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SORRY!!

sachi mei kaan pakad ke...

i didnt find any suitable concept that may make u happy..

finally got this one

hope u like this

*tensed*

but before that!!

mera bacha!!! 🤗 belated happybirthday!!
i truely from the bottom of my heart wish u that u may get all the happiness in the world!! u are and will always be a small kid to me.. jo ziddi hai but too sweet... love u dear❤️

ps: i know its very bad ..



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hope u like!!!

fingers crossed!!!

happy reading





"aur ye baat mai kabhi nahi boolunga"

A tear rolled down her cheek… again….and after few secs she realised it and wiped it away…. And gritted her teeth..

Yeh kya natak hai kriya.. its high tym now… kya sonchengi wo?? Chalo kriya bhool jao usse… zindagi bhar aisa toh nahi reh sakti na..

"tum chahti ho ki mai tumhara saath doon?? …….. Hamesha??"

His words again rang in her ears.. the excitement to hear yes from her.. she wondered even if by mistake she replied yes!! What would he do ??but her heart already knows the answer….he would have lacked her in his arms forever…somewhere she felt thankful to herself for not letting him know to which extent she loved him….or to simply say she always reflected the love he showered on her…

She came out of her trance as water touched her feet… she looked down and then back… she came so far from her cottage..she sighed.. this place always makes her get lost in the past

*phew*


she sighed hard and walked further into the water till her ankel was into the water...

she folded her hands against her chest and looked ahead at the setting sun... looked sidewards...

she gave a short chuckle thinking she was in the most romantic place missing her love..life never leaves a chance to play with her...


"universeji aap jaan pooch ke mujhe goa bheja tha na"she gave a sarcastic look at the distant sky ahead...

____________________________________________________________


"hum yaha practise karenge??"

aashi asked looking around the small room..

"toh kaha karna hai??"sharon asked...still she was a bit arrogant towards aashi after the news she heard abt swayam taking her as his date on rose day...

"sharon sorry... its not like we like each other... wo toh bas waisa types hogaya"aashi said pouting...

"toh rey ke saath bhi toh jaa sakti thi"sharon said back annoyed...

"mai kya karun agar rey aur bharat ek doosre ke saath nahi chod rahe hai toh"aashi said lookind at rey and bharat... making rey scowl...


"i thought u too were fighting...why do u too always land upon me ??"rey said annoyed..

"its coz after kriya ur priorities changed and u were the one to stay stubborn saying "sirf bharat hi mera date banega " swayam said and all burst out laughing making bharat glare at rey and rey pout..

"its just that... just that ...guys..stop it"rey said annoyed...

all laughed more...

"rey i wonder sach mei teri priorities change hue"sharon asked bursting out again into fits of laughter..

"sharon ??? tum bhi?? meri koi preferences change nahi hue... its just that agar ladki ke saath jjaata toh kria yaad aati and for god's sake do saal hogaye uss party ke baad...leave it na"rey said ..

"i missed it yaar..."vishaka said and all again laugh making rey annoyed more..


"toh chale ??"sharon said atlast

"kaha??"neha asked..

"practise karne... shore pe practise karte hai..."sharon said


"sharon and u all...neha needing ur help..neha ko classical category jeetna hai..gaana toh select karliya par steps kya dalun confused hun"neha stated tensed

"toh chalo aaj ki shaam tumhari dance choreography ki naam kardete hai"aashi said excited..

"yeah.. chale??"swayam said as all moved out taking a ipod and two speakers..


on the way neha played the song ...all were busy thinking of what steps they can take...but none can decide finally...

"chalo hum try karke dekhte hai ek baar."said sharon removing her shoes...

all girls nodded and stood when boys sat before them to select steps which they do randomly ... vicky plugged in the speakers and played the song

*refresh page*

as the song played all started doing steps of their own but soon after a 30 secs all stopped...as boys nodded their heads sidewards...

"guys sahi steps socho"simmi whinned...

"gaana lagao"sharon said and went back as all settled down... facing their backs towards the sea...

sharon breathed deep once...


"iss baar karke hi rahoongi"she said out ...but for herself...

"kriya hoti toh ab tak bol chuki hoti...she is excellent in khatak"neha said..

"she is best in all neha"rey said with a smile..

swayam hugged him sidewards...

"u still waiting types haina??"aashi asked..


"nah..no hopes... it that she never loved me.. hate karne ki koshish ki maine but failed so i left it... jab move on kar paunga tab kar lunga... waise it depends on u "rey said with a naughty smile

"mujhpe?? how??"aashi asked totally confused as shareyam chuckled..

"seduce him and make him fall for u aashi"sharon said laughing slightly

"yeah"swayam to agreed as all started giggling

aashi made a "O" face

"btw i dnt mind... u can try"rey said and winked at her...

"haww rey!!!"aashi bet him on his shoulder...

"agar tum nahi karsakti toh batade... couple dance ko romantic kaise banana hai i know well"rey winked again..all laughed hard when aashi started beating him hard..

"u flirt!!! sach kehti thi kriya..u r a cassinova"aashi said beating him...

"guys guys stop..neha rone lagegi if u wont now"sharon said seeing neha sad seeing all forget abt her dance


"oops sorry sweety.. waise hum tumhe kaise bhool sakte hai"rey said and moved to her and hugged her side wards/..

"rey wo meri hai"vicky pushed him away pulling neha into his arms..making all laugh

"shall i start love??"swayam asked lovngly to sharon/...

"haa"sharon said with a smile...


"lot of things changed in these two years... nimmi hooked up and the shocking part was nil became so serious abt his relationship that he stopped even looking at girls in that sense...finally after a year viha sat down and sorted their problems...

swayam with continuous efforts made sharon accept her feelings finally... and aashi..the new 12th dancer paired up against rey became so close to the gang in short tym...

rey and aashi made a great team...as he always was supportive to her as she was poor in couple dancing and after making good friends aashi came to know abt kria and helped a lot to come out of depression infact made him accept the things positively and let tym heal the wounds...

today they stand here as a team again to perform after 3 days for the national dance league..neha being her applied for classical category too along with freestyle

swayam plyed the song and all looked at sharon who was listening to the song seriously/...

really?? nah she is looking seriously at something

Dhaga Dhaga Dhaga
Dhina Dhina Dhina
Naga Naga Naga
Thikita Dhaana Dhaana Dhaana
Thikkita Thikkita Thakinna Dhaana
Thaakudu Dhaana
Thikkitu Thakkata Dhi Dhi Dhi
Dhaanu Dhaanu Genthanana
Dhaanu Dhaanu Genthanana

Athinavaneetha Abhinayaraja
GokulaBaala Kotiprakasha
ViragaNaraga Shree Rakshakka Maala
Ethanaimurai Naan Engi Saavaen
Ithavanai Ennai Aatkolvaya?
Soodiya vaadalai Soodiya Vaakala
Vaadiya Sinthaikku Rombatha
Bhoothagiyaaga Panithiduvaaya?
Paavai Viragam Parugiduvaaya?

Aayardham Maaya Nee va
Aaya Maaya
Aayardham Maaya Nee va
Aaya Maaya
Aayardham Maaya Nee va
Aaya Maaya Va…


Unnai kaanaadhu
naan indru naan illaye
vidhai illaamal ver illaye (2)

maaya thirudan kannaa kanna !!
kaamak kalaignan kannaa kannaa!!
maaya thirudan kannaa kannaa !!
kaamak kalaignan kannaa kannaa!!
krishnaa...

Unnai kaanaadhu naan
indru naan illaye
vidhai illaamal ver illaye

Nidham kaanginra vaan
kooda nijam alla
idham serkum kanaa
kooda sugam alla

Nee illaamal naan illaye
Unnai kaanaamal unnai kaanaamal
unnai kaanaamal unnai kaanaamal

Unnai kaanaamal
pen nenju thadumaarudhey
vidhai illaamal verillaye

Avvaaru nokinaal
evvaaru naaduven.
Kannaadi mun nindru
paarthu kondaen.

Ondraaga serithida
oru nooru naadagam
Othigai seidhu
edhir paarthirundhen

Edhir paaramaley avan
edhir paaramaley avan
oh.. pin irundhu vandhu ennai
pambaramaai sulatri vittu
ulagunda pervaayan endhan
vaayodu vaai padhiththaan

Ingu boologam endroru porul ulladhai
indha poongothai marandhaal adi

Udalanindha aadai pol
ennai anindhu kolvaayaa
ini nee ini nee kannaa

thoongaadha en kannin
thuyalurutha kannan thaan
ini nee ini nee

idhu neraamaley naan
unnai paaraamaley naan
indha mulujenmam poi irundhaal
endru adhai enni veenaekkam yengaamaley
unnai moochaaki vazhvenada

maayathirudan kannaa kannaa!!
kaamak kalaignan kannaa kannaa!!
maayathirudan kannaa kannaa !!
kaamak kalaignan kannaa kannaa!!


English Translation
credits to the one who translated...
Dhaga Dhaga Dhaga
Dhina Dhina Dhina
Naga Naga Naga
Thikita Dhaana Dhaana Dhaana
Thikkita Thikkita Thakinna Dhaana
Thaakudu Dhaana
Thikkitu Thakkata Dhi Dhi Dhi
Dhaanu Dhaanu Genthanana
Dhaanu Dhaanu Genthanana

Athinavaneetha Abhinayaraja
GokulaBaala Kotiprakasha
ViragaNaraga Shree Rakshakka Maala
Ethanaimurai Naan Engi Saavaen
Ithavanai Ennai Aatkolvaya?
Soodiya vaadalai Soodiya Vaakala
Vaadiya Sinthaikku Rombatha
Bhoothagiyaaga Panithiduvaaya?
Paavai Viragam Parugiduvaaya?

Aayardham Maaya Nee va
Aaya Maaya
Aayardham Maaya Nee va
Aaya Maaya
Aayardham Maaya Nee va
Aaya Maaya Va…


without seeing you,
I am not me,
no root without a seed (2)

deceit thief kannaa kannaa
desired artist kannaa kannaa
deceit thief kannaa kannaa
desired artist kannaa kannaa
krishnaa...

without seeing you,
I am not me,
no root without a seed (2)

sky that seen daily
is not true.
dream that gives pleasure
is not happiness.

am not me without you
without seeing you,without seeing you
without seeing you,without seeing you

without seeing you
this girl's heart is unsteady
no root without a seed.

if you see like that
how i will approach you?
I stood in front of mirror
and saw myself.

To join together,
I did rehearsal for
hundred dramas
and looked for you.

without expecting ,he.
without expecting, he.
oh .. he came from my behind
hugged like a top,
and he
kissed lip to lip.

she forgot that there is
a world near her.

like a dress on a body
will you wear me ?
from now on?, from now on? kannaa!!

my eyes which don't sleep
will sleep because of kannan
from now on?, from now on?

without this happening?
without seeing you?
if my heart beat have ended.
without thinking that useless carving
I will live by breathing you.

deceit thief kannaa kannaa
desired artist kannaa kannaa
deceit thief kannaa kannaa
desired artist kannaa kannaa

now further!!!

swayam stopped the music as she signalled looking front and said

"fir se "


here kriya was totally lost in other world thinking abt her past and unconsiously she started tapping her feet listening to the music playing loud...


when sharon said to play again... as sht song started kriya started moving more... she started moving her hands too from just tapping her feet...soon started dancing gracefully...


"kriya!!!!"sharon gasped as she walked front shocked...

all froze and looked back instantly...there they saw a girl dancing facing her back to them... sharon didnt see her face but she can easily say... after all they had those secret faceoff's on all styles to make eachother perfect...this was their secret .. they used to meet up in RH every sunday and dance trying to defeat eachother...


soon she snatched the ipod and started running as in refles swayam followed holding the speakers...sharon stopped at a distance ... rey was still sitting frozen to core seeing her... all already reached sharon...aashi pulled rey to them/...


there she was dancing lost totally in HIS world as she was thinking abt the good tyms of them... and was dancing with a grin... soon crowd gathered totally but kriya seemed oblivious to the surroundings...


rey was abt to move front to stop her.something is wrong with her..he can sense it...she is acting weird...but stopped as he saw smriti coming to the front pushing the crowd...


swayam gasped as he saw smriti..rey gave a confused look


"aunty is against her dancing"swayam said making rey's eyes wide...he is shocked with himself too...she ditched him and here he is fearing for her...sigh...he cant deny that he loved ...or still loves her right???


but to their surprise smriti was smiling proudly seeing kriya dance...

but soon the song stopped and kriya fell down *maardaala step hoga na waisa*

looking down...


soon the crowd disperesed as she sat still... the gang went a bit back such that smrit wont notice them...coz right now they are confused to confront them or not...but stopped at what they saw...slowly kriya lifted her hand twisting her wrist and sat up looking front...to say correctly she was still in other world... from last two years she closed herself...being in US helped a lot for this but now that she came back to this place ...the wounds are opening up... soon she started dancing wildly fast and fiercely ...taking sharp turns ..heavy footsteps...smrit was tensed ...she called kriya...but she didnt respond...kriya danced venting out her pain... only smrit's slap stopped her...kriya stopped and looked at her mom expressionless and looked away...


"u okay beta??"smriti asked caressing her cheek..


"mom chalte haina wapas please"kriya looked at her pleading


"beta please... meri baat samajhne ki koshish karo"smriti was cut

"mom ek baar meri baat suniye please"kriya sad pleading...she took smirit to shore made her sit and kneeled before her holding her hands..

"mom!! i know u want me to over come everything..but ho nahi raha... chalte haina wapas... mujhe india mei hi nahi rehna...its kinda haunting me...i dnt want to lyk this mom!!! it still reminds me of him!! the thing that i lost him still haunts me mom"she said with utmost pain

rey gulped slightly stopping his tears hearing she had someone other than him in her life

"beta u still have the option right??"smriti said..

"no mom!!! shayad mujhe tabhi jaana tah jab aapne bola tha but its too late now mom... "kriya said

"par beta try toh karo...i cant see u lyk this beta it hurts"smriti said choking


"mom please ..aap ro kyun rahe ho...i cant go back now mom!!but i promise...i promise i will move on ...sach mei...mai ..mai bhool jaungi use...bas thoda aur tym mom!!! I...I promise mai r...rey ko bhool jaungi...thoda aur tym please??"kriya said as a tear rolled down her cheek as she took his name...


the gang froze...now everything hitted him...rey was shocked...she was saying she lost him...she cant go back to him... and the main thing being she too loves him...but soon the question of why she left him popped upp...

"beta u don't need to... meri baat maano"she was cut again

"mom please...i decided... thats it.hum kal chale jaate haina wapas US"kriya pleaded

after a 10 mins of convincing session smriti agreed to it...


Authors personal note: dnt be confused... smriti soon realised what she made kriya leave ... yeah still feared that history may repeat but she accepted the fact that kriya's happiness lied in her friends dance and her daughter totally fell head over heels for rey...she can't deny the fact so after 4 months of seeing silent depressed kriya she said he to go back to everything she left but kriya feared of facing them and stayed back and went to her mother's big brothers house..along with smriti...and smriti now forced her to atleast win the dance league cup to reduce her guilt...kriya with no option agreed and here she was ...in goa


"par beta seriously tumhe wapas unke paas jaan hai!!!"smriti tried again...

"mom u know..i can't face them!!! i can't see them hating me mom!!! i m fine imagining it"kriya said ..

"par beta u can give it a try.. may be wo tumhe hate na karte toh??"smriti reasoned...she can no more bear this girl.this new girl she wants he daughter back!!!

"mom no way i m going to mumbai... mujhe goa me hi nahi rehna ek pal aur aap mumbai ke baare mei soch rahi ho??"kriya said annoyed ...why cant her mom leave it


"arey mumbai kyun wo log bhi yaha aaye hai... toh mil toh sakti hona"smriti answered instantly...


kriya narrowed her eyes...


"aapko kaise pata??"kriya asked

"wo... ma..maine list mei dekha"smriti said uncomfortbly


"mom!! sach batayiye .. aap isiliye iss saal itni zid karke mujhe yaha leke aayi na?"kriya asked with narrow eyes


"arey nahi toh...mujhe...mujhe toh yaha aane ke baad pata chala"smriti said


"acha?? kab pata chala aap ko?? kaise pata chala??"

"wo ... wo ... mai list dekha yaha aane ke baad"smriti said stammering

" wahi kab dekha aapne list??? jab se aaye hai tabse aap mere saath hi toh thi??? boliye"kriya asked...


"wo abhi abhi dekh ke aarahi hun...haa"smriti said nervously...

"jhoot mat boliye ma...aap nahane gayi isiliye mai bahar yaha aayi thodi der keliye ar aap bol rahe ho ki aapne abhi dekhi??? and haa net mei dekha ye bahana mat do... cottage mei kahi network nahi aarahi"kriya said


"hmm... sorry wo maine pehle hi dekhliya"smriti accepted her defeat

"hum kal jaa rahe hai pakka"kriya stated

"beta situation se bhaag kyun rahi ho?? meri beti aisi thodi thi!!!"smriti tried to convince again


"mom please i cant.."kriya said and left...

smriti followed her dissapointed..!!

"iska matlab wo tumhe abhi bhi pyaar karti hai??"swayam said looking at the direction they left

"mujhe bhi usi types lag raha hai"aashi too replied in same state...

"matlab guys she never hated rey!!!"sharon said unconsiously


a few secs later all looked at each other shocked...

"toh usne aisa kyun kiya??"simmi asked as if the gang knows the answer


"y did she ditch him??"vishaka said

" correction... act as ditching him coz..agar wo pyaar karti hai rey ko then wo kabhi ditch hi nahi kar sakti andthus usne act kiya"rinny said analysing

all looked at her shocked...but soon shouted realising tht truth...all pulled rey into hug who was still thinking hard and were shouting high... after a max of 5 mins they noticed that rey was not at all happy...


"rey u not happy??"neha asked..

"mere bhai tu theek toh haina??"vicky asked shaking him

"usne aisa kyun kaha ki she used me?? and she prefers swayam over me?? aisi kya baat hai??"rey frowned deeper...and walked away mumbling qsns to himself and leaving the gang confused over those qsns..bechare ki khushi ki waat lag gayi..

________________________________________________________________


"mom aapko ice-cream chahiye??"kriya shouted looking for her purse...

"nahi par tum kaha jaa rahi ho??"smriti shouted back from washroom

"mom mujhe na khane ki mann kar raha hai waha canteen haina waha se leke aati hun please.??"kriya pleaded


"haa theek hai par be careful.."smriti said

"haa mom!!" kriya said and exited...while walking back she saw how beautiful the sea was in that full moon day... she sat on a nearby rock leaving a msg to her mom that she will be back soon after sitting alone for sometime...


she walked on to the rock and sat on it... eating her icecream...she just looked at the distant smiling as the air felt soothing to her...


rey stood up and wiped water of his face...this felt good... he again dipped once into the sea and swimmed as far as he can!!! and finally again stood up!!! soon after wiping water from his face he heard some sound


he looked up and found a girl dusting her jeans top after getting up...it was her bracelet which shined in moonlight..


.rey smiled...but as the girl put her hair behind her ears he froze...there stood kriya getting ready to walk back to her cottage ...

he quicky dived near the rock!!!

as she turned around to go back he held her wrist and pullhed her to him *radha kaise na jale wala*


Dhaga Dhaga Dhaga
Dhina Dhina Dhina
Naga Naga Naga
Thikita Dhaana Dhaana Dhaana
Thikkita Thikkita Thakinna Dhaana
Thaakudu Dhaana
Thikkitu Thakkata Dhi Dhi Dhi
Dhaanu Dhaanu Genthanana
Dhaanu Dhaanu Genthanana

she was abt to shout but froze on seeing him...he eyes widened on seeing him ...but soon came into senses as her top got wet .. he was lost in her..after 2 years he was seeing her...it felt a dream!!! she took the chance and released herself and quickly turned back to go but he was too fast...he stood before he...


Athinavaneetha Abhinayaraja GokulaBaala Kotiprakasha
ViragaNaraga Shree Rakshakka Maala
Ethanaimurai Naan Engi Saavaen
Ithavanai Ennai Aatkolvaya?
Soodiya vaadalai Soodiya Vaakala
Vaadiya Sinthaikku Rombatha
Bhoothagiyaaga Panithiduvaaya?
Paavai Viragam Parugiduvaaya?



"kya chahiye reyaansh aapko??"she asked making herself strong and with rudeness in her voice...


"tum"rey spoke looking at her...her head shot up


Aayardham Aaaya Nee va
Aaya Maaya
Aayardham Aaaya Nee va
Aaya Maaya
Aayardham Aaaya Nee va
Aaya Maaya Va..


"k..kya??"she spoke out shivering at his gaze...suddenly the atmosphere turned hot for her... his gaze..his words and more over him wet and shirtless...enough to make her blank and more over after two bloody years she is seeing him...


Unnai Kaanathu Naan Indru Naan Illayae
Vithai Illamal Vaer Illayae
Unnai Kaanathu Naan Indru Naan Illayae
Vithai Illamal Vaer Illayae...

"tum!! sunayi nahi diya??"he asked taking a step forward as she took a step back...

she started sweating...


"u sweating??? am i that hot??"he smirked and wiped a sweat bead as she flinched back and gasped hard...


Maaya Thirudan Kanna Kanna
Kaama Kalaignyan Kanna Kanna
Maaya Thirudan Kanna Kanna
Kaama Kalaignyan Kanna Kanna
Krishnaa…….

he gave that naughty look which made her breath uneven...she knows how cruel he can get ... and here she was struck with him alone...

Unnai Kaanathu Naan Indru Naan Illayae
Vithai Illamal Vaer Illayae
Nitham Kaangindra Vaan kda Nijamalla
Itham Šaerkkum Kana Kda Šugamalla
Nee Illaamal Naan Illayae
Unnai Kaanamal…Unnai Kaanamal…
Unnai Kaanamal…Unnai Kaanamal…

as he stepped forward again she moved back..

"u still dnt wanna talk to me??"he said and turned around...she raised her hand to stop him when he quickly looked back...

"u wanna talk to me??"he asked with a naughty smile..

"nahi wo..."she stammered

"bolo"he took a step again.. she stepped back and slipped and fell into water...rey dived in quickly...but as she came out he stayed in water...she looked around for him... tensed that he left///


Unnai Kaanamal Pen Nenju Thadumaruthae
Vithai Illamal Vaer Illayae
Nalina Mga Šhaamala Ranga
Nadana Bhaava Šruthilaya Linga
Thakkidadheem Dheem Dheem Dhinna
Šarivara Thngathu Vaadum
Anudhinam Unakaaga Aengum Raadha Than
Unakena Raadha Thaan
Unakkru Raadha Than


he suddenly rose up and stood before her making her flinch back ...he caught her by waist from falling back and pulled towards him...she breathed loud as his intense look fixed on her...




Avvaru Nkkinal vvaru Naaduvaen
Kannadi Mun Nindru Paarthukndaen
Ondraga Cheithida Oru Nru Naadagam
Othigaigal Šeithu thir Paarthirunthaen
thirpaaramalae Avan thirpaaramalae Avan
Pinirunthu Vanthunai Pambaramai Šuzhatruvittu
Ulagunda Peruvayil nthan Vaaydu Vai Pathiththaan
Ingu Bhlgam ndrru Prul Ullathai
Intha Pngthai Maranthaaladi


"kyun bola jhoot uss din??"rey as looking directly into her eyes...

"maine joi jhoot nahi bola."she looked away...

"really??"he asked again...looking at her...

"haa"she said still looking away

suddenly she felt the grip loosen...she looked front ..he was not there...she turned back...but he was not there she turned front again ...as soon as she turned he cupped her face and kissed hard... making her pause her breathing...she felt everything getting blur... nothing is visible to her...

Udal Anintha Aadaipl
nai Aninthu Klvaaya
Ini Nee Ini Nee Kanna
Thngatha n Kannin
Thuyil Uritha Kannanthan
Ini Nee Ini Nee
Idhu Naeramalae…Naan
Unnai Paaramalae…Naan
Indha Muzhujenmam PiIrunthaal
ndru Athai nni Veen Aekkam ngamalae
Unnai Mchchakki Vaazhvaenada


after a few secs she recovered and pushed him back just to be pulled into another kiss this tym more deeper...he went out his frustration pain everything in that just one kiss ...finally loosing all her senses she surrendered herself to him!!! he walked front crushing her between him and the rock...his hands caressing her face hands and everywhere trying to register that she is there with him in flesh!!! as he deepened the kiss trying to feel her more...to just fill up the loneliness he felt these two years...finally when he was almost abt to blank out he pulled back ...kriya was breathing hard her eyes...closed...he crushed himself more and started kissing her cheeks when her mobile rang... she was as if totally blanked out...so after three to four rings rey pulled her mobile from her pocket and saw the ID

it flashed mom!! he lifted after two rings...

"kriya kaha ho tum...bohut tym hogaya beta.."she was cut

"wo mere saath hai aunty..."rey said finally...

"koun ho tum??"smriti almot barked

"rey"he said

"rey???"smriti gasped as rey disconnected the call and kept it in his pocket...


Thakka Thakka Dhim
Thakka Thakka Dhim
Thakka Thakka Dhim
Thaka Thaka Dhim
Thakka Dhim Thakka Dhim
Thnngu Thngu Thakkita Thngu
Thaka Tharika Thaka Tharika
Thaka Tharika Thaka Tharika
Thaka Tharika Thaka Tharika

Maaya Thirudan Kanna Kanna
Kaama Kalaignyan Kanna Kanna
Maaya Thirudan Kanna Kanna
Kaama Kalaignyan Kanna Kanna
Maaya Thirudan Kaama Kalaignyan
Kanna Kanna Kanna Kanna
Maaya Thirudan Kanna Kanna
Kaama Kalaignyan Kanna Kanna

she was still in trance...

"baatcutter??"he whispered softly caressing her cheeks with his!!! she opened her eyes slowly...

"u love me??"he asked looking directly into her eyes...

"rey wo actually uss din"he shhh ed her by placing finger on her lips!!! and pressing her more into rock...he removed his finger and whispered against her lips..

"u love me???"he repeated...she just blushed and looked down/...

he pulled her to him strongly his left wrapping her waist and right on her back pushing her more into him and his lips exploring hers...she slowly wrapped her arms around his neck as her right massaged his hair and the left played on his nape seducing him more and wanting more of her...


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hope u liked bacha!!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY again!!!

sorry again!!!

love you 🤗









Edited by deetha - 12 years ago
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res !

haila !

me first !

*heart attack*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res :)
Unres

loved it di

Thanks for the pm

But cant wish for it to happen in real b'coz of the on going track
Edited by lil_devil_himu - 12 years ago
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finally completed hope u like!!!
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thanks dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsm wrd is ds k samne bohot smal hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its really awesome
loved it alot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
awsome os...
Luvd it
thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum yaar...loved it... Nd happy b'day mish...:) srry mee alsoo late...:p

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