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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1011

When are you guys planning to update?

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1012

Sapna + Nivi: Update will be most likely tomorrow.. We'll try getting comments replied to today.

casper- sorry.. Bye 😳 Gotta go.

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1013

Originally posted by: *Khushii*
Sapna + Nivi: Update will be most likely tomorrow.. We'll try getting comments replied to today.

casper- sorry.. Bye 😳 Gotta go.

yeeiippeee...

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1014

amazing start..
loved it..
kriyaansh's 1st meet was superb...
update soon

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1015

it was nice update
kriyam bond, vishakha scolding him
kriyaansh meet
drunken kriya fab to read

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1016

OMG !!! 😲

Khushu and Deethu together !!! ⭐️

Yayyieee !!! Kitte achche surprises mil rahe hai !!! 😆

Love u two for creating such a Fab SS !!! 🤗

Loved the Cs and the first chappy too !!!

Really amazing title ... totally justifying the concept ... 👏

And this song .. Bezubaan ahh .. My personal favorite . . . !

Loved kriya as the BOLD and BEAUTIFUL ... Especially the "Tu Mera Hero" waala Line .. 😳

Love this song too !! 😛

Rey sleeping peacefully just besides kriya ... Aweee,... 😳

This ws quiet different from his character ... Being edgy haan .. 😉

Plus this line ~

The intoxication of her fragrance was hard to ignore. He couldn't control his devil's desire and hungrily kissed her from her nape to her face. ☺️☺️

Haaayeee ... Maar daalne ka iraada hai kya ?? 😆

Seriously guyys, u've put it up very cleverly !! 👍🏼

Do continue sooonie ... 😊

Really waiting for further updates ... 😛

And pretty please don forget to PM me !! 😳

Love ❤️

~Shailja aka Sweets

This is for both of you 🤗 🤗

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1017

Spamming is not peritted that redicules yaar
But thanx a lot for informing about that rule
Update fast
Jaldi update post kar diya karo
Fir spamming nahi hogi

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1018

Amazing update
Frist meet but adhoora raha
Update fst

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1019

73 😃 Chalo.. Atleast 60's se aage to bade 😛

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Araina

@-Araina-

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1020

Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*
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Edit:

Lemme say, I am no mood to edit this right now and yet here I am though my mind is still stuck on the books I have been reading all over the weekend. And now that I read them too, I realize why 🤣

Sorry for that :p But coming to this story. Nice start and so its obvious she has not seen his face yet. Not going to comment much it was a great start can't wait to read more. Thanks!! Not seeing his face.. Oh how you all are gonna throw what not at me for that 😆

Good Luck, I am sure this one is going to be great success! Thank you :D