FF: !!DarD!! [Updated Chapter17-Page79]

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Incredible update dr.

Loved Shriza nok-jhoks.

FB was hilarious.

samsha's moments n cute eye lock was beautiful.

Case is becoming more n more interesting.

Awww Riya thanked god for saving her frm Arjun.

Poor Riya. Sadu Akdu Rawte scolded her.

Loved it.

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago

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Priyanka

@A_Derry_Girl

Achiever

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Lol Chotu Shree Liza part was super cute :P
Arjun Riya part was so so adorable, love the siggie too!!!
lovely update..contd soon :D

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#473

awesome update

loved ur siggie

cont soon!!!!!!

Edited by madmadona - 12 years ago

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

nice updt mon

hope dis rain filld color 2 dis coupls life

all r gtng close due to rain

spclyy ariya...

dat light hugg...so sweet

bt arjun apni sadugiri se bahar nahi aya

dancng dimple doll ke dekhke kaha kho jaega ...bt ...nahi uske badle bechari par chilla raha hay...

is moment pe vi 1 romntc clash hi dedena next updt mein plzz

and on da same moment raesha r gtng close too

and da left trio also hvng der fun

lv da updt

wana more rmntc updt like dis

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sanalala1990

@sanalala1990

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Hey I just read all your updates mind blowing superb story

just few things made me really confused

1: for girls we use karti, jati l mean to say words which ends with TI we use them for girls in hindi

2: for boys we use karta, jata I mean TA is used for boys

Just these things made me confused I mean I was not able to understand whom are you talking about girl or a boy

I'm sorry I didn't mean to hurt you

otherwise your storyline, dialogue everything is just perfect

and update soon and pm me if you can please:)

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bollywoodfan16

@bollywoodfan16

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Great story..i m liking the mystery part around everyone..plz plz update soon...

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#477

momo... plz dnt kill me.for commenting so late :P
just read last four parts together...
and they were superbly awesome fantastic...
so riya was going to ashram...and refused everyone's offer for lift...
but arjun se leni hi padi lift😉
hmm so pari is anjili n riya's bro's daughter...aww she calls him pip how cute... <3
ohh no anjili was so angry at riya... n upar se rii ki baat... she hit her...glad she wasn't hurt much...
aww love the way rii made them eat food...
her convo with bee was heart touching...
omg so someone is still behind them thats why she has hidden pari n anjili...
and about whom she was talking??? arjun n sam???
ohh so it was mr football...
pihu aur iski fights kabhi khtm ni ho skti😆
bechari riii... omg he was full ready to make rii his bhabhi.. but sam k to wo bada bhai manti h...
por guy was so sad.. ab usse ye ni pta ki banegi to uski bhabhi hi... 😉 arjun hai na...
his talk with sam was lovely... and heart touching...
gosh he is missing anjili so much...
fb was awesome...
aur ye arjun kiske baare mai baat kar rha tha???
his pov was beautifully described...
ohh no rii late... chalo aisha saved her...
case is going interesting...
aww poor chottu... he got hurt by the door n bcoz of this liza had to tag with them... bechara shree was so annoyed...
ariya scenes were lovely...the way he saved her two times... aur phir rain bhi cool...
riya ke child like antics are lovely... she was enjoying n thanking god so sweet...
lovely siggy in between momo...
haaye raesha moments bhi kam ni... dono ka eyelock... wow... the way he helped her in balancing.. ahem uski baahon mai...
sab couples pe rain ho rhi hai😉
liza ko bhutta chaiye aur shre ko nai aww...
precap is very interesting...
update soon momo SYS...