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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#961

RAS SP ...THIS WAS A HEARTBREAKING TALE [UPDATE] OF TWO

LOVERS

BOTH ARE IN A DILEMMA

BOTH ARE IN DENIAL

BOTH ARE IN LOVE

BOTH FEEL A VACUUM WITHOUT THE OTHER

BOTH NEED EACH OTHER

BOTH WANT EACH OTHER

BOTH NEED EACH OTHER

BOTH OWN EACH OTHER

BOTH ARE NOTHING TO EACH OTHER [THEY ASSUME]

YET THEY ARE EVERYTHING TO EACH OTHER

HER ANSWER KILLED A FEW BUTTERFLIES IN MY TUMMY 😛

LOVE IS NOT LOVE UNTIL IT IS FELT

THANKS FOR THE PM

KEEP ME ON HIGH ALERT

KKKA

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Arshi94

@Arshi94

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#962

Aww le...

This was such n adorable update...

Every scene was just upto the mark...

I really liked those lines of not belonging n yet belonging...

Arya is such a sweetheart,...

Anjali is as loving as always...

Payash are so adorable...

Oh...the last scene took my breath away...

Waiting eagerly for the next one...

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#963

Finally got a chance to edit :)

I don't know about you, but I think you should write more often when you are tired & sleepy :) Not that your other chapters aren't great but this one stood out by far... Not sure why, your writing style was still the same but the content itself made a huge difference...

A reflective Arnav is what I have been missing since long. Banda never seemed to think about their relationship at all. It was all about either pursuing Khushi for physical reasons or for having her around because she made him feel good & kept Arya happy, but he never seemed to want to do something for her or mean something more to her... Heck, only the previous night, he offered to start "officially" dating her, that seemed like a huge concession on his part almost as if he was doing her a big favor...

Now in such a tragic situation wherein he wanted to console her, he was left feeling absolutely helpless. He was NOBODY to her. Serves him right. He for the first time realized, no matter how much Khushi may mean to him & his darling daughter, without an official name to their relationship, she was still a nobody to him. I just loved that moment of epiphany. He is sooo stubborn, not until it hit where it hurts most, did he realize that he has no rights over her... Sach mein, kitna dheet hai!!!

He even felt like an outsider between Khushi & his daughter... I loved the way Khushi explained Payal's situation to Arya & begged her to take of Payal in her absence. The whole convo was ultra-cute. Khushi wanted to share Bubbly with Payal, just like Payal shared her parents with Khushi was so heartfelt.

Loved the way Anjali stepped into help Khushi. Arnav briefing Anjali as what all to do, was real nice. Poor guy, he needs an assistant in his absence to take care of his Khushi. I just loved the line...

"He wanted to sit besides Khushi right now, take her to visit her father in Lucknow, foot the bills without seeing her creasing her forehead for money, be with her when she needed him. But he had no right over her. He was helpless."

Anjali warning Arnav about any PDA at the airport was super smart. She effectively killed two birds with one stone IMO. First, she protected Khushi from a potential scandal & second drove home the point to Arnav, w/o an official name, Khushi really is nothing to him & he really has no official hold or right over her, even to console her when she defo needs him. Me super liked that bit. 😃

Anjali helping out Arnav with the Gurgaon issue using Shyam's & Aman's help was again very smart. So Anjali secretly acts as a conduit to help iron out issues for Arnav using Shyam's resources. I have a feeling Arnav will be finding out soon from Aman where he gets all this info. The cat will be out of the bag pretty soon. :)

Loved the whole family rallying up behind the Gupta sisters in order to help them. Starting from naniji, to mamaji & finally mamiji. Loved the way the elders sorted out the problems for them. And Aakash miyan ki toh chandi hi chandi hai in dino 😃 Glad to see Payal finally giving in :)

About the last line, I think I may have some idea as to why Khushi was bawling her eyes out to Arnav. Have her parents brought up that Government vaala rishta again?? Are they pressurizing her to marry soon?? Is that why she needs Arnav?? Is that the storm coming up?? Could be...

Please, please next chapter jaldi se update karo, now you can't keep us hanging on that cliffhanger for a week, not fair :(

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago

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zineb

@Olicity2124

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#964

First of all , thnq u 4 pm , really was very happy whn I chek my inbox & find ur pm 😃

Now abt the update , I luvd it 😊

Luved anji in this update !!

Luvd khushi & arya prt , they portryyy the mothr daughtr bondd 😊 Arya is such a sweetheart!!

Arnav & arya bond is just out of this world!!

Now abt arshi , they realised its not just a desire , its somethng else , something more thn tht.

She is missing him , aww 😳 "Do u want something" and she says ..."You" 😳 😊

Felt bad for arnav , he was helpless , he wanted to do many things bt just cant " he is nuthing to her" 😭

Payal & akash are getting close now !! so sweet 😊

Calm b4 storm , wht is the storm Pleeejjj pleeej update sooonnn !!

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#965

Stop doubtin ur ability ! For me this has to be the bessst update..im soo happpy to see hw arnavs longing for khushi..and the fact *iam no one to her" im expectin somethin huge to chnge this statemnt..u knw what i mean ya ;)

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#966

they really cant stay away from each other

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#967

Poor Khushi ! she is missing Arnav soo much !

Awesome update

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#968

Yay! I log-in to IF for a break and see your update! :-D It was a beautiful and touching update. Very well written!

I've to tell you something. Something not exactly concerning this update.

"He wanted to sit besides Khushi right now, take her to visit her father in Lucknow, foot the bills without seeing her creasing her forehead for money, be with her when she needed him. "

Those lines gave me goosebumps. You know why? Because it touched on something I would want to do for my family...for the people I love. I want to be able to do all that and much more.

Sometimes, we fall into our routines so mechanically that we tend to forget the reason behind all our efforts. All we require is a small reminder to bring us back on track...to not let out time and efforts go in vain. And you did exactly that. Thank you. Thank you so much for that!

Edited by avantika_2012 - 12 years ago

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#969

loved how khushi wanna arya t give payal a chance and made her understand.. aakash was der for payal.. anjali went all d way to help khushi... arnav was der wid her all thru and both miss each other badly!! loved the update!

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#970

Us of course it is not the best update, but it is THE BEST update, I always liked the updates where all caracters share thier part. In this update everybody was there, of course I missed Shyam rocking Anjali. Payal with Akash, Anjali giving tiff speech to her brother, kushi opening her past in sutil way that a kid can understand and make her to accept her jiji. Mami oh she got one dialogue which is knocking pinch, Nani initiating the whole process, mamaji explaining the life is related to the work and melted the stubborn Payal. Do have to tell more to make you understand this is also one of your best updates?