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Posted: 12 years ago
Removed.

No. I do not have a blog.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Saiiyuu .. Thank you for Declaring to your readers

that Akash babwa is mine in this epic kahani ..
YES.. HE'S MY... PRECIOUS!!! ...😆
& the dedication made my Dil Bahut Happy ..
🤗 Jhappi Wala Hug .. 😳
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Why is life soo complicated ..? Love is So complex ..
How the heck do you know what it is ..?
I'm Baffled myself .. 😆..
But to me it seems like they are both in love.. But can't seem to admit it in a sense ..
They both Hope .. !! She Hopes he would accept her as a Wife & he As a Hubby .. !! Talk to each other ..!!
Come on Arnav .. Just Admit it to yourself .. You WANT to marry her .. Not for Arya .. But for YOURSELF .. You know She's the best thing since Sliced bread ..
Yeah.. Arya wants you as her mum so Why not be hubby & wife .. Wow !!
What a Great way to 'propose'.. Idiot !!
GO TELL HER ..She will accept you as a hubby..if you just tell her ..
He is reminding me of Aditiya .. Just hiding behind other things rather than admitting his own feelings ..*sigh* .. I know that it's difficult that La broke you heart .. but it doesn't mean that all women are the same .. !
But what would happen IF Arya gets bored of khushi & doesn't want her anymore ..Would he divorce khushi then.. to keep his daughter happy?! .. 😕
Phahahahaha🤣.. Ohh .. I loved Arnav MU payal's 'drink' haha ..
Oh, how embarrassing must that have been for him .. 😆 :') ..
I love payal's attitude .. <3
Get with the flow Dadi & mami .. Come on ..it's not rocket science.. Akash gave you a hint .. LOL ..
Woah .. Akash is a class a flirt who remembers alot of bollywood lines ..
Seriously .. Me and Him are made for each other .. 😳 ..
Dialogue was from DDLJ, when Simran's mum asks what girl he wants .. & he looks at kajol sitting on the side .. & she blushes .. & he tells her mum those dialogues .. hayee .. LOL ..
A mothers instinct .. they will always know .. ! Just with her moving into arnav..
she knows why her daughter is soo attached to shantivan .. Ohh.. I'm scared about the implications that might happen .. As you said previous update .. Her mom takes time on forgiving .... when she forgives she puts her hand on her head ..
Sugaar .. I'm dying to know what will happen next .. you left it at the nail biting moment .. !!
You're an awesome writer !! & I agree with K ..😆 :P .. ;) ..
(sorry.. it's 1.30 am .. It makes no sense..)
Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
La!

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Arnav Singh Raizada does all the right things in the wrong way !

Like seriously...He gave her his mother's Payals and made her feel like they were a compensation when he really wanted to give her because he knew she loved wearing them ! And especially that he gave her his mother's payals which meant so much to his mother means Khushi means much much more to him... He couldn't make her realize that !

He made her wear them by himself



Nalayak hai wo...

And then he wants to marry her ... For a lot reasons ...one being Arya ...And more for himself ... Wants to marry her asap and give her a happy happy life ...
But to propose her with motherhood? Again making her feel as if he was only fulfulling his daughters demands? Yes he was doing that... Arya pushed him into proposing but she really wasn't the only reason right ? If he hadn't wanted to marry her himself he wouldn''t have let Arya talk him into doing that !

He let her enter his house because of Arya... Arya has always been the most important factor in their realtionship but still She wasn't the only factor !

Like I guessed she asked him why he wanted to marry her and he...😡

He's double nalayak !!

And what a twist ! Everybody including me and Khushi thought they were his mother's bangles ... Of course its her fault that she expected that of him ... Expectation leads to disappointment and In her disappointment that it wasn't his mother's bangles that he was giving her she failed to appreciate that he gave her her Payal. Any other day this gesture would have made her happy but now she expects a lot more from him eventhough she knows he's not capable of it ! And that too all of a sudden...

She had convinced herself and accepted what little he offered her ...What changed everything now ? She probably always knew that she loved him... Or she fell in love with him gradually and may be reciprocated some of her feelings ...

That Mrs. Tripathi talked behind their backs?

That her mother had been apprehensive about sending her back to Delhi? So what was wrong in her apprehension... You did what exactly you promised her you will not...

That she didn't have much time before her family decides to marry her off to somebody else??

People like Arnav Singh Raizada don't change overnight !

And to let Arya emotionally push her into nodding and he asks her why she wasn't smiling ??
Didn't he have the good sense to think that she nodded only after Arya cried so much ? Didn't he think that after what she told him about her love for Arya she may have nodded only because she couldn't say no to her ! Only because she was being selfless... She wasn't doing that but he doesn't know that !

Why didn't he have the common sense to ask her if she was really okay with the decision?

Now that I think of it, she could've asked him the same questions actually ...

Instead they jumped to conclusions

They love each other...but both hope someday they'd come to accept each other as husband and wife ? Seriously ? 😡

What is this some kind of compromise?

Both of them have to talk to each other ! Bas

And lol Akash is so funny... what did he think Payal was drinking ?? 😆
And he does all the open flirting with Khushi and flirts with Payal in SMS and alone ?? If he had openly flirted with Payal his family wouldn't be in for a big disappointment now :D
And he's here only for holidays ? Main tho bhool hi gayi thi...
I for once recognised that dialogue ... :D

And they're plotting Akash and Khushi's wedding ! Why will they not ?

Raizadas are blind...Period.

Garima reacted exactly like I'd have expected her to... Whatever may be the point, her trust in her daughter broke! And that too in a room full of strangers ... For a woman who had heard the worst from society, she'd have the most difficult time accepting the fact that it wasn't just vile words about her daughter from a selfish woman... And the way she went into his embrace willingly would be too much for a mother to bear... Khushi is going to have a tough time with Garima




I only hope Arnav doesn't announce in his business like tone that he would marry Khushi as if finalizing a deal... I hope he helps her win her mother !

But for Garima to accept Khushi's decision whole heartedly is difficult... Because Arnav comes with Arya...The kid may be uber cute but still...

And last but not the least... Guptas aren't the only ones who would be shocked!

The Raizadas? They were contemplating marriage between Akash and Khushi and now Arnav and Khushi ? Not that they'd mind ... But Nani and Mami would be shocked for sure ! How ill they react to this?

Anjali wants a temple marriage ?? For herself ? Or Arnav Khushi ? I didn't understand that... I mean after righting the wrong she did, she will force Shyam to marry her ?

But Shyam tho kab se ready hain 😕

OMG I spoke so much

Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
K! Edit
I have realized one important fact about Saiyu, she is a CONFIRMED drama queen, who needs CONSTANT reassurance about this story, and in addition to that she shamelessly fishes for compliments. This was a vital and valid update, so girl what is the point behind your rant? Actually don't bother answering that "Frankly my dear I don't give a damn."

This update had many disappointments for me and I will start off with Arnav as no one disappointed me as he did. He loves Khushi and does not have the guts to tell her that and wants her to be with him for all the wrong reasons. Yes, wanting to marry Khushi for his daughter is a WRONG reason. The way he approached the matter was wrong and his proposal was fit to be thrown out. Arnav needs to realize, his daughter may ask for the moon next and he cannot get it for her. He needs to better his parenting skills and next he needs to be sensitive to other's needs. A gift which insults a person is no gift at all; he gave her his mother's Payal for what? Dude you are a sure shot candidate for the "Worst Person in the World" award. Arnav please realize a simple fact of family life, a woman becomes a wife first then a mother. Please use that mind of yours and get your act together.

Khushi is a fool and no one can help her but herself. She has put her heart out there and is now rethinking her decision. If I am not wrong from the beginning she wanted to connect with Arnav on a physical level as she was aware as he was emotionally unavailable. The compatibility she sought was a physical one alone. Had she spoken to him about her desires in life, she would not have been this disappointed. The on now and off now thing she has going will not help her at all. She should soul search and find answers, does she want to marry Arnav because she wants feels the need to be with him complying with society norms or does she want to marry Arnav because she loves him. He is not alone here, comes with a child and she has accepted the child and why the hesitation to take the step because he does not believe in marriage. He is more than a husband to you and has done many things despite not believing in marriage so, talk to him and sort things out.

Payal and Akash, guys please get on a Ferrari for your relationship or the lack of it to proceed, bullock carts are used in remote villages. But the DDLJ scene was so cute and hope Payal gives Akash a chance to get over his Bollywood hangover and be himself and woo her.

I am feeling bad for Garima; she feels the disappointment of a child failing her, right or wrong can always be argued. She sent Khushi to Delhi, placing all her trust and confidence in her, to see her child doing exactly what she had expected her not to do can be disappointing for any parent. Khushi has given fodder to gossip and the simple people the Guptas are it will hurt them. I am not judging Garima here, I sympathize with her, there is nothing more hurtful, trust broken by someone you placed all your trust in.

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Twiggy!

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I want to smack Arnav's head with a broom right about now. He has let me down. He can save that pathetic ASR-ness for his business, it may look sexy and be useful in that sphere; but to emotionally blackmail Khushi into marrying him, and that too in order to fulfill his child's whim is wrong on so many levels. Not only as a lover, thats pretty bad even as a parent. He is being a child even more than Arya. Doesn't have the guts to admit that he wants Khushi in his life, doesn't have what it takes to explain things to his child - I am so bloody disappointed.


Khushi is no less, though she is the wronged one here. What does she want? I admired her for her ability to love unconditionally, now what happened to that? I understand the heartbreak, one cannot help but hope when the foolish heart is in love - what I don't understand are her expectations from Arnav. She knows what he wants and she dived in, very consciously, knowing all about that. What exactly does she want from Arnav now?


Kya judging Garima? She only slapped Khushi. If it were me and if Khushi were my daughter, I would beat the living daylights out of her. I treat her like my own kin, trust her and send her to a new city - she first goes and lives with some other family, insists on living there despite the catcalls we have to bear, refuses a marriage proposal without reason and then runs into the arms of her boss (with a child!) in front of everyone, and doesn't even have the courtesy to be polite or apologetic about it. W*F? From a mother's perspective, Garima is right to feel wronged and hurt and betrayed - I would have been surprised had she not slapped Khushi.


I don't know what you have planned Saiyyu, but the shit has now hit the fan. Arnav needs to redeem himself in Khushi's eyes (and mine!), Khushi needs to figure somethings out (beginning with apologizing to her family) and everybody just needs a reality check. I trust you to bring in some Saiyyu-ness and make everything better, can't wait for the next update :)


PS - Why did you think this update wasn't up to the mark? Your writing was so good, I am positively fuming at this point as if all this happened for real in front of my eyes. Aaj tera birthday na hota toh main tujhe do mukke deti, to drive some sense into you :P

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
unres...!!!
***edited*** an update full of mixed emotions for me...!!!😕
first toh i know that arnav will make my first impression of himself right...that"he is a jerkk..and wo b bada wala"😡...who is the person n this world who asks a girl who is IMPORTANT AS AIR in his life to marry him for his DAUGHTER...I mean get a life dude...and think straight...!! think that u love her...realize your feelings about her...you know that u cant live a second without her...!!😭

khushi kaunsi samajdaar hai...wo b ekk number ki bevkoof hai...if he is not saying then u say that u love him...that u want to be with him AS HIS WIFE AS WELL AS MOTHER OF ARYA...!!!...beacuse of arnav she met arya...!!!

dono ekk dusre k baare me unsure hai..one is thinking that he doesnot love her...other is thinking that she will never accept him..!!!😭

payaash...they are the best...nd that DDLJ dailogue...wow..!! i like them...atleast they are sure about each other...par unki taraf gharwale dhayan hi kahan de rahe hai...wo toh alag hi jodiyaan bananne me lage huye...TYPICAL RAIZADAS...!!!😃

garima is very much right at her place...every mother wants that her daughter will remain happy in her life and seeing khushi's this kind of attitude will definately make her angry only and then our ARROGANT SEXXY RAIZADA😳 is so much popular in female world...!!!

lets see..!!! what will be the result of this slap..!!! will arnav say something...!! or khushi will get married to AKAASH(jo ki impossible hai...hahah..muje pata hai,,,,twists and turns k baad ArHi mil hi jayenge...!!!

i know...i know...mere comments bade hi bakwaas hote hain but main try poori karti hun..!!!😳
Edited by avantisharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Am commenting of the update page l n n
I was sure tht some surprise were on the way !! This part was full of mixed emotions: luv , hurt , dispointment , anger ...
Was litle dispointed with both Arnav & khushi Arnav being so idiot He is the great ASR bt whn it come to emotions , woman feelings he is so stupid , cant he told her tht he also wanted her i his life , he cant live without her, he wanted her with him forever , he is proposing her for himself couldnt he just say thse 4 magical words " I Love u damn it " , couldnt he tells her he wanted her as wife not only Arya's mother !!
And khushi , here in this story she is very brave girl, she was sure about all her decision , why couldnt she told him she luvs him , she wanted to be his wife , she will accept him as her husband!! but I can understand tht she want him to propose her , aftre all she is girl & any girl would love if her dream man propose her !!



Well loved whn he giftd her his mother' payal



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NAni & mami think tht akash want to marry khushi , thts wht irritated me the most , all ths misunderstanding btwn arshi is enough !!😵
And here come the storm , Garima make an entry & wht an entry , in the wrong tym , well as a mother she want the best for her daughter so mayb I can understand her !! bt poor khsuhi alwayz gt a hard slap 😭 But I really loved her whn she stand & showed her feelings!!

Ok waiting for next chapp to know wht will happen!!




Edited by Zineb-Arshiluvr - 12 years ago
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isbkuch barbaad kr dia Arnav ne..1stly i thot it was d jewellary..d kangans..which she was xpectinbt it was his mom's payal..den i thot he wud propose her..bt he askd hw imp Arya was 4 her..instd of askin hw imp he z 2 her..Khushi k lyf ka ye wrst day hoga..1st Arnav broke her heart wid d anklet..n xctlie doin d compnsation part..den cmmndin her 2 marry him 4 Arya..n nt 4 himslf..atlst bol k toh dekhta..she wud hav either accptd or rejected..yai hota jaad se jaada..n he knows she wud hav nt rejectd him..she's been soo close 2 him..nt juz 4 Arya..bt 4 him as well..he was abt 2 announce bt Garima naam ka tuffaaann aagya.her col..n her presence at der place..she has found sum1 4 Khushi in Lko.n wnts her 2 marry him..:/atlst she shud hav said d same 2 Khushi 1st..Payal's reason 4 marriage..wt if Aakash cums up? wont she agree?Arnav's family thinks Aaksh lyks Khushi?hadd h yr,,:/Anjali z ready 2 run away n marry Shyam at her fav place..Mandir..:Pwndr wt wud Arnav do nw..wndr wen wud Khsuhi shout at him..n yell dt she loves him..n wnts 2 b his wyf..nt juz d mthr of his child..wndr wen he wud cnfess dt he wnts her as his wyf n nt juz d mthr of his child..d lyn z ..bas aapki hi parchaaiii honi chahye?ye h kya SRK ki lyn? :Pthank yu 4 mentionin my name..:Phad w8d n stalkd n result mila..lol
Edited by reallyhappy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
At last the much awaited update arrived. I had lost hope . Thought we'll get it tomorrow. Thankyou so much for the update and for mentioning m name.
In spite of being such a big businessman and intelligent guy is an idiot when it comes to understanding women and their feelings. Asking Khushi to marry him because his daughter wants her for her mother is so stupid. Khushi is good at heart and loves Arya so she couldn't refuse. But he doesn't realise that he broke her heart.
Nani and Mami think Aakash wants to marry Khushi! What a comedy of errors!
Buaji and Garima have made an entry. Khushi has decided to take a stand against them. She has taken a decision and will stick to it.
I am happy to read the update but sad that the story is reaching its end. Will miss this.
The dialogue was aap ki parchain honi chahiye from DDLJ.
Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago
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Great Update !!
One should really not hold their their hopes high , They often get broken .. This is what happened with Khushi ...
He knows her weak point lies in Arya and is using that to his advantage. !!

But in the end , the slap was very well deserved and rational on Garima 's part for that extremly disrespectful gesture infront of the family ...

What will be Arnav 's reaction .. ? And Wonder how they will explain their relationship to the family ...

Looking Forward to the Update ...
Edited by RainyDays - 12 years ago

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