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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: sanalala1990
Great job yaar bhot acha update specially the masti part of a trio awesome<3👍🏼

Ohh lv u sana dr..
thanks dr for liking thats scence is also my fav

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: sumbulqaiser
wonderfull update, what a great concept,
Contune soon,
thanks for Pm

Oh thanks dr..

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: fatima15

superb update :) loved it
loved their scenes in the car
love the way he consoled her
chotu and shree are so funny
arjun'sdialogueswere superb outside OT
feeling so bad for arjun :(
can't wait to read more
continue soon

Thanks dr fatii..
lv u dr for ur sweet commentsss
ohh feel sad for arjun...
ohhh so sweet

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

superb update...
arjun's dialogues outside ot were very awsum very emotional... he is in so much pain... :'( hope riya and baby are safe...
omg shree bhi na har bar riya ko fasa deta h lol... heheh...
precap is interesting...
continue soon...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: devildiva21
superb update...
arjun's dialogues outside ot were very awsum very emotional... he is in so much pain... :'( hope riya and baby are safe...
omg shree bhi na har bar riya ko fasa deta h lol... heheh...
precap is interesting...
continue soon...

Thanks divaya dr..
ya dr i will update next part today..hop u enjoys

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Gorasiya Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

hi dear sorry for late comment because some error to post my comment in if so i made comment today so sorry for late but because i am late i made a long comment for two parts so that are below

for part 5

starting is to good dear arjun hug riya and cry i am also but then he walk and left office wow dear what a seen you pen down it beautifully

friendship of shree,chotu and riya is great head's off to trio bina kuch kahe hi samj jate hai tino ak dusre ke paresani ko

case was nice and now arjun and riya togher in car after read this i knew something happened on the way because agar arjun our riya sath ho aur arjun gusse me hai to sub kuch thik kese ho sakta hai

and then arjun incress car speed and then the child come and arjun turn the car and riya on his hand and shivering what a seen and then arjun asked her that she is ok? i like that most

beautifully written dear you rock

now

for part 6

and after all that riya shivering badly and arjun is now back to his soft side and worried about riya that she is ok or not and then crying and say sorry to arjun

i like the arjun talk to him self and riya out of ot that she is promise him that she never leave him wow dear you great

present is too good dear but pls revel soon the misery of arjun and riya's marriage i am waiting for that and pls describe the thing about their marriage and baby and what happened to her so that she and her baby is in hospital and war for their life so pls update soon and tnx for pm dear

pls dear update soon and tnx for pm

this is for you dear

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Edited by 12pr - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

PART=7
Uff kya ada hai,jis pe dil pida hai,

SCENCE-Riya park the suv n wanna to go inside hospital but she saw arjun's come backe,
Arjun mumered himself,
samajhata kya hai vo adami apne aap ko mujhe ,acp arjun rawte ko rull sikha raha tha,
Ri-sir kya huya aap etane pareshan kyun lag rahe hai,
Ar-kuch nahi,gadi nikalo hamen vapise jana hai,
Ri-kya report mil gaye,
Ar-nahi report nahi mile,
Ri-per hum to yahan report lene aye they,
Ar-mujhe bhi pata hai per usane report dene se mana ker diya or kaha,sham ho gaye hai or sham ko koe report nahi de jati,
Ri-main kuch karon sir,
Arjun was bit confuse n say tum kya karogi,
Ri-sir Aurat ke kabiliyat per kabhi shak nahi kerna chahiye,
she remove rubber band from her hair n put some layer in front side,
Ar-tum ye kya ker rahi hoo,
Ri-bus do minute rok jaeye sir,she gave her dairy in arjun's hand ,sir mare dairy sambhal ker rakhiye main baad main aker aap se longi,
arjun surprisely watching riya,
she turned his oposite sides,
her hairs hit on arjun's face,
arjun closed his eyes for few second,

she murched toward reception,there one midle age man stood n talk with his frs on phone,
riya goes near him,wave her hands n say
Ri-hii ,her one hand playing with her hairs,
the man lift his graz n saw her,
man wishper in very low
voice as no one can hear,
Wah kya maal hai,
kitane dino baad deadbodies ke alava koe khubrurat maal dekhe ko mila hai,
riya very well knon how to handle that type of man
Ri-lagta hai aap thoda bussy hai main phir kabhi aa jaongi,she turned n wanna to leave,
man cut call n stoped her,
Man-are aap kaise baat ker rahi hai,hum to aap ke seva ke liye he baide hai,
bataye naa aap ko kya kaan hai,
man admiring her from top to bottum,
but someone eyes fixed on both,arjun looking angrly toward that man,

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Ri-ohh app sach main kitane achhe hai,accualy mujhe mr shama ke death report chahiye,
Man-per es waqt..
Ri-i know es waqt report dena, ye aap ke rull ke khilafhai,per ager argent nahi hoota to main ye bilkul nahi kehti,i hop aap meri baat samajh rahe honge,
Man-ofcouse main samajh sakta hoon ,
After few minute he gave her one file,
riya wanna to took that file,
the man tuched her hand by his hand,
riya wanna to free her hand ,but he hold litle more tightly..
as he doing shake hand,
riya makes fack smile on her face,she wanna to give one tight puch, but controled hersef..
man-App ohir kab ayengin,
before she culd reply,one man came from behind,
rest his hand arround her thin waist n pull litle toward him,
Riya was surpised that who is he,she lift her face up n saw arjun holding her by her waist,
Ri-arjun..sir
Man-tum phir aa gaye,
the man tuches his cheeks,
man think flash for few minute back-when arjun comes n ask him about report,but he talk his gf on phone,arjun ask him two three time but the man didnt reply,
Arjun was full erritated,
arjun sneched his phone n cut the call,
Ar-main kab se tumse kuch puch raha hoon, or tum phone per bussy ho,
mujhe sharma case ke death report chahiye,
man-nahin doonaga kya ker loge,
arjun culdnt control himself n give one tight puch on his cheeks,
~~

Riya's eyes fixed on him n arjun looking angrly toward that man..
Ar-kyun aapko kuch kaam hai meri(streched the word meri) wife se,
ager aap ka pochana khatam ho gaya ho to meharbani kerke meri wife ka haath chodane ka kasht kerenge,
the man remind that tight punch n imedeatly remove his hand,
n take two three step back,
Riya thinking,is i m dreaming or arjun sir realy do this,
she was gaspered by arjun tuch,

she stil looking in arjun face,

she brinking her eyes two three times just the

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

The conformation that she is not dreaming,
arjun realy hold her by her waist n realy say than man that riya is hus wife,
she didnt know why she feel happy,why she attracted toward arjun,
arjun looked in her n found she is lost in him,
arjun shouted two three times his name,
but she did not reply,
arjun shouted bit loud
riyaaa..!!
riya comes out her dream,
she looked in arjun with puppy eyes..as she is blaming arjun to brock her beautiful dream,
arjun peased his teeth n say
Ar-ab chalen bibi gher jaker jitana chaho utana ghur lena..
riya feel the anger on arjun's voice, she just nodded her head in positive..
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SCENCE SHIFT IN PRESENT-
SCENCE-arjun blaiming himself for riya's condition,
n sameer tried to convince him,
Ar-riya ke es halat ka responsible bus main hoon,sirf or sirf main,
Sa-ye kya bakbaas ker rahe ho tum arjun,riya ke sath jo kuch bhi huya usamen tumhare koe galti nahi,
Ar-mare koe galti nahi,sirf or sirf mere he galti hai,Na vo mujhas etana pyaar kerti or na he..
Sa-arjun...
Nurse rushed outside OT ..
doctor doctor paisent ka bp abhi bhi stable nahi ho paa raha,
arjun feel his heart more heavy ,he culdnt control himsef n opened OT door ,
sameer wanna to stop him,
but arjun is arjun,
arjun's legs is froze,
esase pehale he culdnt imagine himself so week n helpless,
arjun dont hav much power to muched himself toward her bed,
he collect his all courage,
he took very slow step toward her..
Riyaaa...he wishper very slow,he culdnt breath properly..
she is laying on a bed,her eyes is closed,her face is pale,
arjun comes closer n tuched her forhead
arjun wishper slowly Riyaa..one drop falling his eyes on her checks,
arjun creassed her hair,bend down litle her face n give one picks on her forhand,
"Riya kal kitane door hoker bhi kitane pass the,
or aaj etane pass hoker"

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

ajj etane pass hoker bhi kitane door hoo.."
nahi dekh sakta tumhen estarah ,tum aaj mere vajah se yahan ho,
shayad mujh se pyaar kerene ke saja mile hai,
arjun sit near her..
hold her hand tightly with his hand as never wanna to let her go anywhere..
he kissed her hand n cressed his hair,
n try to make litle smile on his face,
Tumhare chehare per ye udase bilkul achhi nahi lagti,
tumhara yun chup rehana mujhe bilkul pasand nahi,
samjhe tum,
Main aaj bhi tumhara boss hoon,or tum mere junior,
mera order follow kerna aaj bhi tumhara kaam hai,
Chalo ab bahoot hoo gaya ab jaldy se ud jao,
but she didnt reply,
arjun wiped his tears with his hand,
nmove his hand on her tummy..
Heyy litle princess kya ker rahi hai,
mama ko jayada tang to nahi ker rahi hoo..
tum to papa ke god girl ho,
to mama se kaho ,papa realy miss her,
papa cant see ur mama like this,plz apni mama se kaho vo jaldy thik hoo jaye,
phir...arjun culdnt hold himself more..
he wanna to controled his tear..
but he failed..
TBC---
PRE-ARJUN shouted riya shoot..
but her hand is froze..
one gun shood..
n goli hits riya's arms..
some more present scence..finaly operation start..
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so how was that part mast that ya bore..plz leav ur comment if u wanna next part..soon verna...???
sorry for speling mistake jaldy jaldy likha hai...

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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