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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rheajini

nyco updte :)
hehe swayum was supr jealous... n love dis vry mch
hehe again rey is mking plan 4 swaron

n do pm plsss

thanku ..and ya i'll pm u wen i update...

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Posted: 12 years ago

ch-8: Back home

outside sharey&taayam apartmnt...

sharon(getng out of de car..):hey thanks 4r de lft karan..
karan:no prmbl beautiful...anythng 4r u ...and ya i enjyd alot wid u people ...i had a grt tme...
swayam(2 himself):oh cme ..ye kab jayega...?humey drp karidina he shld rght den y is he still here frltng wid my sharon?...ohoho.swayam beta..wait a sec tu kya bol rahahey?tumara sharon?bull sht tumey ho kya gayahey swayam..tu ethana jealus kyu behvr karaha hey..wo usiki sath frlt karahey tho tujey kya?..don't knw yaar ..wats happn 2 me...she is drvng me crazy..😕
sharon:oh k cia..it was nce meetng u ..we both too had grt tme wid u ..
karan:i thnk we have 2 meet sum tme agn..
sharon:ya sure..tumeney humara ethana bada help jo kiya hey... u knw u did a big help 2 us...
karan:oh cme on..dats not so big help..kk i gtg..ciasharon..bye swayam...(and he levs)
swayam(gvng fake smle):byeee...(aftr he left)kab perse yeha mat dekana...( sharon gve a angry luk at him):wat..esi kyu dhek rahiho?
sharon:nthng..kuch nahi...😡
swayam:tho tumey bada masa aarahathana usikey sath frlt karanese?
sharon:wat rubbsh..swayam r u out of ur sense?me tho basa use frndly bat karahithi ..dats it ..i didn't frlt wid him..got it?😡
swayam:ya..ab ab koi kuch keharatha?(says in grls tone)tumeney humara ethana bada help jo kiya hey... u knw u did a big help 2 us..u wer sayng lyk we had dead if he didn't resuce us...
sharon(hit him in his stomch):shut up swayam..u need 2 be thankful 2 him ...if he was not der we wuld be on de hgh way..
swayam:oh cme on..if not him ..any one cld help us...
sharon:oh ya but no one did...chalo lets go insde muje humse ladaney si bhi zada imp kam hey...
swayam:ya muje bhi..
(both get into lft...and reach der flats..swayam knockd de door..and sharon also stood by his side..here taarey who wer lost in der own world...cme into sense wen dey heard de door knck...)
insde de flat...
taani:ab kon ohga?
rey:muje kya patha?may be swayam aur sharon vaparas agaya hongey...
taani:bhaiii..oh no..agar tumey bhai ne yeha dheka leya tho prombl hojayegi...
rey:no..isa kuch nahi hoga..u knw he is my best frnd...
tani:so wat..wo pehel meri bhai hey ..per apaka best frnd...don't 4rget dat..and ah bhai aur shar ko hamarey reltn ki baramey kuch nahi bathayengey...
rey :okay baba..pehel door tho kolo...
taani:ya...
(taanigoes 2 opn de door ..rey follows her...taani opns de dor only 2 fnd swayam and sharon dere...sharon rush in and hugd taani...whle rey&Swayam share dere hug..)

rey:dude ur okay rght?

swayam:ya f9 dude... btw de tu yeha?kisi?

rey:wo..becos of u..wo humari behan darihuvithi..tho me usi cnsl karatha dats it...

swayam:dats it?us zada kuch nahi heyna?

rey arey yaar u don't trust me?

swayam:i do but..

rey :arey ye but wat chodo..chalo grls ki paas chelathey hey...(both went 2 sharaani)

sharon(breakng de hug):taanuu..missd u soo much dear...
taani:miss u 2 dear..(lukng at swayam)aur ah bhai apaney muje ye tak nahi bataya ki apa dono melli kara jarahiho..(strtd shutng) wat de hell...apako path hey me kithan tnsnd thi...
rey: ah yaar ..tumari behane ro rokey meri shrt gela(wet) kardi...dheko...

taani(gves rey a angry luk):rey tum chup raho pls..muje bhai si bat karana hey...😡

swayam :chill dear muje kuch nahi huvarght..deko am fit and f9..

taani: btw wer did u people go?

swaron:actvlly its a lng stry...

taarey:say it in shrt...
swaron:in shrt ...we wer lost in jungle
taarey (2gthr shutd):jungle?wat?
swaron:yupe..jungle..
sharon:dats all becos ur bhai tannu..
swayam:oh ya..now tell me who did miss gudie de way ..u or me?
sharon:but who said u 2 follow my word..u don't have ur own brain can't u take ur own descn?
swayam:oye hello..1st of all u only tell me 2 follow u ..and thn me if i follow ur instrtn?
sharon:watevr...am not in a mood 2 f8 wid u ..
swayam:oh ya..as if am in a mood..

(here taani lukd at rey ..wid "i told u rght" wala xprssn...thn rey lukd at her wid "chill we can do it" wala luk...taarey tried der best 2 stop swaron 4rm f8..at last dey succsd..taani took swayam insd..and sharey left 2der flat...)
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nxt mrng...
peon:gs..ags..cs aur acs ko vp sir apani ofce me bola rahey...
all de 4 in vp's sir room..vp sir says dat dey will have vactn 4r few days...due 2 renewtn of clg...
whole gang in de canteen..
rinni:arey ..yaar..in hldy we people will 4r an outng? wat say? we all will have fun 2thgr..
amar:ah yaal linni tek kehalahihey...(ah yaar rinni tek keharahihey)
simmi:ya guys ...but wer wil we go ?any idea guys?
nil:hey guys goa jeyengey?
taani:no yaar...me goa ja ja key bore hochukihu..any othr place? me,neha,vicky,rinni,amar aur rey last mnth hi goa jayethena india fest ke liye...
rey :ya guys taanu...imean taani rght..
nil 2 vicky :arey ye rey ko achanak kya hogaya?kal tak tho taani ke baat se hi irrt hotha tha..aj usi hi supprt karahey?
vicky:ah yaar..kuch ho huva hey..
and all de boy do der famous chemstry step...risng der hand...
rey:hey guys..humara fram house kise rahega? its a lng tme we went der..
sharon:ya bro perfct idea...(both sharey share a *hi5*)
evry one node der head in agreement...
sharey:so guys..kal hum humari fram house ke le nikalegey..so evry one will be at our huse 2n8
evry one agreed and wentder respctve house 2 packn der bags...

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so here de chaptr ends...
precap:
taarey in kitchn...
taani:rey chodo muje ..wat if any one will c...pls let me go...
rey:no way..aj tumar koi bahana nahi chalega...
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sharon:hey hello mr.mind less...dats my coffe cup?😡
swayam:oh really .. miss.nonsense..dis is my cup..and der is tea in dis not coffe..did u get it?(drnkng it and gets 2 knw dat its coffe...)
swaron in pool..and taarey romnce..comng soon...(and ya i will try my best abt de rmnce part)
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okay guys am done..1st of all am really.. really sry 4r de late update..was busy in marge shopng..wo kya heyna meri bhai ki shadi honey wali hey so i was not able 2 update... ...sry i will be not able 2 reply u people..but i wuld luv 2 hear 4rm u people...and may be ..till nxt two week i will be not able 2 update de ff due 2 my bro's marge...
pls avd grmmrcl&spllng mistks...snlt readr pls atleast hit lyk..&pls cmmnt aftr readng..need all ur feed backs...
luv ,
renu..

Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yay m first...
this part was awesome ...specially swayam getting jealous
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Update ... Really enjoyed SwaRon fight ... Please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: khyati2000

yay m first...
this part was awesome ...specially swayam getting jealous
waiting for the next part

continue soon

thank u ..will try 2 update soon...

Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaddsraizada

Nice Update ... Really enjoyed SwaRon fight ... Please update soon and thanks for the pm

thank u ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Renu lovely update, omg Swaron fighting like two kids lol. I love how without speaking Taarey understand perfectly well what the other one is saying. Plz continue soon N enjoy your brother wedding
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Renu lovely update, omg Swaron fighting like two kids lol. I love how without speaking Taarey understand perfectly well what the other one is saying. Plz continue soon N enjoy your brother wedding

thank u ...i wil try 2 update soon..fngr crsd...i will surely njy dear..atlast meri one and only orgnl bhai ki shadi hey...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
luvd taarey part ...update soon precap is intresting 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc update
n tumhare bhai ko shaadi ki badhai ho!!!
may he have a happy married life!!

n now ur update was awesome
i am smelling romance here...
jaldi upd karo bt aftr shadi only
after all bhai ki shadi hai yaar...
enjoy...

do pm

stay blessed!

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