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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Man, 7 chapters and I don't know about this story! I wonder if not realizing the consequences of our actions is as bad a sin as it sounds. Waiting for the details on why Khushi took that decision.

The scene describing Payal after the accident was pretty well written

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

This update reminded me of all the times my best friend comes to me and lends her shoulder to cry on during testing times and laughs and cries with me during my happy and grief filled days.

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

life can be funny sometimes...

nobody asked her what had happen and why...

feel really sad for khushi

lav is just a sweetheart

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Chapter 6 -Many of my questions were answered in this update...

Chapter 7-We a different side of Lavanya and I loved her for what she is doing for the Kids and Payal..Khushi found some comfort in La..

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citi

@citi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Thoroughly enjoying this story. How in their own way each one of them has tried to find some solace in things and helped each other too. Khushi has fought this battle on her own, even though she seems to be the one who is responsible for this mess but isn't she too a victim. Because as you suggested in before she too reacted to something she got to know even though her action was hasty, but that's in hindsight. Khushi's defensiveness, fear of rejection and finally giving in is well portrayed.

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Thank god khushi has la with her.she also helped payal get out of depression.she's like a life savr for both sisters.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Like they say, you cannot choose your family but you can choose your friends. Lavanya in this story is my favourite character. She is like sunshine bringing light to the lives of others.

Hope you tell us soon what made Khushi run at the eve of her wedding.

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nivii

@nivii

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

In this story la is my favourite!! Amazing how she tries to help everyone.
And the story is really really good!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

wow...just read the whole story in one go...amazing work...loved it ...wonder what caused kushi to take such a drastic step all those years ago...continue soon...

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: bumble_bee
just came across this ff... what can i say... its an emotionally charged story.. abstract to a certain extent but i can read answers in the abstraction...

the last chapter had me in tears... relationships are a mutant creation filled with varying experiences, ever-changing emotions and importantly time that has made them or broken them...

i would love to see where you take this ff.. its very different from most ff's here...

Thank you... I certainly do not wish for abstraction in a story like this but it must be a disease or a style of writing I am not able to get over with. Hopefully next update is much straight forward and to the point... :=)