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hey sweeties hi:)
i want to thank u all for such sweet response for my story... i m just three parts ahead in this thread and already 31 pages of comments.. u all left me shocked!!!!!!
thanks a lot:)
so now.. song for the update... "abhi mujh mein kahin" from agneepath
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PART 18

Fights and cuddles... tears and laughter. Frowns and smile. Break up and make up. Arguments and agreements. Loneliness and togetherness. Ups and downs. Bad days and good days. they have been through all this but never thought of what it meant for them. It was one sweet word which was called as LOVE.

Today he wanted to hold her and say all that he feels for her in front of world but he was bit late'.. The place he always thought he belonged was not his. Everything changed in a blink of second!!!!!

Khushi took virat downstairs with her...

Vanshika:- Khushi, Manvi kahan hai? Tum usse lene gayi thi na?? tayar ho gayi woh?

(Khushi...where is manvi? u were with her na? did she get ready?)

Virat:- mom ... Manvi...

Khushi:- ma.. Woh bas aa rahi hai...

(Ma... she is coming in few moments...)

Khushi didn't let virat speak anything in front of Vanshika.

Virat:- bhabhi aapne mujhe batane kyu nahi diya??? Aur kitni der hum sabse chupayenge..??

(Bhabhi I think we should tell them everything. How long we are gonna hide this truth from everyone...)

Khushi:- virat... Do u trust me?

Virat:- what are u saying bhabhi...

Khushi:- just tell me...do u trust ur Khushi bhabhi?

Virat:- yes bhabhi... More than anyone...

Khushi:- then believe me virat... she will come... She won't leave u virat..!!

Virat eyes moved towards stairs...

Virat:- No bhabhi... she is leaving me!!!!

Khushi turned around and saw manvi coming downstairs holding Charles hand...she was dumbstruck to see them coming together hand in hand. For first time her intuition was wrong. Manvi was really leaving... she moved her eyes on virat who was looking totally heartbroken. She felt getting angry on herself for giving him false hope of manvi returning back to him...

Here Virat eyes were only on manvi he didn't mind looking at Charles for once. He was trying hard to read her eyes which were looking at him silently...they looked puzzled yet calm... he so wanted them to say that it was all dream. She isn't leaving him.. but alas the picture in front of his eyes was real. She was leaving with Charles..

Every eye in the hall turned towards manvi and Charles who were descending stairs together. Confusion and shock was clearly seen on their faces...

Charles came near virat holding Manvi's hand smiling widely. It pierced his heart, looking her hand in his. He felt like snatching her from him but alas he couldn't do it as she loved him.

Charles:- well done buddy!!!!

Virat:- huh??

Virat looked at him confusingly...

Charles:- she no more belong to me!!!!!

And he took Virat's hand and handed over Manvi's hand to him...

Charles: - best luck virat... and take care of her... bye...

Charles left from there hiding his tears. But virat was flabbergasted...shocked with his words. He wasn't still able to believe his ears. Manvi choose him over Charles. He wasn't able to believe his own eyes. Manvi was standing in front of him...

Virat:- manvi... Tum... Wapas...

Manvi:- main apne friend ka saath kaise chod sakti hoon virat...

(how can I leave my friend in mid...)

Virat:- but u loved him...

Manvi:- I don't think so virat. Today when I think of him he just seems to be my teenage dream.. Whom I thought would be my price charming but that prince can only be part of my dream not part of my real future. My future is here ...with my babies'. With my family.. with u !!!!! I always liked him virat but never loved him..!!!!!!

And besides u have always been there with me in all my good and bad times... then today it's my turn to hold ur hand...so I m back...

Khushi came near them...

Khushi:- aap dono ki bateein ho gayi ho toh chale... panditji wait kar rahe hai...

Ayesha:- haan jiju...aab toh di ka gora bhoot bhi bhaag gaya hai... aab Di bhi bhaag jaye use pehle shaadi karlo warna bohot pachtaoge... (Winking)

Virat:- koi baat nahi angel... tum ho na...mein tumse shaadi kar lunga... waise bhi tumhari di bohot dimaag khati hai...

Manvi:- VIRAT.. (Manvi gave him an angry glare'.)

Virat:- I was just joking... mujhe pata hai tumhare Siva mera koi option nahi hai life mein...

And they walked towards the decorated mandap where everyone was waiting for them. Ayesha and Khushi helped her to sit down beside Virat.

The marriage ceremony got started and pandit started chanting mantras.

Manvi was hell nervous as she readily agreed for this marriage but now she realized how her life will change after this marriage. Even though she considered virat as her best friend but she can't deny the truth that he will be her husband from now on... She was scared thinking of whether she can prove herself a good daughter in law, good wife and better mother in future.

She silently closed her eyes and prayed "please god help me not mess up anything!!!!"

Virat saw her hand shivering... he held her hand and gave assuring smile. Looking at him made her more relax. Whatever situatio... maybe, he never failed to comfort her ...and today it was no different.

Manvi:- (in mind) kiddos can u see.. ur mamma and papa are getting married today... are u both happy??. (After a pause) oh... u both are very happy. (After a pause) we love u too sweeties!!

At one side where marriage ceremony was going on, other side Ayesha and Aarav were busy in their favorite ritual,"jhoote churana".

Ayesha and her friends already hided Virat's footwear's and Aarav was busy finding them with his gang...

Ayesha:- (coming near Aarav) kya hua... pareshan ho. Kuch kho gaya hai kya?

Aarav:- haan tumhara dimaag...wohi dundh raha hoon.!!!

Ayesha:- jab mil jayega na toh usme se kuch apne paas rakhlena, jhoote dundhne mein kaam aayega...

Aarav:- (leaning towards her face)itna uchalo mat chipkali Sharma' joote toh mein doodh ke rahunga... Dekh lena... (Winking)

(don't be so happy chipkali sharma... I will find bhai's shoes at any cost'. Just wait and watch'.!!!)

Ayesha:- dekh lenge Mr. vadhera!!!!

(Let's see Mr. Vadhera!!)

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"Get up manvi... it's time for phera's" Khushi whispered in Manvi's ears... breaking her trail of thoughts.

She got up gently holding Virat's hand and they started their phere's. Everybody gathered around mandap and showered flowers on them, while pandit was continuously chanting his non understandable mantras.

First four phere's were lead by virat and next three were lead by manvi. Virat didn't leave her hand for once indicating to be with her always...

After the seven phera's they sat down again and panditji handed a black pearl studded him necklace called mangalsutra which was holy symbol of married life. Virat took it from him and looked at manvi to make sure she was ready for it and seeing her wet eyes which were beaming with happiness. he moved near her nape and tied mangalsutra around her neck.

Pandit:- yeh sindoor laga do beta..

(Apply sindoor in her vermillion beta)

Virat took pinch of sindoor from small box and moved his hand towards her mang and filled her partition !!!!

Manvi opened her eyes slowly which were closed all way along, during sindoor part. She looked up to see pair of eyes which were saying her something. Maybe a promise to keep her happy all life. She knew he would then what else they were trying to say'.. She was trying to read them when she noticed that his eyes were so expressive. It carried lots of emotions in it. She wondered why she didn't ever notice them. She was so lost in his intense gaze'..that she didn't noticed Khushi grinning at them.

Khushi:- (shrugging manvi) manvi...kya hua??

Breaking eye lock...

Manvi: - (spoke urgently) kuch nahi...

Khushi:- get up...it's time to take everybody's blessing!!!!

They went toward elders and took their blessing one by one ..

Meanwhile Aarav was still busy in finding shoes.

Ayesha:- (grinning) joote nahi mile baby ko. (Teasing him) tch...tch...tch

Poor lad..

Just then Aarav's friend came and whispered something in his ears. Suddenly an evil smile crept on his lips hearing the news. Without looking back at Ayesha he turned around and ran from there.

Ayesha's friend:- Ayesha...those guys got to know where the shoes are.

Ayesha:- what!!! But how???

Oh forget... that doesn't matter.. I got to run before that idiot vadhera get shoes.

And she too ran behind Aarav.

Ayesha reached Virat's room where she hided his shoes and saw him standing with Virat's shoes. She immediately locked the door behind and ran towards Aarav...

Ayesha:- Aarav jhoote do...

Aarav:- nahi dunga...kya kar logi tum mera??

Ayesha:- dekho mujhe gussa mat dilao. Chup chap jhoote dedo varna (pointing finger)

Aarav:- (walking towards her) varna kya?

Ayesha slowly started moving back...

Aarav:- haan bolo varna kya karlogi? Marogi mujhe...kha jaogi tum mujhe?

Ayesha:- (stammering) woh..me..mei..mein...

Aarav:- mein mein bakri ki tarah ky...

Before he could complete his sentence Ayesha hit the edge of bed and she lost her balance and fell on the decorated bed...but in process she held Aarav hand making him fall on top of her.

Ayesha closed her eyes tightly in fear of getting hurt but she felt weight on top of her. she snapped opened her eyes and saw the hazel eyes looking at her...she so wanted to scream but she wasn't able to speak a word from her mouth.

Aarav kept admiring her beauty. He never saw her so quite before. He smirked seeing her wide open eyes

Aarav:- (sliding hand on her back and pulling more closer) haan bolo kya kar logi.??

Ayesha felt his hand on her bare back. She was stunned by his actions. She spoke stammering highly affected with this intimacy and those hazel hypnotizing eyes.

Ayesha:- Aa...Aar...Aarav...

Ayesha:- hmm... (Leaning closer to her)

Ayesha: - jhoote...

Aarav: - Nahi milenge... (Leaning more closely)

They were just inches apart when Aarav leaned near cheek and kissed her...

Aarav: - tumhe sirf yeh milega...

(u will get only this...)

He was about to get up when she pushed him back with all her strength and snatching shoes from his hands ...she ran out without looking back at him...

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Virat:- (finding his shoes) mere jhoote kaha gaye bhai yahin toh rakha the maine...

Arnav:- kya yahan..??? bahar..??

Koi aur aachi jagah nahi mili tumhe virat. Tumhare jhoote toh tumhari pyaari saali ne churaye honge.

Just then Ayesha came dancing showing shoes...

Ayesha: - jhoote lo paise do... paise do jhoote lo...!!!

Virat:- angel tum mujhse paise mangogi?? (Making puppy face)

Ayesha:- mein aab apki salli hoon jiju toh aapko paise toh dene padenge...

Aarav:- haan bhai de do bechari ko... 10- 20 rupees...

Seeing Aarav.. She felt her heart skip a beat remembering his kiss...but as she saw an evil smirk creping on his lips she composed herself and spoke sternly...

Ayesha:- Oye kanjoos vadhera... Mujhe 10 - 20 rupees nahi balki 1000 dollars chahiye...

Aarav:- thousand dollars!!!!!! Have u lost Ur screws... (Looking towards virat) no bhai... u will not give 1000 dollars to this nut case...

Ayesha:- u called me nut case... How dare u...

Aarav:- yes... chipkali... And by the way U got these shoes with cheating'..

Ayesha: - u deserved it. Who told u to ki...

Ayesha stopped herself completing the sentence...

Aarav: - (smirking) say na... what did I do?

Ayesha: - Uuu... I hate u!!!!

Aarav opened his mouth to say something but Arnav stopped him...

Arnav: - please both of u, stop Ur world war 3...

And virat... give Ur angel whatever she asks, as it's not just a ritual but her right to ask from her jiju...

Virat took a credit card from his pocket and handed over to her...

Virat: - aaj se yeh tumhara... U can spend as much as u want...

Ayesha: - thanks jiju (Hugging him)

Virat: - anything for u angel!!!!

Just then Viren and Jeevika and their family came near them...

Jeevika:- mannu... yeh tumhare liye...

(Mannu...this is for u)

And she handed a jewelry box...

Manvi:- kya hai isme di..??

(What's in it, di??)

Viren:- khol ke dekhiye saali sahiba...

(Open it and see saali sahiba)

And she opened the box and saw a necklace. Her eyes immediately got wet seeing it as it was her mother's. It was her favorite necklace which she always used to wear till her death...

Manvi:- yeh toh...

Chachaji:- haan beta tumhari maa ka hai. unhone mujhe tumhare shaadi ke waqt dene ke liye bola tha...

(Yes beta. its ur mom's necklace. She told me to give u on ur wedding.)

Manvi:- thanks chachaji... it's the bestest gift ever...

Chachaji:- isme thanks ki kya baat hai... yeh toh hamesha se tumhara tha...baas aaj tumhe lauta raha hoon..

(Looking towards Vanshika) behenji aab hum chalte hai... do ghante mein hamari flight hai... aapka bohot bohot dhanyavad ki aapne hamare ane ka itazam itni jaldi kar diya... varna hum hamari bitiya ki shaadi dekh hi nahi pate...

Please hamare mannu ka dhyan rakhiye... woh thodi natkhat hai, magar dil ki aachi hai...

Vanshika:- chinta mat kijiye bhaisahab.. manvi ko hum apni palko pe bitake rakhenge... Woh bohot khush rahegi apne iss naye ghar mein...

(Don't worry Mr. Sharma we will look after manvi as our own daughter. she will be happy with us'.)

Jeevika came and hugged manvi... both sisters started crying...

Viren:- hey bhagwaan... yeh do behene kya milli phir se rona chalu... FMji aur salli sahiba ji aap dono rona band kariye aur has ke ek dusre ko good bye kijiye varna yahan aapke aasuoo ka baad aa jayega...

(oh god... whenever these sisters meet all they do is cry. jeevi...manvi... now stop crying or u both will flood this house with ur tears...)

Manvi:- jiju... (Pouting)

And she smiled...

Viren:- that's like my jeevi's mannu... (Hugging manvi)

Chalo bye...

Manvi:- bye!!!!!!

And Manvi's family left back for India...

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After the dinner party'.. Khushi brought manvi to Virat's room...whoops' sorry... THEIR room'

As she entered in their room, she was left stunned by its beauty and size. It was so elegantly designed and it was looking even more beautiful as it was decorated by candles all over room...

*virat's room**imagine it is decorated by candles*

Khushi:- pasand aaya apna naya room??

(did u like ur new room?)

Manvi nodded her head...

Manvi:- it's so beautiful bhabhi...

Khushi:- if u need anything don't hesitate to tell me...

Manvi:- yes bhabhi...

Just then Arnav entered or must say stormed in...

Arnav:- Khushi tum yahan ho... mein tumhe sab jagah doodh raha tha...

Khushi:- kyu?

Arnav:- woh... (Grinning) I was missing u...

Khushi:- what?!!! Arnav tum pagal ho gaye ho... Tum jao yahanse... Mujhe manvi se bateein karni hai...

Arnav:- (holding her hand) kal baat kar le na... abhi chalo... Waise bhi aaj raat usse tumhari nahi apne pati ki jaroorath hai...

Khushi:- magar Arnav'.

Arnav carry her in arms'.

Arnav:- aab toh chalogi na'

Khushi:- Arnav mujhe niche utaro'.

Arnav:- good night manvi'.

arnav:- aab chalein...?

Khushi:- k... wait... (looking at manvi) manvi I have already shifted ur clothes in ur new cupboard.. so if u want u can change... now I will leave as today my patidev has gone nuts...so..Good night!!

Manvi:- good night bhabhi!!! (Laughing)

Manvi sat in front of dressing table and started removing jewelleries one by one...thinking about her conversation with Charles.

*flashback*

Charles stooped towards manvi and hugged her tightly...

Charles:- thank god I got u back manvi.. I love u my princess!!!

Manvi flinched in his arms'.. She didn't knew why but her body wasn't responding the way Charles was expecting. Charles noticed her stiffness and he moved back'..

Charles:- manvi'.. (In low voice) (Looking confused)

Manvi looked down while tears were rolling down her cheeks.

Manvi:- I have came too far Charles and Now I can't return back. I m Sorry!!!!!

Charles:- don't say sorry princess... (Cupping face) I promise to cover up every distance between us. I know after long separation u might be feeling uncomfortable but its fine with me. In few days our relationship will be same like before we will work on it together.

Manvi:- Sorry Charles I can't come back!!! I don't belong to u now!!!!...

Charles:- does that mean u are in love with.

Manvi kept mum looking at ground unable to answer him as she herself didn't knew its answer as she never thought of that question before... but today suddenly when Charles asked this question she wondered why she wasn't able to say NO!!

Charles smirked looking at her puzzled face and hold her hand...

Charles:- no need to answer... I don't think I m enough strong to hear...

Now let's go.. Virat is waiting for u...

*flashback ends*

Manvi closed her eyes.. Thinking about virat...

Manvi:- mein chup kyu ho gayi thi uske sawal pe... Kya sach mein virat mere liye dost se badkhar hai...

(why was I silent on his question?? Is virat more than friend for me??)

She snapped opened her eyes and saw him standing behind, smiling at her.

Manvi:- virat...

She suddenly spoke seeing him in mirror. She got up and turned around but he was not there anymore. She turned towards mirror and looked around everywhere in room, he was nowhere around. She slapped her forehead

Manvi:- tum pagal ho gayi ho manvi !!!!! (Smiling)

(U have gone nuts manvi')

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hey guys.. how was it???

i hope u liked it...

i have read many of u want manvi's realisation soon... but dearies u know me ...how twisty i m...!!!!! i m giving her realisation with a twist!!!

so soon there will be another twist in story... hope u like it too...

and now one good news for u all... get ready to welcome our virman's kiddos in next chapter...

i want u all to suggest names for them... u can give names for girls as well as for boys... as i m still deciding on their genders...

so till then good bye... take care...!!!!

Edited by shilpa09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update... joote churana scene, virman room, arnav-khushi scene n mavi-charles convo...

n ha I'll sugest name for baby girl - Mannat is fix this name is popular of forum.. then for baby boy ??????... still m thinking...
Edited by sweetyyyyyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update as usual...
So.. Charles is Back!!! hope it'll Bring VirMaan closer only ...
luvd d chapter...
update pretty soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shilpa u always rock girl!! R u planning to kill us all with ur twisties bombs r wat!! Comng to the update...i now feel short of words to explain ur every update...it was amazing n fabulous!! N wat a surpriese for the next part...wowww...damn excited! N babies name r alresdy fixed n so famous in the forum...plzz make it a boy n a girl...mannat and varnit!! Justa suggestion!:) keep going girl!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eeekkksss...awesome update !! Virman got married !!!! Yaayyy!!
Cnt wait for maanvi's realization and thei confession !!!
do continue soon !!!
Tc :)
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yay! Update was dhansu! Loved the way manvi went back to virat. It was simply awesome..but twist? No disappointing twist plz. I beg. Well, i wanna see baby girls.ekks story is getting more n more interesting! :D
Posted: 12 years ago
Yippee!!! Maanvi and Virat got married!!!! And Charles nikal gaya!!! I hope Maanvi realizes soon!!! I will surely wait for the twists and turns. Well I'm not good at selecting names so I've no idea!!! Anyways the update was totally jhakkaas!!!! Loved it!!! Thanks for the pm and do continue soon :)

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