Arshi SS: The Wrong Name - EPILOGUE - ** Awarded **

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iritz

@iritz

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Super Update... as usual girl !!! Love where the story is going.. I like the way Arnie's brain is finally working and he is ready with an answer for Nani... Shyam is getting creepier... hopefully Khushi develops some much needed brains here !!!

Loved the way u included Daiyya Ho and Rabba Vey... Mmm... takes u back to good old IPK Days... Dammit !!!😆

Please include the infamous... 'ab kya bolun main' as well... somewhere, somehow !😛

Edited by iritz - 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Awesome update!! I loved how Arnav reassured her with just a few words & gestures. Love when he took her to his room & told her to think of any changes she would want. I love this Arnav!!!!

Shyam is puck worthy!! When he touched her arm I had a knee jerk reaction. Gross! I'm glad Arnav watched him leave the office, I hope he notices something is wrong before Khushi does.

Table footsie: Arnav = Sexy

Shaym = cringe worthy

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

nice part...

so arnav n khushi sort out their problem...

i want their confession soon...

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

loving this story. shyam is so creepy omg just like in the real show. love arhi's bond

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meghavn

@meghavn

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

ahaa... brilliant update... love the way u have made it so natural that we can visualize everything... as usual can't wait for more 😉

Loved these lines -

Blissfully unaware of his almost-kiss, oops! I meant, almost-miss, he whistled as he sprinted up to the front door.

Daiyya Ho! He really loved this tune.

Edited by meghavn - 12 years ago

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

You know this is what it would have been if the terrace scene had not happened - well also if the makers were smart enough to use the potential of the story the right way!

I like the bond Arnav and Khushi share here - it reeks of something special

Well, Shyamji is quite the creep here, isn't he? But Arnav Singh Raizada seems to be the sharp business man his character is supposed to be...so Im thinking it is Raizada over Jha anyday

Great update

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

I'm loving how you're intertwining so many situations together. Hmm, Arnav is frowning. I wonder if he's picked up on the scent.

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ArSh23

@ArSh23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

awesome update! This Shyam is really getting disgusting! He is so obsessed with Khushi. I hope Arnav realizes it soon! I always wished on the show that he would have noticed it. Arnav needs to tell his family soon that he wants to marry her. Can't wait to read the next part!

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sheanuzz

@sheanuzz

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Loved the table footsie! Wish there was at least some of the romance in actual show that you have described 😉 Can't wait for the next part already... Greedy we are 😛