||~Something About You~||#6 *COMPLETED*

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#461

This is beautiful. He didn't use the word Love but whatever else he said was more than sufficent. Must be difficult for him to express his feelings but still he did a good job.

Very well written.

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#462

aawww love the way Arnav opened up and cleared all the misunderstanding

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#463

Awesome really awesome update.Loved it.
Arnav is really sweet.I just loved the way he confessed his feelings.
Cute Precap.
You are amazing writer.
I just love ur style of writing.
Plz update soon.

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arshiyakanishka

@arshiyakanishka

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#464

Heart-touching update Farah.

He was obviously hurt with her words as he's unable to see her view point and this is because Khushi has never openly spoken to him about her reservations for a no-strings attached relationship.So these kind of misunderstandings and arguements are bound to happen time and again until and unless both of them discuss what they want out of each other and their future.

Arnav was seething with fury but yet as soon as he remembered Khushi's wound,he returned to her with a first aid box to tend to her wound.❤️

The two incidents from his past which he narrated where he had unintentionally hurt his maa and di with his innocent gifts was heart- touching.The ring incident added to his guilt he was already carrying.Khushi did well to make him understand that his gifts are not the problem but his thoughtlessness about the impact of the gift is.

he whispered, "I don't know what to tell you, because I seriously don't know how I specifically feel about.. this thing. But if my silence makes you feel that cheap, then I'll say as much as I know.. & I don't know if it'll make any sense to you, but this much I know.. That collage in your room?" At his prompt question, Khushi blinked her eyes confusedly, & he just continued in a flat whisper, "I hated it that it contained the significant dots of your life & I wasn't in it. That you smiled, & laughed, & breathed & lived,& I wasn't a part of that. That we both existed & neither was a part of another's existence. & I want to be.. I want to be there to see you laugh,& live. & these people out there?Gulping you down with their eyes? It makes me go to a dark place within myself, that I just wanna kick & punch! & I just wanted you alone with me. & I often seem to want you alone with me, at frequent intervals,& once I want that, it's the only thought that dominates my mind, driving all other thoughts away!.. & when I saw you cry that day in here, talking about your mother?.. Red, I'd do anythingto never have to see you like that.. &-" He looked down & frantically searched the ground around his feet for some clues about what to say next, & then he just looked up & his eyes pleaded with hers for understanding, "I.. That's all I know right now! That & the fact, that ever since I have come back, pretty much everything that I did & didn't do, have been about you!& the one thing I know certainly right now is, if I've hurt you, albeit unintentionally, & if I have made you feel like a.. If I've made you feel so low about yourself, if I am the reason for your unhappiness, I'd go away! Just say the word, &I'd leave the moment Di's pheras take place & you'll never be miserable because of me again! & I swear, that's all I know!"

This whole para just took my breath way and touched my heart.I reread it so many times...wonderfully expressed Farah.

And the last part where he felt he was home when he was in Khushi's arms...if this is not love then what is.He is taking his own sweet time but i am sure eventually he'll realise that all that he feels for Khushi is love and nothing else.

Precap makes me all the more impatient for thursday to come.

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Anamika Kumari

@Anamikarocks

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#465

good one...you just rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#466

agreed that they are both driven by emotions but i love the way they talk out all their issues

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sskaug25

@sskaug25

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#467

loved this update. it was an emotional one . i am happy that arnav and khushi's fight didn't go that far. waiting for the next update. thanks for the pm

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#468

My heart is singing right now...what a beautiful ending to a harrowing encounter.

I could just eat Arnav up right now...he's a man's man on the outside but he's a woman's man at heart. He just has to think a bit more intelligently about what his thoughts and feelings mean...i'm sure he can connect the dots of each statement he made in his declaration.

I am SO glad it ended well...but i'm not sure my sanity can take much more of this fighting and making up!! I think both of these charactes arent good for me...definitely not for my peace of mind!!

I love the precap...some fun times! I'm love Khushi having the upper hand as it always seems to be Arnav in control.

I am damn sure that once youve finished this story, its goung to be the first one ive ever re-read from the beginning. I just wish it was available in book form as continuity in reading is so underrated!!

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Aishwarya

@EmpressSarayu

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#469

Oh - Precap -ROFL! Can't wait to read it.

He expresses! woohoo! And they talk! Woohoo! and don't just scream and ignore each other like children. Sigh. I wonder when they 'fall in love'?

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#470

Cudn't cmmnt on the previous part unfortunately..
But it certainly reminded me of the song.,.
"chan se jo toote koi sapna, jag suna suna laage, koi rahe na jab apna jag suna suna laage"..

N dis update today was beautifull;)..
Dis update jst made my day.. Thnx farah:*..
After reading Arnav's POV i felt sorry for him as well.. Srsly he's so much hurt seeing khushi like dat.. Moreovr hthe word he can't bear wid khushi, he jst made her feel dat way, by dat stupid yet beautiful ring;)..
N after hearing abt his mom n anjali di n truely felt badd for him.. Bechara.. He tried to do good but ended up ina mess he cud nvr thnk of:(..
But after dat his almost perfct n mindnumbing confession:*.. I loved it.. He srsly doesn't need to say I LoVE yOU ater all wat he said.. His words definately mean much more:*.. N they both ended up in each others arms finding their solace;),..

Precap has srsly made to start counting the hrs left for the nxt update.. Srsly dis is gonna be so much fun..:D arnav srsly is gomnna hav tough tym maintaing the ASR aura:p