Chasing Dreams Thd3- Chp23 Pg102, Thd 4 Link Pg141 - Page 17

Originally posted by: vgedin

For me the highlight of the update was Shyam's statement: "Anju you have got to stop judging people. Just because a woman decides to live in with a man, it doesn't mean she isn't cultured. Your brother is the one who believe in this. How would feel if someone judged him?"

There, one of the many, many reasons I despised that movie Cocktail. One must distinguish between cultured, religious, traditional and well-behaved.

That's not to say I don't like Anjali, she is a lovely sister. And when dealing with a brother like ASR, one needs to meddle a little :D

I don't blame NK for reacting the way he did, anyone in his position would have drawn the same conclusions. To see something like that hurts your feelings, more so your ego. But what can I do, I am never able to see anything wrong in Arnav and Khushi kissing, thanks to the way you write it. It feels like that's the most natural thing to happen, just'right.

I love Payal and Aakash. Aakash for his silent understanding and Payal for being the voice of reason without being even remotely judgmental. Everyone should be blessed with a friend like her.

Now what is bugging me is your use of the term mirage in the last line. Why? What Arnav feels is very very real, and I understand that Khushi may think the possibility of a long term relationship with someone like Arnav a far fetched dream, yet ' mirage? An illusion?

I love this Khushi and trust her to handle this like an adult, with the support of Payal of course. Want to see what happens next.. Gabbar, when are you giving this greedy Kaalia Chapter 20?

I just realised there are a couple of typos in this line. let me edit.

I suck at proof reading.

And I agree with you on Cocktail. Its such a backward and misogynistic movie. the movie left a bad taste although DPad did an awesome job.

Originally posted by: Manisha.

So my prediction was right...NK did regret his words and come back to see a scene which shattered his heart into a million pieces

I am glad the NK Khushi relationship is done with and in my opinion its best to keep the relationship strictly professional.

I liked the conversation in NK's house. handled very maturely.

I am enthusiastic and apprehensive about the date..yes, both Arnav's and khushi's emotions are battling within me..

My only wish is not to see Khushi emotionally destroyed.

NB I want to know how many more chapters have u planned.

Round about 40 (give or take 5).

There is a book 2 for this story too. I came up with the story for book 2 and book 1 came as a prequel. So I have book 2 figured out better.

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

Round about 40 (give or take 5).

There is a book 2 for this story too. I came up with the story for book 2 and book 1 came as a prequel. So I have book 2 figured out better.

Originally posted by: Eccentrica

Book 2 as in season 2 for Chasing dreams?

And where does the prologue feature (I'm guessing the end of book 1)?

Prologue is a part of Book 1. There will be about 8 chapters after the excerpt happens.

The chapter numbers are undefined at the moment. Sometimes I decide to take bits of the next chapter and add them to the previous one. Initially my plan was to writer chapters averaging 3k words with 3 updates a week. Now I write about, 5k words each chapter and update twice a week.

Both Khushi and NK acted like mature adults and resolved their issues in an amicable way instead of letting the issue drag on. NK was bound to feel hurt , after all he is human. I liked when NK said that he wont be able to remain friends with Khushi. Being friends with someone for whom you have feelings is very difficult. And i think whatever one tries letting go of all the amorous feelings and replacing it by a platonic relationship is not easy. I am looking forward to the next part where Khushi and Arnav sort out what is there between them.

Phew... Tht was really dramatic to say the least!!!! Awesome!!!! So what's gonna happen when Arhi meet n hv "the" talk?!?! It sure is exciting ... Hoe u update soon!!!! Great update!!

lovely and long update

NAACH B ...IT WAS A WHIRLWIND UPDATE

loved the update...Payel is super cool in your FF,loved her
Finally,Arnav and Khushi decided to talk about their relationship...waiting to see what happens next..
thanks for pm😊