion show to his wife keeping her as the crux of the concept of his show………..wonderful 😃

It was sweet of his employees to keep this fact unheard by their Boss's wife

Khushi worried about his health & planning to pull out the answer to his questions as to what made him toil so much yet not have a single doubt on him was admirable

Khushi making up her mind not to give into Arnav's plan but then thinking of the efforts he took all these days & deciding to support him was lovely

Arnav telling the whole world about the angel God sent into his life who made it unbelievably colourful & Khushi hugging him not bothering about the crowd was well framed 👍🏼

The last part wherein Arnav explains to Khushi about his behavior towards her on hearing about her engagement, at the boutique ….was beautifully portrayed

I love both the concepts especially concept no.2 ... waiting to read them

2. Khushi finding her things in arnavs cupboard.

3.The diwali episode my way

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