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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing update..!
finaallly taarey ek sath..!
now iam waiting for more taarey machar,cheeti n garden scnes..!
keep writing n update ssoonn..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi I m reading ur story 1 to 25 chapter in 1 day
Your fanfiction is amazing, awesome, superb
please update the next part soon 😊
Edited by doll_dimple - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awww... such a sweet update.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,
So sorry for the late update...
Here s next update,
Enjoy reading and do comment...

Taarey ff:after goa:part26


Everyone is sitting in d hall after grihpravesh..
Rey:arre chodono guys..
yeh sherwaani chub raha hai mujhe..
Vicky:to nikaal lo na..
Nil:ha dude
Rey:to gud ni8
Swayam:acha beta shaadi hogayi matlab hum sab frnds ghar se bahar ha
Rey:kya yaar..
Vicky winks at everyone
Vicky:to tum huare saath chalo
Rey:kahan
Vicky:party karne
Rey:aaj
Nil:ha dude
Vicky:dekho to iske chehre ko,
isse cheeti se katwaane jaldi hai..
Sharon:kyun pareshan kar rahe ho ha..
Sharon:rey
Rey:ha
sharon:zara deere (n shows everyone 2 move to front door n she also walks to them)
rey s quite amused at whats happening
rey:kya dheere se
everyone:iss baar dheere se girna garden main rey..
rey throws cushions:dekhloonga kal tum sab ko


Rey goes upstairs.The room was decorated by sharon beautifully
But d decoration seems nothing before taani..
He sees taani by the side of the window..
Rey goes and hugs her and places his chin on her shoulder..
Taani closes her eyes..
Rey kisses on her neck..
Taani turns and pushes him and places one arm distance on his chest..
Rey:yeh kyun
Taani:woh
Rey:kya baat hai
Taani:main kuch batoon to aap manoge
Rey:ha ismain poochne ki kya zarrorat,batao
Taani:promise
Rey:ha sweetheart
Taani closes her eyes and tells in on breathe:maine 11 din ka wrath rakha aur aap aur main apni shaadi shuda zindagi ab shuru nahi kar sakthe aur aap mere saath so nahi sakthe..
Rey:what
Taani:dekha,aapne promise kiya tha na
Rey:par
Taani:par war kuch nahi,aap ab bed pe soye aur main sofa pe and she moves..
Rey catches her and pulls her..
Rey leans to her ears
Taani closes the eyes
Rey:barosa nahi hai mujhmain
Taaani:aap par hai,mujhmain nahin
Rey:to chod do na wrath
Taani pushes
Taani:nahi

Taani:aap so jayega aur kal collge bhi jaana hai
and switched off the lights.
Rey was altogether amazed by what just happend
Rey wents and lays on the bed and looks at taani..
Taani feels rey's eyes on her.
Rey:hmmm
Taani:yeh mmm bolne se kuch hone nahi wala
Rey:to bed pe aao na
Taani:chup chaap so jayye
Rey:tum duniya ki pehli beewi hogi jo apne hi pati ko shaadi ke mandap par do tapad bhi lagaya aur suhaagraat ka bhi baand baaja diya..
Taani:rey
Hearing this rey got exicited..
Taani:main neeche jaake so jaoon kya?
Rey's exicitment vanished it seconds..
Rey:nahi
Taani:to gud ni8

Morning-
Taani comes out d washroom.
She sees rey sleeping like a baby.
Taani comes before the mirror and applies d sindoor..
She felt she was d luckiest gal in this whole world
Dressed in red saree,she redefined elegance..
She goes near rey and but d water drops from her hair fell on rey's forehead..
She leans to kiss him..
But by then rey opens the eyes..
Rey pulls her down and lays on top of her..
Rey:kya karne jaa rahi thi..
Taani:woh mere baalon se apke yahan ,woh
Rey leans to kiss her..
Rey kisses on her forehead..
Taani closes the eyes..
Rey;s nose touched her,
Taani's breathing increased
rey hands were busy undoing her dori..

Suddenly taani realises about the wrath and pushes rey and jumps out of the bed..
Taani:11 din.. n runs out..
Rey fell on his back on the floor..
Rey gets up..
Rey:kya karroon iss ladki ka main

Rey comes down to d kitchen in towel sees taani turned backwards and cooking..
Rey comes and places his hands on her bare stomach..
A shiver ran through her spine..
Feeling his warm hands taani closes her eyes..
Rey kisses on her back..and pulled her closer..
Rey made her face him..
He cups her face...
and leans to kiss him..
Taani opens her eyes..
Taani and places her finger on his lips..
Taani and rey hve an eyelock.
Taani blushes and rey removes her finger and pulls her more closer..
Rey:hayye mar jawaan,aise mat sharmao taani,tumhari wrath tooth jaayegi,phir mujse yeh mat kehna ki maine wrath thod diya..
Taani:accha(places her one arm distance)
Rey:phir se..
Taani:Aap towel pehnkar kyun ghoom rahe ha
Rey:kya hua,,resist nahi kar pa rahe ho apne hot se husband ko dekhakar..
Taani:nahi mr.husband aise koi problem nahi hai mujhe aapko resist karne kelie..
Taani:aap jaldi tyaar hojaayaye k..

they leaves for the college...

Rey sitting in his cabin with his head on his table..
Hears the knock on the door..
Rey:come in
D3boys expct swayam:gud morning..
Rey:whats so good about the morning..
Vicky:tu apne sir table par rakhar kyun baita hai,kya hua,iss baar kuthe ne kaata hai kya?
Rey lifts his head:haha very funny..
Vicky:tu kal soya nahi rey?
(n winks at everyone)
Nil:ha dude kya hua
Rey:tujhe kaise pata chala (makes sad face)
Amar:puri raat
Bharat:kya baaat hai rey?
Rey:ha yaar pure raat so nayi paaya
Vicky:v r proud of u..
Rey:kya,
main kal soya nahi hoon aur tym yeh kya bhole ja rahe hoon ha?

Vicky:yeh to acchi baat haina..
Rey:kya acchi baat,1 mintue tum log,
ape saalon kuch to accha socho yaar..
Vicky:tumhe kya laga,ab pata kya kya hua?
Rey(makes a sad face):kuch nahi hua,woh sofa par soya aur main bed par
Vicky:itna karab kiya kuch
Rey:nahi yaar,woh usne wrath rakha hai 11 din ka,woh to mujhe apni paas bhi aane nahi dera raha hai..
Everyone:kya

Another knock on the door
Rey:andhar aajo
Swayam enters..
Swayam:subah subah tum log yahan,classes nahi hai kya?
vicky:hum to iska haal poochne aaya tha,
yeh bechaare ke to humase bhi bhura haal hai..

Swayam:kya hua?
Vicky:woh kal raat
Swayam:stop,mujhe apni behen aur best frnd ke suhaag raat ke baare main nahi sunna,main jaarahi hoon
Vicky:kuch hone nahi diya tumhari behen to kya hoga
Swayam:vicky
Vicky:tu sun puri baat
usne 11 din ka wrath rakha
Swayam walks over to rey
Swayam:dekha meri behen kitni sanskaari hai
Rey throws d cushion at him..
Swayam: laughs..

Precap:gang plans a suprise for rey and taani..
aage aage dekho hota hai kya...


I know tum sab log mujhe marne ke maann kar rahe honge,taarey ki suhaag raar ka baand baaja ne keliye
But thoda intezzaar karo,intezaar ka phal meeta hota hai...
So tell me how guys liked this update..
Atleast 4-5 pages of comments chahiye guys for the next update..nahi to no update
Silent readers comment please...

Have a nice day...
Part27


Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES!
unres ...
OMFG.
I HAVE NO WORDS
WRATH???????/
HAYEEE <3
POOR REY 😛
USKA TOH HAALAT HI KHARAB HO GAYA 😆
I LOVED IT <3
IT WAS SO CUTE AND FUNNY <3

Edited by sanayaluvzya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wowowowowowowowoowowo😉😉😉😉😉 PErfect suhag 😳😳😳rat 11 Din ki duri haye 😭 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
post it soon pls 😉😉😉😉😉👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG 11 din ki wrath omg 🤣 pls keep updating it's too good!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaar,i so gna kil u...Kitni excitd ti,bt schme sirf rey ka nahi,hamara bi band bajwadiya.Bt stil,it ws awsm.Vicky iritatng rey,thn tani's vrath,god!! Rey mkng sevral atempts to cnvince tani,bt she's on a misn...Swa,funy.wtng fr nxt update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh oh! poor REY. LOL
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Posted: 12 years ago
lachu...awesome update dear..we al are waiting taarey ...romance...ap pls cont.
Anju

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