VIRMAN FF*ek mein aur ek tu #3*PART 34*PG. 141

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manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

wow super ,funny, romantic update plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon waiting...

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saemeen

@shabsem

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Dis update was supera awesome yar. .each n evry Scene was amazing. .d way manvi bhave wid natasha is superb realy natasha dsrv dat. .n manvi's convo wid vanshika was so emotional. .n aarav ayesha scene was too good the way u show how aarav is fighting wid his heart n mind is so nice. .thanks 4 pm n cont soon. .

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Arti

@Angel4Love

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Res..😊
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Unres...

Hey Shilpa. hw r u doin? Hope well...So finally u updated huh, I was so waiting 4 ur update...Thnks a lot 4 updating...Nw bout de update...Hamesha kehti hun, n m sayin it 2day as well...I KUZ LUVD IT 2 DA CORE..UR AN AWESOME WRITER SHILPA...ur ech n evry update is juz fab, n dis 1 was also, beyond amazing...it was filled with every emotions, i juz luvd it...it was so funny,,,Gabbar Singh..Lol😆 Maanvi is so funny, n on top of dat Viraat laughing at Natasha...Hahaha...🤣 dat was hilarious...

Manvi :- (smiling) arre... thakurji. Aap bhi yahan hai. Namaste!!!

She said looking at Sanjay.

Sanjay smiled looking at his drunken boss's wife….

Sanjay:- Namaste basanti ji… (Joining hands)

Manvi:- are waah….aapke dono haath wapas aa gaye….?

Sanjay:- haan…woh…

Manvi:- gabbar Singh ne apko wapas de diye kya?

Sanjay looked up at Natasha…who was fuming more and more whenever manvi called her gabbar Singh…but the people in party were enjoying this show…..virat included…

Sanjay:- (still looking at Natasha) ha..haan….

Manvi:- (giggling) aaj ke baad aap kha bhi sakenge aur dho bhi ….

Dis cracked me up..lol..😆🤣 Maanvi is sumthin...😆...Luvd da family scene, dat was so cute n sweet...felt really vry bad 4 Ayesha n Aarav along wid Maanvi, 3 poor souls...Luvd hw Maanvi was trying 2 seduce 😳Viraat...aur kaam ho bhi raha tha..😛😆luvd their romantic bedroom scenes..😛☺️plus da shower scene Haaye...U killed me Shilpa..😆...Awesome, Amazing, Fantastic update...thnks a lot 4 dis wonderful update n thnks a lot 4 da pm...plz plz plz continue soon, n do pm me...thnk u once again..😊

Edited by Artii159 - 12 years ago

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

awsm... amaziiing... super-se upar-wala update... was holding my stomach nd laughing like crazy... the dose of medicine natasha (ch.ch) got was way more better than my 'high heels' idea... Basantine Gabbar Singh ka gala daba dia nd sanjay aka thakur ji ka hath milnewala dialogue must get standing o. aur viru ka toh sacchi mei izzat lut lia... the difference was virat ka mu kala nahi laal laal ho gaya... the time u took to update was really worth it...=))

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

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unres

awesome update shilpa!!!!!😃

kushal ka shirtless ke baad tumhara shower scene😳

haww bechari natasha kids ki baat sunke pagal ho gayi🤣

da basanti part was very funny😆

best dialogue was

Sanjay smiled looking at his drunken boss's wife….

Sanjay:- Namaste basanti ji… (Joining hands)

Manvi:- are waah….aapke dono haath wapas aa gaye….?

Sanjay:- haan…woh…

Manvi:- gabbar Singh ne apko wapas de diye kya?

Sanjay looked up at Natasha…who was fuming more and more whenever manvi called her gabbar Singh…but the people in party were enjoying this show…..virat included…

Sanjay:- (still looking at Natasha) ha..haan….

Manvi:- (giggling) aaj ke baad aap kha bhi sakenge aur dho bhi ….

aww full update was jst fabulous... aarav nd ayesha's stry is also moving forward..

pla cont soon nd thnx fr da pm😊

Edited by shruthi13 - 12 years ago

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itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

awesome update

loved sholy's part

continue soon

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Shilpa rocking update ⭐️⭐️.. Mind-blowing.. Drunk Manvi is just hilarious 😆.. Manvi as Basanti, Virat as Viru, Natasha as Gabbar and Sanjay as Thakur 🤣 🤣🤣.. It was so so good.. I was laughing so hard.. Virman k Sholey 😆.. Manvi's dialogues are very well written 👏👏.. " yeh…. (Pointing towards Natasha) Mein apne viru ko tumhe le jane nahi dungi…. He is just mine…and only mine… u bloody… gabbar Singh…. " , "are waah….aapke dono haath wapas aa gaye….? Sanjay:- haan…woh…Manvi:- gabbar Singh ne apko wapas de diye kya? Sanjay looked up at Natasha…who was fuming more and more whenever manvi called her gabbar Singh…but the people in party were enjoying this show…..virat included…Sanjay:- (still looking at Natasha) ha..haan….Manvi:- (giggling) aaj ke baad aap kha bhi sakenge aur dho bhi …." - 🤣🤣 These are my fav lines.. I loved the part where Virat told Natasha about his kids 😆.. That witch got the biggest shock of her life 😆.. Loved Manvi-Vmom convo also.. Poor Arsha.. Feeling bad for them.. Drunk Manvi is quite bold 😉.. Their romantic moments were very hot 😳.. And that shower part was awesome ☺️.. Virat respects her so much .. Love them.. Superb update 👍🏼.. Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Dorae

@Dorae

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

Wow it's an awesome update. Want to know the secret behind all your updates👏.

Glad to know that maanvi and our cuties are most important in virat's life and really liked drunk maanvi. Liked the way how natasha shocked after knowing about our cuties😆.

Sholey part was hilarious and natasha was gabbarsingh.

"Manvi:- are waah….aapke dono haath wapas aa gaye….?" This line of maanvi really cracked me.I was laughing like hell🤣.

The way maanvi hugging and saying love you to khushi and how she came before all family members can say how virat felt embarrassed.Loved the emotional scene between maanvi and virat's mom.

I was feeling so tensed when maanvi was going to spill the beans about ayesha and aarav but virat stopped her.

Such a romantic night of virat and maanvi😳.Overall an excellent update.

Thanks for the pm and takecare❤️.

Happy holi and may it bring lots of colour in your life.

With lots of❤️.

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Superb update shilpa...👏👏👏..really loved it... ⭐️...talli manvi was awesome...😛...lol natasha=gabar sign...😆...n the dailouges were wow shilpa😆....loved it...⭐️...n at home the way manvi reacted was hilarious...😆...she make virat carry her infront of everyone...kya baat hai...😉...n virman romance...uff...it as so romantic..😳...feeling bad for ayesha...😭...wonder why virat said like this to manvi abt natasha...really looking forward for next update shilpa...will be eagerly waiting...thank u so much for the pm...😊

Edited by yaminnthida - 12 years ago