SS: Of Lemons & Limes #3 (Chapter 13-16)

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

i felt at peace reading this, much as asr felt carrying her in his arms. beautiful update. good to have you back from holiday. it is disorienting not having routine, but the update doesn't reflect it at all. there's a lovely tenderness in this tale that flows easy. and i am so happy, khushi is feeling her sexual desire. lovely scene, where she wants to see what's under the green sweater, black shirt, and loose black pants. just seeing his forearm isn't enough. niiice.

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Ruki.F

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

such romantic update .. soo cute ..come on is high time for there real romance start

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9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

aww that was so sweet and just cute! im so glad you updated! enjoy your holiday!

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nidhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

jus loved it to core!!!!

awww... such a cute update! [<3]

plzzz update soon..pretty plzzz 😛

n thnxx 4 the PM 😊

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vks11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

wow wow . loved the update.

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preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

awesome chapter.
loved arnav and khushi's stoolen moments 😊

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Param

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

awesome !!!! what was that arnav in khushi's room was very much on verge of being caught by her buaji.. wonderful... loved it..

thanks for pm and hope you enjoyed your holidays... will be eagerly waiting for next update... 😊

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arnshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

That was fantastic...cute naughty update

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happypeace

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

lol... buaji's interuption ws awesome!!
i loved how arnav immediately stayed back as khushi got the sprain and tended to her...
loved it!

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incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Hi Farha...!!

I came across this SS on one of the posts where a member suggested ArHi stories that need to be read.

I really loved the title of this SS. And I sat up late in the night yesterday and read all the 13 chapters.

And I'm totally in love with it..

I'm really glad I came across this story..!! 😊

I love your writing style. Especially Devi Maiyya's 'dialogues'. They are just epic!

Every single chapter was romantic..interesting..and left me on the edge, waiting to read more.. plus Devi Maiyya's part added a little bit of humour to it..😃

I loved your version of the Diwali almost kiss. I was practically hyperventilating when I was reading that! 😳

When I came to the end of chapter 13, I was completely at the edge of the bed! Couldn't wait to read the next chapter. Thank God my wait wasn't long and that you updated today! 😊

My take on Chapter 14:

Awesome!! My best part as always was Devi Maiyya's reactions 😆

I was fearing that Khushi would receive La's call..but thankfully she didn't! 😊

ArHi's trance was broken by Buaji !! Why oh why!! 🤔

Anyway, jahan ArHi ho, wahan interruptions toh honge hi 😆

Loved it !! 😊

P.S: Nice to know that you enjoyed your holiday! Loved the snap! 😊

I sent you a buddy request. 😳

Looking forward to future updates!! 😊