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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow khushi doesn't sound too amused
Poor Arnav ...hope he can tame his fiancee a wee bit
Nice to see him making move ...would be worth the shock on khushis face
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read all the parts!! Loved it! Can't wait to read more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome teaser... Ye khushi, Aranav ko pura aapne jaisa banake chodegi..waiting for update.
Thx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi is one "bomb" jo Arnav ke ghar main jaa kar hi phootega !!!🤣

Cant wait to read the update my "frand" !!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago


Wow.. just read the latest chapter and felt like I never left. This story is so different that there was no confusion in my mind regarding the characterization.


And talking of characterization, it the most strong point of this story which shows in the dialogues you pen down as well. It's like you have a doubt in mind while reading the conversation between the protagonists and BAM... the next line or next para clears it like sky on a sunny day. You must be putting a lot of thought in it and please note that it is highly appreciated :)


I am in love with this blabber mouth and shameless Khushi who knows that the guy who is looking out for her at the cost of his own feelings is the best. Arnav is lucky to have found a girl who knows him through and through and wants to fall in love. Not to forget, she will not gain much weight in future :D :D :D


Please update soon and I shall catch up with remaining earlier chapter soon!


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Posted: 12 years ago
I read all the updates in one go...

Itz just a wonderful ss...

And the update's length, dialogs and even title given to each update reflects how much efforts you had put on in writing each of them...

So well written ss...

Keep up the good work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi..!! She is indeed unbelievable.. Are they going on a date..?? Really..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i happened to read this ff and it issuch an awesome story!!!

khushi the blabbering girl and a lot of dreams abt her future husband..bold but only to her dear ones..respects and loves all!!!

arnav..the most reserved guy who wants to be loved and liked for what is he!! a perfect gentleman any girl can fall for..

arnav and khushi perfect for each other..as the lil girl said to arnav..khushi would bring colours and joy in his life...and loved the teaser...their first official date on the way!!!

buaji is such a lovely woman...
akash and payal..lovely couple!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anony_mous



Wow.. just read the latest chapter and felt like I never left. This story is so different that there was no confusion in my mind regarding the characterization.


And talking of characterization, it the most strong point of this story which shows in the dialogues you pen down as well. It's like you have a doubt in mind while reading the conversation between the protagonists and BAM... the next line or next para clears it like sky on a sunny day. You must be putting a lot of thought in it and please note that it is highly appreciated :)


I am in love with this blabber mouth and shameless Khushi who knows that the guy who is looking out for her at the cost of his own feelings is the best. Arnav is lucky to have found a girl who knows him through and through and wants to fall in love. Not to forget, she will not gain much weight in future :D :D :D


Please update soon and I shall catch up with remaining earlier chapter soon!


Hi Anony_mous. Welcome Back!
I so missed your views on this story as I always look forward to them. You really have a insight to read through writer's mind!
Dialogues I believe reflect a Person and his/her thinking more loud than any other description. So, hence why I am more inclined towards Dialogues. I am so very glad you noticed that!
Top it all you are one of my favorite writer on the forum.. it makes me feel even more special when writer like you appreciate my efforts.
A heartfelt Thank You. 😃
Edited by SuperstarSanaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smileysmi

I read all the updates in one go...

Itz just a wonderful ss...

And the update's length, dialogs and even title given to each update reflects how much efforts you had put on in writing each of them...

So well written ss...

Keep up the good work...

welcome aboard!
And Thank You very much for noticing update lenghts, dialogues and Titles!
Your view made me just very much happy that you were able to perceive what I want my readers to!
I hope you will enjoy this story going further!😊

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