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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 9


Riya to herself (pr thoda zor se): Koi aise kaise gusse me apne dil ki baat ladki ko bta skta hai gusse me…. Accha hai arjun ne mujhe thik se to purpose kia…….romantic tarike se….bilkul filmy style me……

(sabka dhayan riya ki baat ki taraf jaata hai…..)

Arjun though : ye ladki pakka mujhe marwayegi…. Fir se fasa dia

Riya though : uff apne hi jaal me fir se fas gyi…..

Rathore : agge ki baat baccho k jan ne k liye nhi hai….. to koi aur swal nhi puchega….

Chotu : pr yahaan baccha kaun hai sir?????

(Sare shree ki taraf dekhte hai…..)

Shree : main baccha nhi hu………..samjhe aap log……

Rathore : abhi itne bade bhi nhi huye ho…..

Shree : itna chota bhi nhi hu main (with sad tone)

Chotu : chod naa shree..hume waise bhi arjun sir aur riya k bare me pta krna hai…

Rathore : to tum logo me se agge ki kahani kaun bta rha hai…

(riya aur arjun ek dusre ko dekhte hai…)

Aisha : hummm lgta hai dono me se batane k irade kisi k nhi hai…Mere pass ek aur idea hai..

Chotu : kya???????

Aisha : kyun naa… jo kal raat ko jo kuch hua….ek baar uska repeat ho jaaye

Rathore : matlab????????

Aisha : arre inhe batane me problem aa rhi hai….pr jo kuch bhi inhone kal raat ko kia..use dohrane me to mazaa hi aayega inhe…aur hume dekhne me….kya khayal hai….

Shree : waah…khayal to accha hai…

Chotu : aisha kafi intelligent ho gyi hai…

Rathore : aakhir biwi kiski hai…

(Riya aur arjun ek dusre ko dekhte hai…..fir raat ki baat yaad krte hai….)

Riya aur arjun : no…….nooo ways…..hum aisa kuch nhi krne wale hai

Rathore : aisa kya kia tha…..tum dono ne kal raat….jo naa bta kr razi ho….naa dikha kr….Kahi sab kuch shadi se pehle hi to nhi kr lia….(sabhi haste hai..aur arjun aur riya embrassed feel krte hai..)

Arjun : sam tumhe nhi lgta k tum zyada bol rhe ho….

Rathore : main to sirf zyda bol rha hu..tumhari tarah jhut nhi…..isliye tum kuch naa hi kaho to accha hai….

Aisha to Rathore : aapko jo saaman lane ko bola wo aap le aaye

Rathore : haan….wo hi dene to main kitchen me gya tha..kitchen me hai….

Aisha : mujhe do minute ka time do main abhi aayi……

Riya and arjun though : ab ye kya krne wali hai……

(aisha kitchen se saaman lekar aati hai….)

Aisha (red and white roses arjun ko dete huye) : ye tumhare kaam aayenge…..(arjun aisha ki taraf dekhta hai…pr aisha already shree se baat krne me busy hai….)

Arjun to himself : ye mere kis kaam aayenge….

Aisha to shree and chotu : ye lo jahaan jaahaan maine bola hai candles lgao..pehle parde gira do..ekdum andera lgna chahiye….. fir light switch off kr dena…pr uss se pehle candles jala dena……

(dono haan me sar hilate hai….)

Riya to Aisha : tum kr kya rhi ho….Aisha…..

Aisha : Haan ek mintune….. (iss se pehle riya kuch samjh ya keh paati….aisha riya k hath se arjun ki di huyi ring nikal kr arjun k hath me de deti hai…)

Riya (in anger): Aisha ye kya kia tumne….wo ring arjun ne di thi mujhe…aur tumne??????

Aisha with smile : haan to dobra dega arjun tumhe…pr hum sabke saamne…..

Arjun : Main aisa kuch nhi karne wala

Rathore : koi option hai tumhare pass…..

(thodi hi derr me all set….Hall me bilkul andhera…. Sirf candles ki roshni….Arjun aur riya ek dusre ko dekhte hai..fir baki sab ko….)

Aisha though : ye nhi sudherenge……(aisha dono ko khada krti hai…arjun k hath me flower deti hai..aur ring bhi….)

Aisha : ab shuru ho jao…humari presence ko bhul jao….(but arjun aur riya ek dusre ko dekhne ki jagah baki sabko dekhne me lage hai..aisha arjun k hath me riya ka hath deti hai….dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai..there is cute eyelock…riya apna hath arjun k hath k me se nikalane ki koshish krti hai… pr arjun uska hath nhi chodta…riya jitna koshish krti hai..arjun apni grip aur tight kr leta hai…

Riya with blushes : arjun kya kr rhe ho aap???? Sab dekh rhe hai…….

Arjun : tum jab aise sharmati ho naa….to main apna control kho deta hu….

Riya (again blush) : arjun chodiye naa….

Arjun (in naughty way): Agar naa chodu to…….

Riya (blush) : arjunnn………. Fir aapko jo marzi aaye karo…..

(Arjun riya ko uski waist pakad kr apne pass khichta hai….dono kafi closed hai….. )

Riya though : ufff…agar arjun se kal raat me jo kuch kia wo kia to?????

Riya : arrjjunnn….plllsss………..

(Arjun riya k face k pass jaata hai…aur uske kaan me kehta hai….)

Arjun : :Main tumse aur sirf tumse pyar karta hu, Meri har saans, meri har dhadkan me tum aur sirf tum ho..Mujhe yakin hai k main sirf isliye janma hu k main tumse pyar kar saku, aur tum sirf isliye k tum meri ban jao..Tum meri ho.. aur agar tum apne dil se puchogi to jaan logi k main sach keh rha hu..I love u Riya……(aur arjun riya ko uske forehead pr kiss krta hai..aur ring riya ki ring finger me daal deta hai…)

(Sabhi arjun ka ye romantic roop dekh kr..aur specially romantic dialogue arjun k muh se sun kr kafi shocked hai..riya bhi….usse arjun se itni zyada umeed nhi thi……)

Arjun wishpers in riya ear : Ab tumhare bari…….*wink*

Riya kiss on arjun cheek : I love u too arjun…..(both hug each other…..ab tak dono bhul chuke hai k team bhi unke saamne hi baithi hai……aur dono ek dusre me gum hai…..rathore sabko ishara krta hai.. chalne ka chupchap nikalne ka….but shree aise uthta hai…k kuch gir jaata hai….Arjun aur riya ek dusre se alag hote hai…)

Arjun though : main to bhul hi gya tha..team yahi pr hai…uff accha hua kuch kia nhi

Riya though : arjun khud pr to control kr nhi paate..aur unke aas pass hone pr main bhi apna control kho deti hu….

Rathore gusse me shree ko dekhta hai…..

Shree : sorry sir

Rathore to Ariya : u both carry on…hume aur kuch nhi jan na hai *wink* (continued by aisha…)

Aisha : aur tum dono ka dinner kitchen me hai…agar bhuk lge to kha lena……

Riya : pr aap log jaa kyun rhe ho??????

Chotu : chhiii riya….tu ab hum sabke samne hi arjun sir k sath romance karegi….sharm kr…..

Riya : shut up chotu

Aisha : ab tum dono ki jo situation hai naa..iss me zyda din tum dono ko durr rakhna khatarnak hai…to pandit ji k pass jaana hai..shadi ki sari taiyari krni hai… aur ek hafte me tum dono ki shadi karwani hai…*wink*

Arjun aur riya shocked…

Riya : ek hafte me???????..(iss se pehle koi kuch kehta ya sunta..rathore, aisha, chotu aur shree..door k pass….aisha jaate jaate)

Aisha : pls door ander se lock kr lena….aur balcony bhi band kr lena..wrna koi bhi aa skta hai…

(aur puri team bahar…… Riya door close krne k liye jaane lagti hai..pr arjun use wrist se pakad kr apne pass khich leta hai…aur uski waist se apna hath daal kr use apne aur kareeb kr leta hai..aur uski aankhon me aankhen daal kr dekhta hai….)

Arjun : so Miss. Riya mukherjee..Mrs. Riya Arjun Rawte ban ne ko ready????? Bs ek week aur?????

Riya : Ek week??????

Arjun : kyun kam hai….. tumhe aur whqt chahiye kya….(and arjun kiss her on shoulder)

Riya : nhi…zyda hai….*wink* (aur arjun kuch aur kare iss se pehle hi riya khud ko arjun se chuda kr bhag leti hai….)

Arjun : ruko riya…..main tumhe nhi chodne wala…..

Riya : uske liye aapko pakadana padega…………..

(after one week arjun and riya get married….aur arjun ka room riya k sapne ki tarah hi saza hua hai…both entered in the room)

Arjun riya ko bahon me bharte huye : tumhara sapna pura krne ka whqt aa gya hai…..*wink* and riya blushed….

(Aur jisko jo sochna hai soch skta hai...kuch apni imagination bhi lgao yaaro….)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Haye end ho gya !!
superb di
lov it..!!
maje aa gye!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
unres

aage ki baat bachcho k jaane k liye nahi hai bechara shree use kab log bada samjhnge🤣

rofl ayesha na🤣 bechare riya-arjun...

and shree-chotu🤣

omg candles,light band ,parde gira diye then arjun ka ring dena fir se propose karna

mujhe ye sab fairy tale jaisa lag raha tha so beautifull loved it and mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise main bhi ye sab dekh rahi hun..visualise to kar hi rahi thi.😉..i dont want to come out of this fairy tale dil garden garden kar diya yaar annu muaah😆

aww this is so cute...whole team was shocked bt arjun to arjun hai😛 i always love his romantic side

this is like dream come fr any girl and i cant tell u m so happy fr riya 😃 and arjun jaisa koi propose kare aise to koi bhi girl haan bol degi

Aisha : ab tum dono ki jo situation hai naa..iss me zyda din tum dono ko durr rakhna khatarnak hai🤣🤣🤣 exactly sahi kaha ayesha ne

omg dono ki shaadi bhi ho gayi so sweet😃

annu--🤗love u yaar

awesum amazing part bt tu end to nahi kar rahi hai na??? plz mat karna

some lines for arjun and riya---

Zindagi ki neendhon ki subah ishq hai
Badi khoobsurat si saza ishq hai
Humko pyar hua, poori hui dua
Humko pyar hua, poori hui dua

Edited by shona14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehehehheee... Itna kaafi hai imagine shimagine hum nhi krte
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was really a cute&happy end😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awsmmm... or imagination jise jo karni hogi kar lengi... sab apne tarike se...
ending was great...

:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shona14

unres

aage ki baat bachcho k jaane k liye nahi hai bechara shree use kab log bada samjhnge🤣

rofl ayesha na🤣 bechare riya-arjun...

and shree-chotu🤣

omg candles,light band ,parde gira diye then arjun ka ring dena fir se propose karna

mujhe ye sab fairy tale jaisa lag raha tha so beautifull loved it and mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise main bhi ye sab dekh rahi hun..visualise to kar hi rahi thi.😉..i dont want to come out of this fairy tale dil garden garden kar diya yaar annu muaah😆

aww this is so cute...whole team was shocked bt arjun to arjun hai😛 i always love his romantic side

this is like dream come fr any girl and i cant tell u m so happy fr riya 😃 and arjun jaisa koi propose kare aise to koi bhi girl haan bol degi

Aisha : ab tum dono ki jo situation hai naa..iss me zyda din tum dono ko durr rakhna khatarnak hai🤣🤣🤣 exactly sahi kaha ayesha ne

omg dono ki shaadi bhi ho gayi so sweet😃

annu--🤗love u yaar

awesum amazing part bt tu end to nahi kar rahi hai na??? plz mat karna

some lines for arjun and riya---

Zindagi ki neendhon ki subah ishq hai
Badi khoobsurat si saza ishq hai
Humko pyar hua, poori hui dua
Humko pyar hua, poori hui dua




ab shree to kabhi bada ho hi nhi skta 🤣🤣🤣

haan haan...ye socha bacha lia tumhare ariya ko...agar unhe raat ki baat batani pad jati to definately fas jaate 🤣🤣🤣


Haan fairy tale hi hai...ab aisa to sach much hone se raha 🤣🤣...waise bhi arjun k dialogue ufff...wo dialogue koi bhi ladka kisi ladki ko bolega to definately ladki k liye mana krna muskil hai...aur fir ye to arjun ne riya ko bole the...🤣🤣

ab aisha aur annu me fark hi kaha hai 😉 to aisha jo kehti hai sahi kehti hai ...🤣🤣🤣

yaar end kr dia iss story ka...wo kya hai naa..romantic likhne me meri halat kharab ho jati hai..isliye end kr di...😆😆😆

waise bhi aage kya likhti...shadi to krwa di dono ki...
Edited by chulbuliannu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey just read the last two parts...
sorry for the late comment...
the updates were superb...
lol kya tables turn kiye arjun ne... sab raisha pe chale gye... 😆
aur wo bache wala dialogue... awww shreee... bechara...
lo riya ne to khud ko hi fassa liya... 😆
loved the romantic environment they created...
haaye kya proposal tha arjun... very romantic...
finally ariya married...
plz don't end this yr...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb ending. I'm going to miss it...it was my favorite. Please write a sequeal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such an awesome ending :) loved it
loved when everyone was looking at shree and shree replied mein bacha nai hun 😆
aisha's idea was awesome
poor arjun and riya were so embarrassed
love the whole atmosphere aisha created in the room
arjun and riya's conversation was lovely
love the way arjun proposed her ❤️
finally they got married
thanks for the pm

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