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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,
Thank u so much all ur comments..
Sorry for making some of u cry n tensed in last updates..😭
Here s d next update...
So enjoy reading n do hit like n comment...

Taarey ff:after goa:Falling in love all over again...

Taani after college in the parking alot...
Rey comes in his car n stops infront of her,downs his window mirror..

Rey: tum ab tak gayi nahi,tum kaho to main tumhe chod doon ghar..
Taani:nahi mr.singania,bhaai ne ghadi beji hai,to main usmain chali jaoongi..
taani gets a call from swayam..
swayam:taani ab tak ghaadi nahi aayi kya..
taani:nahi bhai
ap kahoon to main auto main aajathi hoon..
rey gets amused..
rey:main chod detha hoona..
swayam:taani ye rey ki awaaz thi na..
taani:ha bhai
swayam:tum teek hona..
rey shows d sign to handover him d phone..
rey:hey swayam,its me rey,main taani ko drop kar saktha hoon,issi bahane mujhe tum aur sharon se unofficially mil saktha hona..
swayam:(lost n thought)
k.
rey:k then c u in 20..

Rey:ab tumhara bhaai ka bhi permission mil gaya tanni,gaadi main aajao..
taani hestatingly enters d car..
taani avoids any eyecontact..
she remembers when rey used to wear d seat belt for her..
deir long drive..

Taani closed her eyes hardly n tried hard to stop d tears..
Rey:tum meri sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya..
Taani:huh
Still luking outside..
Taani:kaisa sawal..
Rey:aaj subah maine poocha tha na tum meri g.s thi na aur friend..
Taani:aapko kya lagtha hai
Rey:i dont know,i saw d collge magazine..
u were my a.g.s n g.s
so u hve 2 b my friend too ryt..
Taani keeps quiet..
Rey:tum abhi bhi swayam ke saath rehthe ho
Taani:matlab
Rey:i mean swayam aur sharon ki shaadi hui hai,aur sab ki bhi hogayi par
Taani:ghar aagyi mr.singania
Taani gets out fast..
Swayam was waiting at d gate..
Swayam hurried to c taani..
Rey gets out...
Swayam:tum teek ho na taani
Rey:isse kya hoga..
Taani:main dhak gayi bhai,main andhar jaa rahi hoon..


Swayam:k tum jao..
tum wahan ghade kyun ho..
Rey:ha aa raha hoon yaar..
Rey enter d house...
Suddenly smethng striked his head..
He was seeing lights,dhol,sharon,swayam,everyone n his parents dancing..
Rey keeps his hand on his hand..
Swayam:kya hua rey,tum bhaitna..
sharon paani lao..
sharon:rey tum yahan,kya hua,aur taani kahan hai,woh teek haina
swayam:woh andhar hain sharon,tum ab rey keliye paani lao..
rey:main teek hoon yaar,pata nahi kabhi bahut dard hote hain sir main,kuch bleak se dikhaayi dekthi hoon.kuch na kuch.but kuch poora nahi..
swayam:but improvment haina,tum 6 yrs pehle mujhe nahi pehchaan rahe the..(hits on his hand)
sharon renenters with water..
sharon:aur mujhe bhi..mujhe nahi rey tumhari best friend ko..
rey:sorry baba,main tum logon ko jaan poochke thodi na bhool gaya tha...
swayam:isliye tumhe zinda chod raha hoon..
(laughs)
Rey was luking for someone,he was feeling restless
Rey:tum log humesha taani ke liye pareshan kyun hote rehthe ho..
main aaj subah bhi notice kiya,tum log mujhe dekh kar kush nahi the..
kya baat hai swayam?
swayam:woh main taani keliye thodi protective rehthi hoona..
isliye..aur uski tabyat teek nahi rehthi..
rey still luks around..
Swayam notices this..
rey feels restless again..
Rey:swayam main chaltha hoon,mujhe kuch teek nahi lag raha hai...
swayam:hum doctor ke pass chalthe haina..
tu ruk main abhi ready hokar aatha hoon..
rey:uske koi zaroorat nahi..
aaj bahut strss liye,jet lag,yeh woh...so wll catch u guys tomorow...

Rey gets n goes to his car..
Taani was luking at him from d balcony..
She rembers d day when he climbed to her room thru balcoy to say her i love you..
Rey feels his heart rasing,a sudden feel of d rush..he raises his head up while opening d door n sees her..
Rey n taani eyelock..
Rey feels a sense of completness luking at her..
he smiles..
Taani unable to control her tears goes inside..

Next day in collge...

Rey in rehersal hall..
Noone has reached d collge..
He gets inside..
He sees d mirror he luks around d hall..
he gets some view of him dancing ..
He tries harder to c him who he was dancing with..


Taani enters..
Taani still in another white salwaar with her hair tied in single plait..
Taani:aap itni subah..
Rey gets a full picture now..


His dilse rey dance with taani..

Taani:mr.singania..

Rey moves closer..
Taani takes a step backward..
Taani hits d mirror..
Rey raises his hand to touch her cheeks..
Taani closes her eyes..
They could feel each other's breathing..
Taani remembers about what swayam told..
Taani:mr.singania..
n pushes rey..
Taani tries to walk..
Rey catches her hand..
Pulls her..
Rey:call me rey..

Suddenly students starts coming..
Rey comes to senses on what that he has hold taani's hand..
Students:mama apne bhulaya humain..
Taani:ha,woh hum play ki tyaari shuru karne se pehle main apko logon ko mr.singania humare third board of dirctor aur humare plar ke choregrapher se milwaane chahthe the..
Rey:hai,ap log mujhe rey bhula sakthe hai,no sir or mr.singania..kuch logon ko bholke fyaad nahi hai phir bhi app log mujhe rey bhula sakthe ho..(stares at taani while talking to students)(taani luks away)
Taani:so aap logon ki classes ke baad aap sab auditorium aayeyega,main wahan aap logon ko script de doongi..

Everyone leaves..
Taani also walks to leave..
Rey:kisse baag rahi ho tum..
Taani:excuse me..
Rey moves closer...
Taani:woh meri ek class,so i will meet u in d audotrium after classes..(luks here n dere,trying hardly nt to luks into rey's eyes)
Rey:main yeh nahi keh rahi hooon taani,
tum meri aankhon main dekhkar baaat kyun nahi kar rahi
Taani:mujhe jaana chahiye..
n leaves..
Rey:ajjeb hain,aur yeh mujhe kya hota hai,
woh samne aathe hi..
yeh ladki mujhe paagal kar degi..

Swayam n evryone in d canteen..expect canteen..
Rey:tum log bahut chupe rustam nikle haa,mujhe baataye begar shaadi karle..
vicky:tum bhi toh kam thi na..kabhi kya garden(neha steps on vicky'd foot)ahh
rey:huh?
sharon:kuch nahi
swayam:yeh kehana chathe ki kabhi tum humain bhoool gayi,to hum kaise
rey:oh,but woh garden..
nil:dude humare garden nahi dekha na tune..
bharat:hum mast bana diye..
rey:achha
dekhna to padega
(everyone sighs a relief)

Taani enters..Rey luks at taani,taani turns her head from him..
Swayam:kahan thi taani tum,ghar se bhi jaldi nikal gayi tum..
Taani:woh bhaai,aaj se hum play ki rehrsals shuru kar rahahain,
to main classes jaldi shuru ki...
Sharon acidently slips her tongue..it had bcome usual for sharon to ask everyday
Sharon:aaj bhi white taani..(she understud she shuldnt asked it aftr wat taani told, n dat too infront of rey)
Rey gets more curious to know more about her..
Taani:mujhe rehersals main jaana hain..
mr.singania aap free ho to aa saktha hai..(n leaves)
everyone:mr.singania?
bharat:woh to iska baap ka naam haina
amar:ha
rey:pata nahi usko mujhe meri naam bholne itna problem kyun hai..
everyoe luks around..
rey?waise main chaltha hoon..vl c u guys around..

Taani in auditorium..
Taani:yeh log late kyun hote hain?
Rey:har kisiko tum jaise
punctual nahi ban saktha na..
Taani was holding papers in her hand..it fell down
Taani:aap
Rey comes down d steps n helps taani in picking up d papers..Taani luks at rey..n turns away
Taani gets up n moves a step down
Rey also moves step down..
Rey:tum mujhe dekhthe itne weird kyun hote ho..
Taani:aisa kuch nahi..
Rey:(notices d ring on her finger which is similar to wat he has on his fingr)
Hey same to same..
holding her hand...
Taani takes her hand away swiflty..
N tries to moves a step but she misses a step n was about to falls...
rey catches her...
Pulls her by the waist...
Taani n rey eyelockk

Rey felt completed when he luked into her eyes..
Her eyes sudenly was not d eyes of a stranger for him,it was lyk he knew dat eyes,it was like its his book which he know byheart..
Taani comes into sense n breaks d position..

Taani:woh..
students come in
Taani out of frustration..
taani:time par kyun nahi aa saktha tum log..
tum logon keliye koi cheez karne ke bholoon to mazak lagtha hai kya..
both students n rey gets surprised seeing taani angry..
Students murmur among each other:hum pehle kabhi mam ko gusse hote nahi dekha hai,aaj pata nahi,subah se bahut gussa main lag raha,
Taani hears dis..
Taani:sorry guys,now get on d stage n take d scrpt..
Rey moves toward taani..
Rey:intresting tum gusa bhi karthe ho..
Taani:guys jaldi stage pe aao...

Precap:
rey:aaj tumein mere sawaal ke jawab dena hoga taani,tum mujhe se baagthi kyun ho,
sab se tum baat karne ke tareeka aur mujhse baat tareeka differnt kyun hai?
Taani:aap kya keh raha hain yeh main nahin jaanthi..
Rey:tumhe acchi tarah pata hai taani..
Taani walks away..
rey pulls her hand n pushes to wall..
Rey comes closer..


I know last few updates were so emotional n too dramantic.
iam sorry for making u guys so tensed n made sme of u cry...even writing made me so emotional n serious, har waqth yeh sochthi thi ki taani kaise react karega n swayam kaisa bholega..
pheww,d intense drama s over..
i knw romance thoda hi dala hey..par intezaar karo...

aage dekho hota hai kya...😉


So, tell me whther u guys want d next update..
i will update only if i get 3-4pages of comments..
silent readers comment please...

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Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 very niceee ofcourse do continue it soon dear... thnxxx fr the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.. I hope Rey ko yaad aa jaaye... Loved t dear.. Update soon! Pm me!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow!!
Loved it hw rey was getting lost in taani... Its true love yaar!!
Finally romance is coming back in their life.. Awsum!!
Taani's pain is making me so emotional...
cant wait fr the nxt part!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
update soon thora halka lag raha hai ... lst 2 made me cry a lot aur mat rulana
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update ... aaj kal busy rehti hun toh sorry for not replying ... intense drama was good and really waiting for the romance to start. Nice new concept to the FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!!!!
rey ko sab kuch yaad aa raha hai...
thats great...
bt taani aise kyun behave kar rahi hai???
i knw that she is shocked n all bt...u knw na cant see taarey separate so...
pls update soon
i knw mera comment bada nahi hai
par pls iss bar maaf karna
mom chilla rahi hai
bye take care
pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update... finaly u r back in taarey's romantic track...:D missed it badly... I know u will update soon par kya kare adat ho gayee hai so update soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oow this is amazing really brilliant waiting for the precape ab toh koi romantic scene do
superb job plzzz update soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow yaar luvly yaar i luv it thank
god rey is getting flash back n i
luv tht he saw him self dancing with taani
n thn gang n rey in canteen was nice n i
really want taarey romance yaar n it
bit emotional whn sharon ask taani
abt white dress n thn taani angry wah wah n thn
i luv tht rey saw ring haaye i luv taani fall
n rey hold her n thn eye contact wow yaar
luvly awsm swt prt thanks for PM n do put nxt prt soon
n yeah do PM me again kkk thanks

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