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Posted: 12 years ago
that letter twisted my insides man a week ok il try to make up scenarios till then in my head until u show us the real way
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all parts in one go n its super good ...
Plz pm me tooo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I an glad Arnav finally got a chance to have his say and make his own decision! I am glad he took the one he did.. However long the break is... Even if they do or don't get back together.. I just want them both to heal.. Mostly Arnav...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have no words. Arnav pain is tangible I feel his pain. wow. He is so hurt by what she did he is ready to go to seclusion.damn a week can't come faster.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! itz simply amazing...thanks for the wonderful update...loved your writing style👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautifully written...👏
I feel sad for ARNAV but i know he just deserves himself now...to take things clearly...he will be back with a bang for sure...with khushi waiting for him😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was one very emotional update 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wish you well, Arnav, I wish you well. In an attempt to protect him, he has been wronged by the very people who should have had faith in him and his strength as a human being - and now he is damaged. Yes, he too was wrong in not letting Khushi see all of him - but the one without the answers is always worse off. At least in my opinion.

Whether or not I want them to be together, I do want them to heal, and find themselves again. I guess this is necessary for Khushi too, this time off. I can only hope they emerge stronger and find what they have lost of themselves..




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera30

For the first time, I want this break to be permanent. Some relationships are too caustic to their own existence and for now theirs feels like one. Maybe they can be better people with others. I know Arnav is hurting but truth be told he didn't talk to Khushi about his life either. Yes, she was wrong in trying to play God. But, relativity of guilt aside, he needs to shoulder the blame of not allowing her to see all of him and his past - thereby giving a third person the opportunity to meddle.

PS: I am not trying to dictate where the story should go :) This is just my opinion :)

PPS: Are you sure Arnav is not some Classic literary author incarnate? The Language he uses is so evocative and elaborate :)



Yes, giving up at this point is the most easiest solution of all. They have too many disconnects to get past all that and arrive at a common ground. Maybe they never meet, who knows?

I however disagree that everything needs to be said to other person when they are in a relationship. Its my personal belief that a person is allowed to have his or her set of short comings or incidents in past which they don't want to talk about. We cannot compare Arnav not talking about his past to what Khushi did in the present. I am not taking sides here but rationally, what Khushi did had an immediate impact on future. Even if Arnav had told her about his past, the decision would still remain the same or maybe the outcome would have been a debacle.

And this 'What If' is what I am not exploring in a direct way. Arnav contemplates momentarily and Khushi always does.

I am do not have enough experience in writing to give a unique writing style to the characters. So my style creeps up easily and the same happened with this chapter too. It's mostly RockBarbie than Arnav there :=(

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

If passion, attraction and sex are various aspects of love, comfort is a major part of love too. The innate ability to just be there for your partner when things go wrong. Your Arnav and Khushi fail each other in this matter with great applomb. How they can claim (even in their minds) that they love each other is beyond me...




It isn't about love anymore. Its relationship between two people and the humane contract that naturally exists between two individuals when they are in a relationship. This wasn't Khushi's choice but Arnav's. He needed to get away from people who haven't told him things he deserves to know and it has made him claustrophobic.

Now its a matter of decision - is going through this worth it for the other person? Does Arnav believe that they can overcome whatever has happened and talk without any restraints? If they can, then do they have a chance at starting over?

Giving up is the most easiest thing to do. The fight to get what they believe they deserve is painful.
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Posted: 12 years ago
She didn't share,she didn't discuss, decided their fate alone. When two people decide to be together any individual decision involving both is likely to cause heart break and here it was for seven long years and still continuing.

Arnav's escape or journey of self discovery or journey out of this dichotomy may help him. But still I wish before taking any decision he does give themselves a chance for discussion.

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