ArHi FF: Finding Solace-#5 *Completed*

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nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

ab mein ja kay chai banaaon gi aur phir arnav kay saath birthday present kholoon gi

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ok, chai aur biscoot ka jo maza aaj aya wah wah!

First of all i cudnt help laughing, she had locked the doors from the other side... pooor Arnav. as i said in a comment earlier, birthday gift ko bina haath lgaye , bina kholay koi maza nahin... i so feel for him right now😊

then the next morning , the moment she entered his room, i thought lo ji ab tu gai...

Her gift to Arya is like the best ever , something she has a memory of her mom and then she passes it on to the child she loves...

"I will wait for him to decide if I am worthy of these."

loved it!

i feel for Shyam and am hoping Khushi can get Arnav to accept him .

The whole bedroom conversation was too cute.

This was sooo worth the wait and i am sorry for spamming, but as i told you am a reada holic!!!! and need my fill.

But am now waiting for him to ask her and for her to accept.

Edited by nnhk - 12 years ago

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--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

Loved d update
it was worth d wait 😊
it was beautifully written
pls make khushi accept his proposal 😊
Khushi has become bold nd naughty 😳
pls update soon

Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 12 years ago

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Res! Edit

Now if Khushi and Arnav move beyond this...

We can wait for Aditya and Arya...

How thoughtless can I be...

Happy birthday Arya and Arnav

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

~Edit~

In the beginning I was blushing and hyperventilating. Later I was smiling-crying. In the end I am biting my nails. What all I go through because of you, Saiyyuu !

Arya wants Khushi as her mother. Khushi is giving her her mother's payal. She wasnts to earn his mother's bangles. He is all set to give them to her! This has been the most eventful chapter ever - and before I forget, he also saw her -all of her !

Oh, and people have such faith in Anjali's meddling abilities!

See, he wanted to give her bangles right after the payal incident, it isn't just Arya's request that is his motivation. The idea of a lifetime with Khushi truly makes him happy. Khushi, she has been so sure of herself all this while, really hope she doesn't doubt herself or Arnav now.

Just when I think I couldn't love your Khushi any more than I already do, you post an update and prove me wrong. The woman is admirable and inspiring, she has so much love and compassion to offer, and she does that with dignity and pride, never taking anything for granted.

I hope this turns out to be Arya's best birthday ever, I want her to receive the best birthday gift any child could have, a mother and her love. Please ?

PS - About Aditya, I don't find his ASR-ness even remotely cute, sorry. But thats just me.

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

It was so worth the wait...I would have waited longer if I knew the outcome...absolutely brilliant...I was so engrossed ...one of the best you have written... Sorry for all the spamming and pressure to write but you have surpassed my expectations which it tough as I have very high expectations from you!

I loved the birthday gift... I am glad they did Not end up sleeping together ...not sure why but I am...especiall the way you wrote it...

I think she has given Arya her payals...! I loved how she comes into his room to discuss what to gt Arya and they start making out...she is a magnet for him...I love how she asks him why he stopped only to hear how irrestible he finds her...

I love how she picks up the kangans and puts them back waiting for him to give them...and he does...so beautiful, so meaningful...love how Arya acts as a catalyst but they have been committed to each other anyway...so a lifetime together officially just seals the deal...

I love how he realises how much Khushi values and loves Arya...Arya who more than anything wants Khushi as her mother...

I loved how payal realises what Aranv is for her sister and to her sister...love her banter with Akash...

Love how Anjali talks to Khushi like its a given that she is her bhabi...I do feel for Shyam too...

And last but not least THANK YOU for thanking me! I am thrilled to just have my name on the top of one of your updates...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

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ohh..i am really expecting sumthing like this..but not SUMTHING LIKE THIS.! I think they will kinda make out n then at the heat of the moment arnav will stop.! But khushi played well han.! Just a awesum view only.! What a birthday gift!!!

Arya is happie as she is going to have khushi as her bday gift..!!!

Arnav is happie bcoz arya wants khushi as her mother n only she can b her mother but he is still confused that khushi will accpt him or not,..! Cmeon arnav! That girl is dying for u n u know that she cant live without but u r still unsure..! U r ASR or not?
Payal n akash's love is also started blooming in SHANTIVAN..selecting dresses n all...!

I too hate this aditya...i m wid u arnav...that batmeez bacha of a batmeez mother...! Both are hurting ur favourite women..!

Hah,..! Por shyam..! Jaldi karo khushiji wahan shyam babua b tadap rahe hain..!

Not to forget that sensous morning gift..! Do we really forget our name..??? I mean i am thinking hard on this but...,... forget it!
I hope when arnav proposes khushi he didnt mess up the THINGS! *sigh*

(u know i had read three times n still unable to make a gud comment)

Edited by avantisharma - 12 years ago

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1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#517

Just read the much awaited update twice. Thankyou so much for putting my name there.

Sorry for spamming but was really eager to read this.

The twist was really unexpected. I was sure they will do it but she locked the oors from outside. I am sure you must have another occaion up your sleeve for them to do it.

She didn't take the bangles from Anjali and I have a feeling she will not accept the proposal as it is Arya who is really proposing this marriage. Arnav is proposing Khushi because Arya wants it, so she will say no.

Payal and Aakash seem to now understand each other.

Shyam is eager to have Arya as a part of his family, but Arnav will surely not agree to give hr up.

Thanks for the long update. Made my day.

Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#518

RES

Unres...

Loved the update Saiyyu.. Won't write much this time.. Still suffering, so my brain cells r still in recovery mode!!! Couldn't resist reading though.. Poor Arnav, I can so relate to what he went through, cos you made us go through it so many times;)..

Aur dekho, tumhare instructions ke anusaar, humne sab par dhyaan diya hai... :)

But seriously, I gotta turn this screen off, so I just wanted to say, bohot achcha update tha...

Oh God, my head is throbbing...

Edited by Denaid - 12 years ago