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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Wow sakshi it is awesome beautiful spelendid, masttt hai re
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
All the edits n poem were amazing
N Abi ur os
Wow swayam's love letter was soo romantic ahem ahem u have experienced kya?
Loved the os
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
lovely OS pujan, it is a delight to read your OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
nice os yar
simple nd also lovable os
i see all edits, poems
thy r awesome yar
swayam love letter was fab aur sharon ne hi propose kar diya
love d os
Edited by Suni1986 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

One Short!

Though I am a shantanu fan…I have neva thought of writing something on swaron….purely on swaron…

This isz my first swaron work….

Let's go to the update without my bakwass…

The night

I was on bed…seeing his photo…his eyes were talking to me….I was unconditionally in love with him ….i was missing him so much…that is a different thing, that it was just an hour he left me..but I cannot stay without him…not even for second…I want to be with him…forever…it should be only death which can tear us apart….love is what he does to me … love is want I do to him…. The day he proposed me in the canteen with just one rose, red rose… wow…. I was in white, and the red rose was matching my dress too…

Sharon got up from her bed…went to the music player….and "ishq wala love" started playing….and the diva's leg started dancing..on the music…with the spin...she was next to her wadrob..she opend the door..and took the red rose in her hand….her lips lightly touched the rose…she felt as if it was swayum itself…

She than started walking to towards her window, it was open and the air blew…it was like she could smell swayum…the air brought him with it…and so it was…swayum climbed the pipe..and was standing on the window…sharon thought she is dreaming…and she kissed his cheeks….swayum blushed to the core…

Abhi Sharon bina batiye..kiss karegi…toh kya hoga?

Swayum…took her face…and his lips touched her lips…it was intense, yet smooth…she was now in shock….she opened her eyes…

Sh: tum!

Sw:yes…maine!

Sh: yahan…kyun kaise…kab?

Sw: andar nahi bulaugi….gir gaya toh?

Sh: come in…

Swayum got in…

Sh: tum..yahan..kyuin..kaise…

Swayum put his finger on her lips and asked her to be quiet…she went numb…when he touched her lips..she started walking backwards…and swayum was walking with her…it was in so ryhm… she stopped as it was theend…and swayum was this close..that even air couldn't pass through them…he kissed her again….her cheeks went pink this time…she also got lost in the kiss…

Sw: maine puccha chaand se ke koi hasi hai mere yaar se…chand ne kaha chandni ki kasam koi nahi koi nahi

The lights fades off….

This is not the end to night… they toh had a really long night …it is just an end to the os…

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M done….

Hope you like it!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
awesum os..
swayam ... love letter..
soo cute..
loved it..
amazing..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
res

unres

awesomee os👏

loveddd ittt😃
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
awesm os...sweetu..
loved it
sharon n swayam... were too good...
simply ... loved it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
amazing work sis...
first time me itna acha attempt write more deffinatly all will loved ur works...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
ur AMAZING shivani...
coming to OS it was sweet n romantic...
loved it...
mujhe toh dictionary chahiye...
tumhe praise karne mujhe naye words doodhna padega...
love u dear...keep writing...

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