pyaar ya dosti?(swaron&taarey ff)ch12uptd - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanayaluvzya

hayee...
todha emotional tha, paar acha thA ;)
jaldi TaaRey ka secret reveal karo and make em together </3

hie sana..😊

thanks & dey wil soon be 2gthr aftr rey gets 2 knw abt taani's feelngs...don't wry

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Posted: 12 years ago
bechara swayam 😆
this part was awsum
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
swaron prt ws nice.poor swa,uska toh galti hi nahi ti bt sha yeling at hm,bt gd na tat ty lst in jungle so tat nw sm blmng rmance bw thm.bt our TR,wt ws tani tkng abt?rey hates tani,y?i'm banging my head to gt d ans.so plz reveal scrt fst dr.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asharani261

swaron prt ws nice.poor swa,uska toh galti hi nahi ti bt sha yeling at hm,bt gd na tat ty lst in jungle so tat nw sm blmng rmance bw thm.bt our TR,wt ws tani tkng abt?rey hates tani,y?i'm banging my head to gt d ans.so plz reveal scrt fst dr.

yupe der wil be sum blmng rmnce b/w dem...hey don't worry am reveal it in furthr chapters...

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Posted: 12 years ago
too much suspense..
kab reveal hoga?
loved Swaon's ladai..
pls. taarey ka patch up karva do.
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
chap 3...wooowww wooowww wooow !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
chap 4...suppprb yaar...plsss update asappp
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dh19

too much suspense..
kab reveal hoga?
loved Swaon's ladai..
pls. taarey ka patch up karva do.
thanks for the pm and do cont. soon.

ya ya will reveal vry soon... der patch will der as soon as rey gots to knw abt taani's feelngs...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taareeyforever

chap 1...mindd blowingg

Originally posted by: taareeyforever

chap 3...wooowww wooowww wooow !!!

Originally posted by: taareeyforever

chap 4...suppprb yaar...plsss update asappp

thank u so much ... i'll try 2 update it ASAP... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

ch5: the first hug

befre readng de nxt chaptr ..have a luk on de bannr ..its done by sneha..i luvd it and pls do tel how is it?

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now here go wid de update...

sharon ran in de dirctn in wch swayam went...fnly she saw him lieng on de grund wid his head bleedng ..as he got on de same plce wer it was injrd befre...

she tried 2 wake him up..she place his head on her lap..remvd his band on dat wund and wshd de wund wid watr...& putd anthr band aid..(she has al des thngs)
she sprkld sum watr on his face..he woked up...
sharon:ur okay?
swayam:ya f9...
sharon:i don't undrstnd how come did u get hurtd? ru kid can't u jst take care of urself?oh god don't knw how taanu tolarates u ..oh god u r reall an idt yaar..
swayam:i jst was..
sharon:now i don't need any xplntn nw..4rm now we will go 2thgr okay?
swayam :as u wish ...come..
as it had become n8 dey decsd 2 stay der dat n8..de cld wind wer blowng... sharon was shvrng..swayam gve his jackt 2 her..she took it widout cmplng as she was feelng chilld..
sudnly dey heard sum roars of lion...sharon got scrd and hugd swayam as tght as she can...4r de 1st tme dey both felt sum thng diffrnt ..sum thng spl..kuch kuch hotha hey types...
sharon's fear was vanshd as she was feelng dat she was in de wrlds safest plce...dey sat dwn still holdng each othr..
swayam(brkng de hug):ur okay?
sharon:ya am okay..i was scrd hearng dat sund..
swayam:i knw u grls alway wil be feard abt such thngs...
sharon(not payng attn 2 his wrd ..lost in him):ya..(rembrs wat he said &wid full on attutd &angry)wat ?wTH ..hello wat do mean ha?u don't knw any thng abt me?got it? u wer say as if u boys nevr get scrd of anythng..
swayam:oh kk chill..chill .it luks lyk if i don't agree u r gng 2 kill me..okay f9 ..we boy do get scrd okay..
sharon:hmmm...
aftr sum tme sharon fell asleep on swayam's shldrs...her hairs wer fallng her face...he slw lock her hair behnd her ear...she was jst lukng lyk a an angel...
swayam wisprd to him self:cute ,,incnt ...i wish if u wuld be as incnt as ur now..it wuld be grt...but still u luk vry cute whle sleep..gud n8...
soon he too had fall into deep sleep..his hands was on her waist...her hand wer arund his neck...dey both lukng realy cute ...
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nxt mrng at taayam aparmnt..taani was tnsd abt her bhai..he doesn't knw wer he is...she has no clue abt his bro...she cryng ..her nose has already became red...she didnt sleep last n8 ..she was wry abt his bhai...she wasa ngry ..sad..worried .
taani2 herself:hey krshnaji pata nahi bhai kaha hey ,,but pls where evr he may be...pls he shld get hrut..pls krshna ji...

ATsharey's apartment rey is really worrid abt his baby sistr ...as she was miss 4r last n8..
rey 2 himslef: oh god shar..wer r u dear?am really worry?u didn't take phn aslo ...pls come home soon me &mumy r worid abt u ...dear..oh god i hope ki meri behan kahi bi ho tok ho...dats it..

jst thn taani calls 2 shaorn but as her phn is at home rey pick it...
taani(cryng):shar ..am really worrid yaar...
rey(hearng her cryng now he is more worried): hey taanu wat happnd is evrythng okay?bolo taanu pls ..
taani:reyyy..aapp?
rey:hey taanu i mean taani i have 2 talk 2 u ..me kya tumara ghar aasakthahu?
taani :ya...
rey went 2 taani's flat...taani opns de door &he comes insde..
rey: ru okay ?kya huva y r u cryng ?is evrthng is f9?
taani jst hug rey as tght as much she can...and was still sobng badly..rey hugd her back...
rey(brkng de hug):taanu wat happnd ..is evrythng okay?
taani:no rey nthng is okay ...bro didn't come 2 home snce last n8..
rey:ur bro too?(cnfusd)
taani:wat do u mean by u bro too?
rey :my sis is also miss since last n8..
taani :wat?shar is miss?and u didn't me til now...?(now angry at him)
rey:taanu its not de tme 2 be angry okay?let thnk wer did dis both go..
taani:hey rey kahi ayasa tho nahi ki wo dono sath me kogaye?
rey:may be .hosakitha hey..hey do u have any shar's classmats numbr?
taani:yupe..meri paas simmi ki numbr hey..ek sec(gve him her numbr&he calls her...)
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simmi:hello ..who dis?
rey:hello me sahron ki bhai rey hu..
simmi:ohtum bolo kuch kam hey kya?
rey:acutvly wo shar kal raat se ghar nahi ayeha..do have any abt wer is she?
simmi :no ..sry but sayadi swayam hogi..becos dey both r prtns in botny prjct..
rey :oh ..kk thank 4r de info bye..
simmi :any tme..bye

rey:taani wo keharahithi ki swayam aur sharon dono kisi projct me partnrs..so may be dey both r 2gthr...
taani:ya may be..but jst hope ki wo dono tek oh..dats it..
rey:ya..jst hope..now feel sum relf as swayam is wid my sis..i thnk she will not face any probmls..
taani:don't worry ..my bro will take care...
both lukd at each othr..and smild...
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der it ends...i knw its was not gud...but pls adjst...
PRECAP:
rey gets 2 knw abt taani's feelng...
rey:mey tum si ye bolwakehi rahunga ki u luv me...tho miss.Taani shekhawat get ready 2 say i luv u ..
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swaron get der way out de jungle..&got on to de road...strts askng 4r lft...

snlt readr pls atleast hit lyk..&pls cmmnt aftr readng..needall ur feed backs...
luv ,
renu..
Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago

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