Shivi, i was crying while reading that sentence where simmi says, aur kis liye ayenge hum tumhare pass, u knw i felt like uff, i dnt knw what to write, i was visualizing that scene, i could see taani heartbroken n i cried from that line to last line i was crying, u know this is how she will react after months of torture (i think thats the correct word) so i could connect it, her pain , why dnt they see it, dumb heads !! i feel like knocking the head of every one in the team, she let her heart out n now every 1 is crying what for? I am really angry on them.
Shivi excellent excellent work u wrote it with the correct intensity, i wish u continue this, u can write taanis pov superbly, try to continue, i would like a strong taani as an outcome of this heartbreak coz it says iron gets morestrong n perfectly molded once its strongly heated