~FORBIDDEN DESIRE (UL II)~#5 Ch 11 Pg108 13/03 EXT

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Disha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

nice update tht was soo much pain in it

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rvas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

ok that just very sad...tissue paper is being used by the bus load...the expenses I bear for reading your stories😆...can't wait for more

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tagmilk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Whereee is arnav?

Feeling reallyy bad for khushi and arnav.

Khushi's right in her place and arnav's right in his place but the circumstances are wrong.

Very emotional and nice update!

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Johnny Atkinson

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

waiting 4 the last chapter...

and this ff is awesome.

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Yellow.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

that was so emotional extension...

next chapter is last part 😭

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MamiaRehman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

waiting desperately for their marriage...i believe its gonna happen... it has to be...

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#887

It was heart breaking chapter. Both of them suffered a lot. Hope every thing goes well in the end. Thanks for the update.

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#888

Firstly am sorry for not reading & commenting on your FF's lately, its just that am held up with hell lot of office work. I, myself feel bad for lagging behind with updates of both UL😭. Now coming to updates, I loved it. The way the story started and the way it has progressed is tremendous. There is a hell lot of difference between the arnav in first chap & the arnav in the last two chaps. I loved the way he took care of her & the way he reacted when doctor said he want to give saline to khushi, followed by the flashback. The past, how arnav's parents died saving khushi and arnav's reaction & his emotional out burst , khushi pain when he blames her & holds her responsible for his parents, specially when he tells her it should have been the other way around were all beautifully penned. I wish he fulfills his mother's last wish.

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pinkwhalefish

@pinkwhalefish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#889

oh u ending dis fic dats really sad... Coming 2 d update as a kid arnav's hatred 2wards khushi understood but he is grown up and mature now and its sad 2 think he still thinks khushi is responsible for his parents death though he luvs her a lot...

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Penny

@penny25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#890

seriously u're ending dis stry..so soon...ohh no...:'(..but i know d end is dis..y to drag it afterall..but di i'm happy dat u're wrote dis stry...seriously di in u're stries i have noticed a constnt pattern..u've made khushi emotionally very strong...even afterall dis rejection she nevr backed down..seriously it really requires a lot of mental strenth to be dis amount of giving to some1..

similarliy khushi love conquered arnav's hatred rite...i've dis feeling dat dey'l get married rite...?????

w8n for d nxt update...lets c wat happens in d last chpter..seriously dis all happened in just two days..awww...seriosuly evrything just summed up..

thnks for sharing u're stries wid us..u're vision for arshi is suprb..

hey u wrote d after dis u'll complete BFTW2..i cant w8 for it to strt again..:)