ArHi FF: Finding Solace#4 *Completed*

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@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1011

u sent me to the aww land from the very 1st part of the update. arya is such a swtheart. 🤗
mamiji rocks 👍🏼
the way u portrayed arnav's helplessness..👏
the illness of babuji certainly worked for payash arshi. arnies realised he needed to b someone in khushi's life and the phn convos just helped their relationship grow. I almost forgot abt my wish of hospital hug, almost.😉
and the last part. aye hayeee.. 😃 *tht reminded me even we need to see arnav 😳*
ab propose kar he do arnav..😛

PS. i am sure many have alrdy mentioned. lemme say too, we loveee longer updates. so feel free to write as much as u want and even a bit more for us.. 😳

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Jay

@Sharaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1012

Y the hell u stops here dear...

am as agitated as ASR...

Arnav is fighting himself to comfort Khushi...

He cant even able to utter a word to her... poor soul...

Anju is so matured & unique in ur story...

Payash seems to come bit closer to their hearts...

Arya-Khushi bonding goes to another level...

May i expect Payal Arya patch up up coming...

Loved bhery much Mami ji's interupption then...

home is place where our heart is...so true...

They r missing each other like hell...

cant wait for next chap...

update soon dear...

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arshiyana

@arshiyana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1013

now its my turn "You"

why you stopped there? what happened to her...ummm can't wait

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1014

Wow Arya and Khushi conversation.. Its wow.. I like it very much. Arya's promise I wint cry this time and promise her that too.
Arnav Anjali Khushi trio now knew Arshis relationship and open about it.
No hidings.
Both thinking same home is where heart belongs to..

And now the realization of Their relationship means nothing he means nothing in front of her family its kiling him.

I am waiting for the day Arya will call her mamma for her not for others and not to show or not because others asked her but because she wants... Like that movie she will make her mom not chachi and ask her Papa to marry her.
Payash came more close.
Anjali is Anjali. Like her.
Same time practical and emotional.

Storm what storm? Crappy update .. Change the meaning? I think so because its superb upate.

Final OS means what? You are not planning to write here.. Nit abymore?
After the fairytale you didnt start new one? Why?

Tanks for pm

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1015

To good fantastic.
Payash Ki gadi patri par as rahi hai. Slowly slowly but yes more interested in Arshi. What will be Arnav's answer for khushi??

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1016

Oh Ras! u always manage to deliver the best thing in ur whole update in the last part... that 'You' was so emotional and so heart-wrenching!

they both have fallen hard for each other and yet are not yet capable of voicing it themselves, but they have done everything else other than actually speaking the exact words.

The way Arnav has managed, arranged everything for his Khushi, the way both of them are so missing each other and missing them being together in Santivan...u have written these so beautifully!

Loved the update... i said it before but have to say it again...that last phone convo takes the prize.

i am sure Khushi's Babuji is alright, and that it was just Khushi missing him or rather her wish to share the joy of her Babuji being alright with HIM only...(fingers crossed!)

Loved the way Anjali has managed everything on behalf of Arnav.

loved Akash and Payel's convo and then the hug too.

Update soon and thanks for the PM.

Will be looking forward to the next update as iam sure hoping Arnav will not be able to stay in Delhi with Khushi saying that to him.

Take care

Swati

p.s. The way it bugged Arnav whenever he thought or heard that he was noone to Khushi made me so glad...he really needs a push!

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#1017

interesting..nice..continue soon..😊

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1018

Saiyu! This was def not one of your best piece! THIS IS YOUR BEST PIECE according to me that is! :)

I loved it! It had everything in it! Simple but yet you have to read between the lines to understand the real meaning of everything!!

Arya is a gem! I'm sure this period will get payal and her close! Akash and payal have already moved that step which is inevitable! Loved how he took care of her!

Home is where the heart is and heart is with the other person! One confessed it the other realized it but now since u said its the calm before the storm what exactly have you planned?

And aman will get what answers now? Whats shyam working on??
I'm happy maami silenced both of them and anjali is the elder sister now :)

Cheers

*typos so edited :P*

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 12 years ago

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horizon123

@horizon123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1019

Great update. Loved the way u are slowly making Arnav realize that marriage is something that will make him someone related to Khushi. Though he has not yet realized it, eventually he will. Loved the ending, so cute.😊

Thanks for the pm.