Arhi: Valley of Flowers #2 Chapter 13 in thread 3

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aafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

You moved the story so fast... Thank you.
Atleast anjali and Nani have their suspicions about their mother.

Khushi is getting married!

Please make Arnav come back. Please

May be Shyam will do something stupid to stop the wedding.

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anera

@anera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#902

oke SHIT f**k tomorrow IS WEDDING f**k
and i hate shyamu but if he can make the wedding stop
i would be very happy

think about it anjali what happend to khushi
why did ur mother sponser her
and f**k nani dont know anything

kavi does anyone knows about what kinds of trick the mother of arnav play

ohh god arnav where the f**k are you

i think lavarnya knows what arnavs mother did bcz in previous chapters you told us that when khushi went to mumbai arnav was that day with lavarny
so maybe arnav mother told her plan to lavarnyas mother that what kind of trick she is going to plant to sho khushi away
and lav mom and arnav mom where best friends and lav mom knew that their was defenatiy something between arnav and khushi so . arnav mom did it to sho khushi away and maybe lav mom also told lav what they have done
but i am positive that she is never going to tell anyone
plz update next week on time kavi i really dont want to miss what happend
ooo god

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Bushra

@cmileyfreaky

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Posted: 12 years ago

#903

they botth need to get laid. like, seriously.

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anarshi

@anarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#904

FANTASTIC UPDATE KAVI...NARRATION OF PAST AND PRESENT IS BEAUTIFULLY DONE...👏👏👏

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hello87_11

@hello87_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#905

when will khushi's suffering end! :\ Amazing update! :)

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#906

so much pain...so beautiful soul...when somebody understand her plight

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#907

WOW! The story is moving at a break neck speed. They went from a wonderful date at Taj to Khushi's Mehendi and Sangeet. You used an interesting technique of using thrid person (s), Nani and Anjali to narrate some important incidents of past and present.

Loved that you used the ring incident - IPk scene taken from DDLJ... awww :)

Can't wait for the next few updates that I'm wishing that this FF is a book that I can finish in one read instead of waiting for updates. You have me hooked :)