New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Way to go Saucy! U do really have a way of coming up with unforeseen of scenes and situations to get these two to meet and then make it BHAM! and we go WOW!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

That was just awesome and so fantastic in ur unique writing style that i re-read it a second time and THEN came to comment.

"the chicken is dead!" 🤣

Girl, where do u come up with these one-liners????😛

Loved it to bits, plz do continue soon and do PM me!

Thanks for the notification...

Take care

Swati

p.s. when is the other one happening?😉 I am sure u r gonna be asked this question by many...well if it does soon i will be supremely happy, but if not and we get a update soon on this current one, i will be totally satisfied.

So what say?😊

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Whatever u did, ate, or saw or which side of the bed u turned out of when u thought abt this story...plz repeat all those and any more that i might have missed to mention...coz u have one hell of a wonderful story here in the making...

I just thought to let u know...u know!😉😆

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Oh Khushi was just hilarious and Arnavs reaction for her non stop eating was just amazing! Continue soon
Iam new to your stories so please pm me if you do that and I will send you a buddy request.

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

it was nice to see your writting after along time very interesting start hope you continue this 😊

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atipreet

@atipreet

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

wow!!!! back with a bang!!!!...loved it continue soon...really missed your writings...

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sabz105

@sabz105

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Hi Saucechips,

I came across your SS next stop and it's really an interesting concept.

Please do continue with this story I would love to know how Arnav and Khushi experienced this train journey en-route to Lucknow!!!

I really like your style of writing!!! Keep up the good work!!!

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Was very happy to receive a PM from you...fabulous beginning..hope you continue soon...

thanks for the PM

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GirlOfFire

@GirlOfFire

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

🤔 - should I or should I not get hooked to the story.. that is the question...

As it is - i can feel the addiction coming on!!

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samarablog

@samarablog

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Wow! she realises! tumse na jane kyun!
haha
can not wait for next update! Joy!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Wow a brilliant start, it was an amazing and awesome update. It was so funny, especially khushi's personal monologues they were hilarious. Please continue soon and please PM when you do update xx